Aurora Industries

Taeli Raaf · Jun 25, 2014

Aurora Industries

Corporate Headquarters and Regional Offices

Erilnar Campus - The main corporate headquarters for Aurora Industries, located on a sprawling campus near the capital city that incorporates several of the local lakes as both water features and access points to secure data vaults, research facilities, and offices.

Operations

Starship Production
Weapon Production
Droid Production
Cybernetics Production
Starship Component Research and Development
Weapon Component Research and Development
Droid Component Research and Development
Cybernetics Research and Development
Energy Source Research and Development
Nanotechnology Research and Development
Mining and Resource Extraction

Locations

Shipyards

Planetary Location	Shipyard Facilities	Specializations and Product Lines	Thread Established
Widek	Widek Orbital Yard	Starfighters Corvettes	Through the Glass of Business
Valc VII	Valc Imperial Driveyards	Frigates and Cruisers Capital Ships	A Strange Meeting Project: Imperial Krayt
Effekt	Stormson Orbital Yard	Frigates and Cruisers	The Secret of the Ruined City
Sev Tok	Gustav Orbital Yard	Civilian Starships Starfighters Corvettes Frigates and Cruisers	The Earth will Crack and Burn - Dominion of Sev Tok
Makeb	Redraven Orbital Yard	Frigates and Cruisers Capital Ships	Makeb Me a Deal
Vergesso Asteroid Field	Stonefox Orbital Yard	Capital Ships	A Deal with the Wolves
Kesh	Korsin Driveyards	All Ship Types	Beauty and Business A Shipyard Needs Ships to Make
Saleucami	Aurora Mesa Orbital Yards	All Ship Types	Re-firing the Old Foundry
Rishi	Songbird Driveyards	All Ship Types	Welcome to the New Age
Iskalon	Aurora Wave Orbital Yard	Frigates and Cruisers	Welcome to the New Age
Hast	Hast Orbital Yards	All Ship Types	There is Always to Expand
Nubia	Aurora Nubia Star Drives	Civilian Ships Starfighters Corvettes Frigates and Cruisers	In a Nubian Moment
Attahox	New Life Orbital Yard	All Ship Types	Engine of Industry
The Foundry	Foundry Dockyard 5	Capital Ships	The Foundry; Part 5
Kol Huro	Aurora CDF Naval Yards	All Ship Types	One Small Step
Scillal	Aurora Centrality Yards	All Ship Types	Fast and Hidden
Carida	Ord Sigma Naval Complex	All Ship Types	GR Contract: Aurora Industries
Pluthan Asteroid Field	Aurora Shadow Yards	All Ship Types Secret Project Starships	An Ascension
Kriselist	Aurora Vanguard Yards	All Ship Types	Our Place Among the Stars
Hosnian Prime	Aurora Starfighter Command	Starfighters	Good Night and Good Luck
Yag'Dhul			Entanglements
Loronar			Entanglements
Bassadro			Entanglements
Belgaroth			Entanglements

Starship Component Research and Development Facilities

Planetary Location	Research Facility	Component Research	Thread Established
Sev Tok	Kainen Research Station	Starship Weaponry Interdictor Technology	Live for the Swarm
Makeb	Raven Energy Labs	Starship Weaponry Starship Reactors	Makeb Me a Deal
Kesh	Taalon Labs	Starship Weaponry Starship Shielding	Beauty and Business
Saleucami	Borealis Complex	All Components	Re-firing the Old Foundry
Iskalon	Chiaki Research Labs	Starship Shielding Starship Armoring	Welcome to the New Age
Nubia	Aurora Nubia Star Drives	All Components	In a Nubian Moment
Scillal	Aurora Centrality Yards	Stealth Technology	Fast and Hidden
Carida	Ord Sigma Naval Complex	All Components	GR Contract: Aurora Industries
Kriselist	Vanguard Complex	All Components	Our Place Among the Stars
Hosnian Prime	Aurora Starfighter Command	All Starfighter Components	Good Night and Good Luck
Bassadro			Entanglements

