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Approved Starship Harrison Class Heavy Cruiser

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
4000m Very High: 34
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Exotic Matter: The ethereal nature of the metal makes it near weightless despite being and looking dense within the pocket dimension of dream. In realspace it can be grasped and there is a steady supply able to be used by Krass. When experimenting with the extent the design that has been refitted.
  • Choushin Class Uneti: The heart of the ship and a gift from the commonwealth for the jedi in their forging. Krass has one of the younger generation trees installed allowing the jedi to contact without communications other choushin class ships.
  • Seven Points: Throughout the ship, the amnioid fluid flows like a bloodstream throughout it which is duel edged. It it like a circulatory system that keeps the techno-organic systems of the ship flowing and feeds into the seedlings that are being grown for children ships. It shares a mitochondrial cell connecting the ships to the mother and are organelles that will take in nutrients then break them down and create energy rich molecules for the ship. The seven main points are points that can be accessed to connects with the ship so it is always running smoothly.
  • Bonding: The trees are finicky and require a jedi to bond with them locking out others. The duel nature of the starfighters sees them using a dwarfed tree intentionally small and within the control systems. The pilot bonds with it as the ship interior is grown.
  • Duel structure: Designed two fold, the first is the exterior exoskeleton that gives the appearance of a standard starfighter. The interior itself usually measuring in the module of the ship itself is techno-organic with the tree. Encased in the framework and superstructure of the exoskeleton for protection.
  • Advanced Systems: Designed with several notable systems installed on the shipsto improve their capabilities and turn the jedi into a needed operational fighter.
    • Saotome Advanced Tracking System: Designed to give hyperspace tracking capabilities to the ships systems.
    • Advanced Whammy Drive: Whammy Drives create an interdicition pulse that can trip the safeties of ships hyperdrives stalling them. They can't keep a fleet from jumping but for a moment those within range of the pulse can be stalled.
    • Saotome Car'das: Designed for micro jumps with high levels of precision and capabilities.
    • Cater Phalanx: Designed to strengthen the shielding of a squadron. A small team can bunch together and project a shield over themselves for additional protection.
    • Kyberite: At the heart of the jedi fighter giving it a mini lightside nexus and aura that enhances the jedi ewithin and creates a small bubble making darkside influence over the ships harder.
    • Laminanium: Designed like a Quellian ship the hull of the orbital platforms has a thin layer of the material to improve repairs and over time depending on the amount of damage it is able to patch itself up.
    • Advanced Hyperdrive: Designed with an experimental hyperdrive that is meant to give them some of the fastest flight times across all of the galaxy.
    • Saotome Rhion: For the more limited production ships, the Rhion can upgrade and repair a ship by grabbing materials and breaking them down.
    • WorldArmor-4 defensive shield: A projector set up to be projected around the ship and let it function like a shield gate when defending planets.
  • Lightside Aura: The choushin design is meant to make sure this is a lightside vessel. it radiates the lightside of the force to repel darksiders from entering and most who touch the darkside feel sick when inside of the ship. When on the ground it makes a bubble of force energy with the light about ten meters. The kyber crystal heart of the ship lets it emanate the force.
WEAKNESSES
  • Agena: Designed with the Agena to radiate the lightside of the force so that the academy is a beacon of the lightside to any and all force users.
  • Neural Net: THe neurral net of the academy allows connecting and automating a number of systemsbut for a skilled hacker who can get itno the biocomputers can hack it and cause havoc.
  • Sleg Reactors: Built with a massive series of sleg reactors, the power increase to allow the station to be mobile if even slowly can cause massive build up of energy that can cause the engines to explode.
  • Protective Qualities: Largely non protective in qualities as it doesn't fully adhere to the rules of physics. The metal looks dense and like it would be highly protective but it isn't.
  • Exotic Particles: Largely unknown and not seen in the galaxy before. It isn't invincible nor is it really strong but it reacts violently near dark and anti-matter which can disrupt and destroy it or even cause it to rupture and disintegrate.
  • Force Nullification: Composed of solidified energy from a pocket dimension. Within a force nullification field it becomes heavy. The molecular structure is super dense but able to skirt and not adhere to physics like gravity normally. Without the force to preform this it becomes almost impossibly heavy to lift.
  • Kyber crystals: Using the design of the finalizer and enhancing the power of the weapons with crystals gives the ships a secondary effect as the crystals used for weapons can be explosive if cracked.
  • Sleg: A powerful energy enhancer, the sleg absorbs and channels the excessive heat generated by the chassis of the speeder. Making them maintain a stronger level of power but also increases the chances that they could explode from the heat.
  • Hive Minded: A benefit in some ways allowing the ships to heal each others internal systems itself but it also means that they share pain. A strange effect is choushin ships can refuse to attack each other.
  • Organic: With the amnioid a skilled force user is able to properly stun and stop the functions in their tracks. As Satele Shan showed the fluid produced by the circuits can be manipulated and used to calm or disable the bodies for a time as long as there is concentration and knowledge of the fluid. Like a blood flow in the body it can be constricted and have build up of waste or gunk that damages the ship like a heart attack or even stroke.
  • Shared Pain: A danger and something felt from the onset and creation of them. The choushin share pain which can affect all of the ships from starfighters to capital ships.
  • Radiates the Lightside of the force like a beacon alerting others to its location.
  • Force Nullification: The ship is seeped in the lightside of the force and such it does not function well when the force is nullified. The choushin itself can be damaged or even die without the force over an extended period of time.
  • Orissa: Designed with the Orissa that is a solid plate covered in drop pods reducing underside defenses and cannon.
DESCRIPTION
Designed for the Silver Jedi after the disappearance of one of their main ship manufacturers. With that small loss there was a need for new ships that could fill in the roles of combat capable craft but Saotome an extension of Sasori was not exactly the best at it. THeir primary craft were high function, self sustaining utility compared to straight up combat crafts that are able to attack everything. The second step in the series would be an important things, they needed something that could become a heavy hitter ship. Sacrificing speed despite with the higher performance engine which still gave it some speed but the additional changes were to make the squadrons in the hanger smaller using the more compacted and focused jedi starfighters. Along with the droids needed as it was loaded heavy with weapons that will punch anything put in front of it. The armor was another thing as the Harrison class was set up to be just above a glass cannon with a high firing arc they would be able to use.

