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Approved Starship Naare's Class Jedi Interceptor

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Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To update and upgrade Sasori's ships and fighters
  • Image Source: Guardian Mantis
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: My Subs
  • Primary Source: Guardian Mantis
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Advanced Systems: Designed with several notable systems installed on the shipsto improve their capabilities and turn the jedi into a needed operational fighter.
    • Saotome Advanced Tracking System: Designed to give hyperspace tracking capabilities to the ships systems.
    • Advanced Whammy Drive: Whammy Drives create an interdicition pulse that can trip the safeties of ships hyperdrives stalling them. They can't keep a fleet from jumping but for a moment those within range of the pulse can be stalled.
    • Saotome Car'das: Designed for micro jumps with high levels of precision and capabilities.
    • Cater Phalanx: Designed to strengthen the shielding of a squadron. A small team can bunch together and project a shield over themselves for additional protection.
    • Laminanium: Designed like a Quellian ship the hull of the orbital platforms has a thin layer of the material to improve repairs and over time depending on the amount of damage it is able to patch itself up.
    • Advanced Hyperdrive: Designed with an experimental hyperdrive that is meant to give them some of the fastest flight times across all of the galaxy.
WEAKNESSES
  • Neural Net: THe neural net of the academy allows connecting and automating a number of systemsbut for a skilled hacker who can get itno the biocomputers can hack it and cause havoc.
  • Sleg: A powerful energy enhancer, the sleg absorbs and channels the excessive heat generated by the chassis of the speeder. Making them maintain a stronger level of power but also increases the chances that they could explode from the heat.
DESCRIPTION
Designed as a base for more advanced products and as a way to test out a new design. The old model and styled guardian mantis that Damorian found, recreated and sold with a number of other ships was designed with travel in mind. The dimensions more rounded out and made standard. The interior systems set up so that behind the three man ship it can better function. The ship wide neural net created and sold by Meran mechanics to work with Sasori on their products allow one person to use the ship wihtout a gunner or co-pilot.

The other standardized designed allowed for the improved upon ion encumbrance package to be used and built into the tips of the fins for moving around. The original speed and small size letting the ship travel around quickly and set itself up for better shots with the majority of forward mounted weapons. The ship is made to be small and fast but to protect itself and make sure it is a better area that a pilot could stay on the ship for a time. To add to it and work with the equipment that Damorian recovered with the ships they worked on. A bomblet generator was tied in directly to the ships reactor.

The generator can produce and make the energy bombs produced slowly drawing power from the system so the interceptor can save on weight of heavy warheads. The energy bombs are lighter weight able to generate slowly and be stored ten at a time with more being produced slowly over the course of time in a fight. The Guardian interceptor is made to be fast and move around in a fight. With a chance for the ships to move around and not take up hanger space on a ship thanks to a built in hyperdrive.

Improvements over time were made specifically to livability... making it so while it is a fighter by technicality it can function almost in a squadron by itself. The ship itself was balanced out in its areas but given the needed upgrades. Shielding, weapon systems and engines... but none were made to be better then the other. instead its interception capabilities rely on its longer range weapons and advanced systems for tracking and surprise tactics. It can outpace some other ships but it can also keep track of many others.
 
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Matsu Ike said:
Armament: 5
Matsu Ike said:
  • 1x Laser Cannon
  • 1x Bomblet Generator
  • 3x Ion Encumbrance Package
When mounted on a fighter it takes up space for torpedo tubes and can only track one target at a time unless the tag is disabled.

From the Ion Encumbrance Package submission
Armament: Rating 8
2 Laser Cannons
2 Concussion missile launchers (2 each)

From the Starship Information & Templates page, Starfighter Template - Interceptor (A-Wing) Example
Your armament is not extremely light (10 is average). You have 1 Laser Cannon, 1 Bomblet Generator (Heavy Ordnance), and 3 Ion Encumbrance packages (Torpedos) versus the example template which offers armament rating 8 with 2 laser cannons and 2 Concussion Missile Launchers (Torpedos). As two laser cannons equates to a single torpedo or heavy ordnance, you already have more than the 8 showcased in the example.

Please raise your armament rating to 11 or higher to match what you have listed in your submission. Here's an example of an armament rating 10 and an armament rating 12 that we also provide as cookie-cutter examples in the template:
Armament: Rating 12
2 Laser Cannons
2 Proton torpedo launchers (4 each)
2 Concussion missile launchers (4 each)
Proton bomb bay (2 bombs)

(TIE Bomber Example)


Armament: Rating 10
4 Laser Cannons
2 Proton torpedo launchers (4 each)

(X-Wing Example)


Matsu Ike said:
Engine Suite

Matsu Ike said:
Ship Suite
These are not approved submissions. Placing submissions which are currently under review as parts of another submission and submitting it to the factory for review is identical to intentionally attempting to mislead factory judges, which is a violation of our factory rules - do not do this again.



Matsu Ike said:
Sasori Synthweave
What is the purpose of including the Sasori Synthweave as a part of this starship?
 
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Armament edited
Sorry, I have included pending subs before and it wasn't a problem but I'll avoid it in the future.
The synthweave is flavor and mostly to keep it part os Sasori's ships.
 
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