Weapon Factories

Planetary Location	Factory	Specializations and Product Lines	Thread Established
Effekt	Kullcor Campus	Blaster Weaponry Melee Weaponry	The Secret of the Ruined City
Kesh	Takara Weapon Complex	All Weaponry	Beauty and Business
Saleucami	Borealis Complex	All Weaponry	Re-firing the Old Foundry
Carida	Ord Sigma Naval Complex	All Weaponry	GR Contract: Aurora Industries
Druckenwell	Aurora Druckenwell Weapons	Blaster Weaponry Kinetic Weaponry Particle Weaponry	A Profitable Endeavor
Ghorman	---------------------------	All Weaponry	Entanglements
Maramere	Haunted Straits Facility	Stealth Weaponry Biological and Chemical Weaponry	Entanglements
Aridus	---------------------------	All Weaponry	Entanglements
Indoumodo	Kouhon Complex	Biological and Chemical Weaponry	Entanglements
Dosuun	Aurora Imperial Arms	All Weaponry	--------------------------------

Weapon Component Research and Development Facilities

Planetary Location	Research Facility	Component Research	Thread Established
Effekt	Kullcor Campus	Blaster Weaponry Components Melee Weaponry Components	The Secret of the Ruined City
Saleucami	Borealis Complex	All Weaponry Components	Re-firing the Old Foundry
Jabiim	Minst Research Lab	All Weaponry Components Sianium Enhancement	Crackling Gun
Hosrel XI	Aurora Deepground Lab	Sianium Enhancement	Galvanize the Rock
Carida	Ord Sigma Naval Complex	All Weaponry Components	GR Contract: Aurora Industries
Druckenwell	Aurora Druckenwell Weapons	Blaster Weaponry Components Kinetic Weaponry Components Particle Weaponry Components	A Profitable Endeavor
Tyus Cluster	Aurora Gravity Works	Gravity Weaponry Singularity Weaponry	People of Our Fears

Droid Factories

Planetary Location	Factory	Specializations and Product Lines	Thread Established
Galantos	Bronis Droid Factory	Civilian Droids Combat Droids	Gelin' durin' Business
Kesh	Cetajan Droid Factory	Civilian Droids Combat Droids	Beauty and Business
Saleucami	Borealis Complex	Civilian Droids Combat Droids	Re-firing the Old Foundry Fission
Hypori	Ardik Factory	Combat Droids	Welcome to the New Age
Jabiim	Stratus Factory Complex	Civilian Droids Combat Droids	Stormy Expansion
Carida	Ord Sigma Naval Complex	Combat Droids	GR Contract: Aurora Industries
Druckenwell	Aurora Druckenwell Droids	Combat Droids	A Profitable Endeavor
Kriselist	Vanguard Complex	Civilian Droids Combat Droids	Our Place Among the Stars
Nar Shaddaa	Deep Black Facility	Infiltration and Assassin Droids
Rugosa		Civilian Droids	Entanglements
Beltrix III		Combat Droids	Entanglements

Droid Component Research and Development Facilities

Planetary Location	Facility	Component Research	Thread Established
Saleucami	Borealis Complex	All Droid Components	Re-firing the Old Foundry
Hosrel XI	Aurora Deepground Lab	Sianium Enhancement Droid Power Cells	Galvanize the Rock
Druckenwell	Aurora Druckenwell Research	All Droid Components	A Profitable Endeavor
Kriselist	Vanguard Complex	All Droid Components	Our Place Among the Stars

Cybernetics Research and Development Facilities

Planetary Location	Facility	Dedicated Research	Thread Established
Kriselist	Vanguard Complex	All Cybernetics	Our Place Among the Stars
Druckenwell	Aurora Druckenwell Research	All Cybernetics	Re-purposing and Reformatting
Fondor	Aurora Cyberworks	Civilian Cybernetics	Re-purposing and Reformatting
Geonosis	Hive Cyberworks		Re-purposing and Reformatting
Commenor	Aurora University Annex	Civilian Cybernetics TITAN Program	Forging Othrys
Tatooine	Aurora Jundland Facility	Experimental Cybernetics	Re-purposing and Reformatting
Nar Shaddaa	Deep Black Facility	Experimental Cybernetics TITAN Program NEMESIS Program	Re-purposing and Reformatting