With the recovery of it from the rangers drydocks on Felucia Willa sought to get the ship refit and overhauled. Bringing it in line with many others she developed with the new reborn Paladins. Soldiers who would aid the jedi navy and fleet at the enclaves. The Harrison class was changed into a heavy model dreadnaught to back up the trinity of ships of the line.. with heavy firepower, fighters and armor. THe two massive hangers allow it to have support crafts with transports and vehicle carriers. The choushin within the ship can make it announced to the senses of others but it is that much harder for the darksiders to invade and board it. The Paladins can use it and the Rac as a base of operations for their endeavors and operations.
 
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RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review
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Starwars Chaos:
Pending initial review
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
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WITH DEV THREADS
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SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review
 
[member="Willa Isard"]

The gun stats are within the realm of reasonable, compared to our Victory example ship. Compared to the Victory, you've dropped defenses 4 points and added 2 squadrons. We don't have formal, rigorous tradeoff ratios, but this seems fine to me.

Three points of issue:

  • 1000m+ ships require a 10-post dev thread. Either drop it below 1000m by some token amount, or gimme 10 posts at 200 words apiece.
  • The Saotome Flower is a 42m-long deployable. How many of these are you carrying, and how? You'll need to consider this question for your other two ongoing ship subs as well.
  • Your Performance Booster states that it doubles or triples capital ship speed. How do you intend to represent this in your speed ratings, such as for fleeting purposes? You'll need to consider this question for your other two ongoing ship subs as well.
 
[member="Jorus Merrill"]

Edited the size down for it, will do the same for the others.
4 of the flowers on a ship that size sound alright?
FOr the engine booster added a speed for normal and for combat
 
[member="Willa Isard"] [member="Jorus Merrill"]
The performance booster has been re-approved, you may continue with judging the submission.
 
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