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Approved Starship Bes'drahr-class Heavy Cruiser

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B E S ' D R A H R
C L A S S
"Let them hear our roar."
- Romul Saxon


OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To create a heavy cruiser for the Mandalorian Enclave.
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  • Canon Link: N/A
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  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Iron Dragon: The Bes'drahr-class is a beast of a ship, packing the power of a conventional star destroyer packed into the frame of a heavy cruiser.
  • The Best Defense: The entire design of the heavy cruiser centers around its speed and maneuverability, and the Bes'drahr's defense is more centered around its small size as well as its speed and maneuverability, making it difficult to hit with heavy-hitting anti-capital weapons in the first place.
WEAKNESSES
  • Vulnerable to Damage: The Bes'drahr-class has substandard defensive potential, a result of a majority of systems being diverted over to armaments and propulsion. This means that while it is fast, light, and heavy-hitting, it is not able to directly tank a lot of incoming damage.
  • Large Thrusters: The very large and very visible thruster components of the Bes'drahr means that they are easy to prioritize for enemies trying to cripple the heavy cruiser.
DESCRIPTION
The Iron Dragon, the backbone of the Mandalorian Enclave, and the symbol of Mandalorian power in the wilds of the Frontier: the Bes'drahr-class Heavy Cruiser.

Designed to be the main capital ship of the Mandalorian Enclave, the Bes'drahr is a powerful & deadly-fast heavy cruiser that well earns its name, 'Iron Dragon.' The heavy cruiser has an armament that can go toe-to-toe with, or even outclass, standard Star Destroyer-class capital ships. With weapon emplacements like powerful mass driver cannons, quad turbolaser cannons, heavy ion cannons and missile launchers, the Bes'drahr can rain fire on enemy ships and leave nothing but cinders.


In the belly of the beast sits the massive hangar bay complex that is designed to carry up to four squadrons of starfighters and support craft. The standard complement an Iron Dragon is outfitted with consists of three MNV-56
Keldab-class Dropship squadrons; however, this configuration can be altered depending on a ship's mission or needs. The Iron Dragon is designed to be a mobile army, able to wreck fleets in-orbit while it transports Mandalorians and equipment to the surface to wage war. It's also designed for atmospheric maneuvering, meaning that flying in-atmosphere does not hinder or decrease in any way the speed and maneuverability of the heavy cruiser.

All that being said, the
Bes'drahr is not without its design flaws. The Iron Dragon has substandard defensive systems, with most physical space or power output directed towards the heavy cruiser's propulsion and armament systems. In addition, its large thrusters make for a tempting target for enemy ships and starfighters, and Iron Dragons have to be conscious of overexposing them. However, the Bes'drahr embraces the philosophy of 'the best defense is a great offense,' and most Mandalorian commanders are drilled to hit and destroy enemy ships before they have a chance to return any serious damage. In addition, the high speed and maneuverability of the heavy cruiser makes it a harder target to hit altogether and allows it to outmaneuver opponents more consistently.

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Submission Name: MNV-17 Kyr’am-class Strike Frigate
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Submission Name: MNV-16 Y’ivra-class Interdictor
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Submission Name: MNV-17 Bes’drahr-class Heavy Cruiser
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HPI AI; Terraris Command
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The Quartermaster The Quartermaster

Everything looks good, but the problem is same with the other subs, please delete the following submissions from the this one or change the production scale to Semi-unique:
  • MXC-T24 Selvig Communications Suppression ModuleM
  • XC-T23 Helfringr Stealth Field Module
  • MXC-T22 Oberyn Stealth Shroud
  • MRS-03X Aergard Field Defense Module
  • MXC-T25 Vahla Sensor Suite Module
 
HPI AI; Terraris Command
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The Quartermaster The Quartermaster

Update on this? I have to move the thread to the Archive soon according to the Factory policy. I can give you a few more days if you need them, until Sunday (202X.08.21.), to make the necessary edits or indicate that you are asking for a few extra days for this.
 
Submission Name: Bes'drahr-class Heavy Cruiser
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Reason for Factory Modification Request: Submission was archived because I was unable to complete edit requests in time. Unfortunately IRL circumstances prevented me from being able to do this though I am fully willing and planning on complying with said edit requests. Would like to make the requests and resubmit.
 
Submission Name: Ha'rangir-class Star Destroyer
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Reason for Factory Modification Request: Need to add a technology link

Submission Name: Bes'drahr-class Heavy Cruiser
Link to Submission: x
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Need to add a technology link

Submission Name: Ky'ram-class Strike Frigate
Link to Submission: x
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Need to add a technology link

Submission Name: Y'ivra-class Interdictor
Link to Submission: x
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Need to add a technology link

Submission Name: MNV-56 Keldab-class Assault Dropship
Link to Submission: x
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Need to add a technology link
 
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