Nanotechnology Research and Development Facilities

Planetary Location	Facility	Dedicated Research	Thread Established
Jen'asha Station - Otherspace	Jen'asha Station	------------------	Treasure Hunt 12: Last Will and Testament of Rave Merrill
Styx	Nightsade Station	------------------	I'm Looking for a Fast Ship

Energy Source Research and Development Facilities

Planetary Location	Facility	Energy Source	Thread Established
Widek	Widek Collider Station	Antimatter	Through the Glass of Business
Valc VII	Caius Station	Antimatter	A Strange Meeting Project: Imperial Krayt
Makeb	Raven Energy Labs	Isotope-5	Makeb Me a Deal
Togoria	Caross Station	Sianium	Galvanize the Past
Melida/Daan	Meteor Station	Sianium	Fires in the Skies Using the Leftovers
Iego	Diathim Station	Sianium	Finding More
Galidraan	Gyre Station	Sianium	Frozen Refinement
Taris	Frellka Station	Sianium	Beware of What Lurks in the Shadows
Hosrel XI	Aurora Deepground Lab	Sianium	Galvanize the Rock
Mygeeto	FrostGem Facility	Siaber Crystals Sianteria	Harnessing

Mines and Resource Extraction Facilities

Planetary Location	Facility	Resource	Thread Established
Galantos	Aurora Chromite Mine	Chromite	Gelin' durin' Business
Alderaan	Feanor Mines	Phrik	Down Down to Goblin Town On the Hunt For... Phrik
Makeb	Raven DPC Mines	Isotope-5	Makeb Me a Deal
Jen'asha Station - Otherspace	Jen'asha Station	Void Stone Otherspace Ores	Treasure Hunt 12: Last Will and Testament of Rave Merrill
Bal'demnic	Aurora Cortosis Mine	Cortosis	Digging Up Some Ore Heavy Mining Time
Gromas 16	Aurora Phrik Mine	Phrik	Phrik It
Jabiim	Aurora Aurek Mines	Various Ores and Metals	Stormy Expansion
Attahox	Aurora Recycling Plant	Salvage	Engine of Industry
Lohopa II	Voraci Mines	Doonium	The Sacred Garden
Enigma Prime	Engima Mines	Adegan Crystals Stygium Crystals	Phantom of the Past

Relevant Contracts and Partnerships

Company/Faction	Terms	Thread Established
Arceneau Trade Company	Supply Ores for Hana Refinery and Develop Otherspace technologies	Meeting the Neighbors
Arceneau Trade Company	Investment in Aurora liquid metal research and applications of the technology	You Always Did Say You Liked a Product Tested
Mara Tibx and Fuels	Supply Otherspace capable hyperdrives for merchant fleet TibannaX supply contract	It's Been a Long Time Phantom of the Past
Primo Victoria	Discounted Components and Starship Systems for Early Access	Atomic
IGBC	Corporate and Financing Umbrella Agreement	Expanding Assets Entanglements
Kainate	Major Supply and Production Partner	----------------------------
Dosuunian Commonwealth	Weapon, Equipment, and Droid/Drone Supplier Absencite Contract	Business Expo and Economic Conference

Rationale: After the conquest of Coruscant, Darth Banshee and a select few others realized that the Sith fleet was outdated and was in need of modernizing to combat the Republic and the other enemies of the Sith. To that end, Banshee and her associates seized several bank assets belonging to the Republic elite that had fled Coruscant in the wake of the Sith invasion of the world. Marching into the Undercity and to other regions of the planet, she persuaded and took control of several shipyards, paying what they were worth and offering jobs to the more competent owners.

But all such things came to an end when it was discovered that Banshee had turned traitor against the Sith and allowing Darth Arcanix and Alexandra Lianne Feanor, as a shadow partner given her standing as a Grey Jedi, to take control after confronting the traitor.

After a series of events, Taeli Rae and the company decided to go in new direction as they expanded further into the Outer Rim. This new direction also meant that, with the death of Alexandra Feanor and the buying of the stocks in Heinrich Serin's possession by Sempra the Hutt, things were changing for the company and it would no longer provide war materials to the Sith, given the unstable nature of the region and its controllers. Re-branded under the name Aurora Industries, the company looked to begin working in new markets and find new partners.

After a great deal of expansion to new sites and into new markets, Aurora Industries also acquired Nubia Star Drives, Inc. along with all of its production sites and products. With that acquisition, Aurora Industries began turning its sights towards even further expansion and brand new projects to catapult it into new heights.

Tier: VI

Description:

Aurora Industries builds military hardware for those who wish to pay for or have a contract with. Each shipyard is geared up to build one product independently of one another. This is so that if a shipyard becomes victim of sabotage, it would only effect that one product. Plus with the builders and droids geared up to build one item they do it better, as it is the only product they know.

This also keeps training costs down, as they only need to learn one aspect of the job.

This does have a downside to how the company operates as well. It's harder for people to get promoted, as each yard is almost independent. Also when new lines come out they source a new place to build it, or moth ball an existing line. This also makes one of special harder to come by, as R&D aspect of the company is focused on building single lines of ships.

While it can be done, it is more expensive due to the nature of retooling a yard for it.

While for the moment concentrating on building a fleet, and technologies to enhance the building of and the ship itself, it will move into other sectors of the military as it expands.

After Aurora Industries came into new ownership, the company shifted slightly. Still producing military hardware and ships for the One Sith and her allies, Arcanix and Alex realized that to grow, they needed to reach beyond that limited demographic. Moving the company away from its state-ownership and into a more private sphere, a restructing occurred. Going along the lines of other competitors, the shipyards were re-organized away from the specialization of one product to producing many, if not all, the hardware Aurora produces.

Also recognizing that phasing out production lines whenever a new product came out of R&D was not the greatest idea, Aurora facilities would manufacture older products for a longer period of time. The R&D budget was also increased to pave the way for multiple projects to be worked on simultaneously to keep newer and better things rolling out.

One thing left over from the Darth Banshee era is the recognition that eventually, the company would need to expand into other aspects of the market.

With the announcement of the company's new direction, Aurora would be providing more equipment for anyone who was willing to pay for or make a contract with the company, if it was deemed suitable by the CEO herself. The company has since established itself in neutral spaces, for now, and has expanded into new fields so they can expand into new markets, using the same business strategy as before, except no longer limited to just the One Sith and their allies.

Owners:

76% Taeli Rae
15% InterGalactic Banking Clan
9% Solan Charr

Subsidiaries:
Vulcan Industries

Pertinent Threads:
http://starwarsrp.ne...eside-property/(establishment of the new company headquarters on the planet Erilnar and the name change to Aurora Industries)
http://starwarsrp.ne...y-and-business/(deal with Solan to take the stock the late Alexandra Feanor held, and the construction of shipyards and a weapon facility on Kesh)
http://starwarsrp.ne...he-old-foundry/(establishment of shipyards, weapon and droid facilities on Saleucami)
http://starwarsrp.ne...ayt-industries/(Sempra was the winner of the auction and thus gained those stocks previously under Alric Kuhn's possession)
http://starwarsrp.ne...usiness-owners/(establishment of shipyards at Rishi, droid facilities on Hypori, and shipyards at Iskalon in TU space)
http://starwarsrp.ne...ormy-expansion/(establishment of the droid and weapon facilities on Jabiim)

Pertinent Threads:
http://starwarsrp.ne...or-a-fast-ship/(for Styx)
http://starwarsrp.ne...683-lacertilla/(for Jen'asha Station)

Company: Aurora Industries
Modification Made: Adding locations and operations
Rationale: Acquired Nubia Star Drives and merging it into existing Aurora operations

Pertinent Threads:
http://starwarsrp.ne...-nubian-moment/(acquired Nubia Star Drives and all it's products and production sites)

Company: Aurora Industries
Modification Made: Adding Locations and Operation
Rationale: Absorbing one of the other companies that Taeli owns, L&L Robotics

Pertinent Dev Threads:

L&L Robotics acquired
Consolidating into Aurora Industries

Tier Up:

Complete a Major Contract.

http://starwarsrp.ne...nus-and-manpha/- Aurora Industries built Galactic Alliance Southern Command in orbit over Terminus, and secured a long-term contract to continue operations for Alliance Command

Sign a contract with three additional player run organizations, one of which must be a major faction OR tier V+ company.

http://starwarsrp.ne...product-tested/- Contract reached with ATC to invest in research on Aurora's Masquerade Droids and their liquid metal research
http://starwarsrp.ne...cksilver-taeli/- Contract to supply Aurora's liquid metal alloys to Archangel Research and Design
http://starwarsrp.ne...t-asking-taeli/- Agreement for Sianium and Otherspace navigation charts between Aurora Industries and Theed Hanger
http://starwarsrp.ne...ic/103861-slip/- Contract for Fa Holdings to produce armor for Aurora Industries' security forces
http://starwarsrp.ne...ango-of-a-deal/- Aurora Industries signed a deal to purchase weapons from Ignus Industries
http://starwarsrp.ne...ipbuilders-orc/- Aurora becomes a supplier of starfighters for ORC forces

Display six examples of company growth in influence and/or finances OR territorial expansion.

http://starwarsrp.ne...izations/page-1- Aurora Industries helped secure and defend Coruscant's vital infrastructure by providing new security droids.
http://starwarsrp.ne...ng-development/- Agreement reached to sell and produce IFW products through Aurora Industries
http://starwarsrp.ne...-instant-rehab/- Expansion of Aurora Industries' Bio-engineering Division to Rhinnal
http://starwarsrp.ne...nd-reformating/- Aurora Industries repurposes the old exo-skeleton division into a new Cybernetics Division
http://starwarsrp.ne...-class-program/- Aurora Industries participates in top-level discussions with GA military leaders and other aligned companies about upgrading the Alliance military
http://starwarsrp.ne...copperline-hex/- Aurora expands operations to the Kriselist system
http://starwarsrp.ne...8-an-ascension/- Aurora discusses the development of a new battlecruiser ship with Firemane Industries at Aurora's secret shipyards in the Pluthan Asteroid Field
http://starwarsrp.ne...om-of-the-past/- Establishment of Adegan mining facilities on Engima Prime in concert with MaraTibX as well as an agreement for TibannaX
http://starwarsrp.ne...sd-discussions/- Summit on the division of old Nubia assets between Aurora, Theed Hanger, and a new iteration of Nubia Star Drives
http://starwarsrp.ne...ellion-edition/- Aurora Security forces take a droid foundry on Mechis III for Aurora's use and obtain data on experiments
http://starwarsrp.ne...forging-othrys/- Aurora Industries expands its Cybernetics Division to Commenor
http://starwarsrp.ne...-piece-of-junk/- Aurora Industries establishes an outpost on Lydrax

Display six uses of company operations.

http://starwarsrp.ne...549-tiny-steps/- Development of the droid brain for the Masquerade Infiltration Droids
http://starwarsrp.ne...644-harnessing/- Creation of the first Siaber Crystals
http://starwarsrp.ne...search-station/ - Use of Company Operations
http://starwarsrp.ne...-star-defender/ - Use of Company Operations
http://starwarsrp.ne...loaking-device/ - Use of Company Operations
http://starwarsrp.ne...-weapon-system/ - Use of Company Operations
http://starwarsrp.ne...vastar-reactor/ - Use of Company Operations
http://starwarsrp.ne...iaber-crystals/ - Use of Company Operations
http://starwarsrp.ne...047-trilamnium/ - Use of Company Operations

Adding Operations: N/A
Adding Locations: Commenor, Kriselist, Mechis III, Lydrax, Mygeeto
Changing Headquarters: If you are changing headquarters, list the new HQ location and the expansion thread.
Other:Adding subsidiary - Vulcan Industries

[SIZE=12pt]Project Galvani[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/71415-power-of-the-past/[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt] (Taeli learns about the old Project Siantide on Obroa-Skai)[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/73102-galvanize-the-past/[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt] (Establishment of Sianium mining facility on Togoria)[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/74611-frozen-refinement/[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt] (Establishment of Sianium refinement facility on Galidraan)[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/75560-finding-more/[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt] (Establishment of Sianium research station in Iego’s debris/asteroid field)[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/75811-sianium/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/76705-sianium-blaster-power-cell/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/77449-beware-of-what-lurks-in-the-shadows/[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt] (Retaking the old Project Siantide site on Taris from rakghouls and turning it into an Aurora facility)[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/76840-crackling-gun/[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt] (Development of Aurora’s first blaster weapon using Sianium)[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/77860-ai-321m-burststreak-heavy-weapon-system/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/73569-using-the-leftovers/[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt] (Establishment of Sianium mining facility on Melida/Daan)[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/78176-ai-gx02-si-plasma-grenade/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/78503-ai-147e-overload-arc-caster/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/78063-galvanize-the-rock/[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt] (Establishment of Sianium refinement facility on Hosrel XI)[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/78975-si-cryo-hybrid-power-core/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/77677-peek-a-boom/[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt] (Raiding a pirate base on Kelsier for stygium to be used in a stealth freighter for transporting the Sianium and other sensitive Aurora projects)[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/78715-fission/[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt] (Development of the first Aurora droid using Sianium as its power source)[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/80378-behemoth-tank-droid/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/80387-fast-and-hidden/[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt] (Development of the Samhein-class Stealth freighter at the Aurora private shipyard at Scillal)[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/80403-samhein-class-stealth-freighter/[/SIZE]

[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE][SIZE=12pt]Obtain the sponsorship of a major faction.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/74985-give-us-a-blindfold-give-us-a-blade/[/SIZE][SIZE=12pt] (Signs a long term contract with the Republic military to supply starships for the navy, along with a large upfront order)[/SIZE]

Modification Made: Changing of operations
Rationale: Decided to drop exo-skeleton operations for cybernetics, and adding Rhinnal as a location for bio-engineering

Pertinent Development Threads

http://starwarsrp.ne...nd-reformating/ (cybernetics)
http://starwarsrp.ne...-instant-rehab/(Rhinnal expansion)

Arage Bao · Jun 27, 2014

Needs more in the rationale and description for such a company. Tag me when it's done.

[member="Darth Banshee"]

Darth Banshee · Jun 28, 2014

edited [member="Jared Ovmar"]

Arage Bao · Jul 2, 2014

I am afraid it will need some more in the description and rationale, and ask someone to check over your grammar, it's going to serve as a potential reference for other people. Tag me when you are done. [member="Darth Banshee"]

sabrina · Jul 2, 2014

[member="Jared Ovmar"] Grammar no can do, no way getting checked over sorry. Though if you can give me some basic pointers where I gone wrong I would be thankful. As for the other two points could you please explain what I am missing

Arage Bao · Jul 3, 2014

In the rationale I want you to go over how exactly you took control over the shipyards, and how you consolidated it in one company.

Description should tell me more about how the company operates, defining its structure, that sort of thing.

Don't worry about the grammar then for now, I will check it over when you are done.

[member="sabrina"]

Darth Banshee · Jul 3, 2014

edited [member="Jared Ovmar"]

Arage Bao · Jul 6, 2014

Alright, looks acceptable. Pending secondary.

sabrina · Jul 6, 2014

Thanks [member="Jared Ovmar"], oh how was my grammar?

Thurion Heavenshield · Jul 6, 2014

[member="Darth Banshee"] - I took the liberty of cleaning up some grammatical errors for you. To be fair, there weren't alot of them, so well done!

Approved.

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