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Approved Starship Advanced Saotome Carrier

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Sala'dine

Admiral of the Ghost Fleet
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To update and upgrade Sasori's ships and fighters
  • Image Source: Avenger's Gallery
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: My Subs
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Advanced Systems: Designed with several notable systems installed on the shipsto improve their capabilities and turn the jedi into a needed operational fighter.
    • Saotome Advanced Tracking System: Designed to give hyperspace tracking capabilities to the ships systems.
    • Advanced Whammy Drive: Whammy Drives create an interdicition pulse that can trip the safeties of ships hyperdrives stalling them. They can't keep a fleet from jumping but for a moment those within range of the pulse can be stalled.
    • Saotome Car'das: Designed for micro jumps with high levels of precision and capabilities.
    • Cater Phalanx: Designed to strengthen the shielding of a squadron. A small team can bunch together and project a shield over themselves for additional protection.
    • Laminanium: Designed like a Quellian ship the hull of the orbital platforms has a thin layer of the material to improve repairs and over time depending on the amount of damage it is able to patch itself up.
    • Advanced Hyperdrive: Designed with an experimental hyperdrive that is meant to give them some of the fastest flight times across all of the galaxy.
    • WorldArmor-4 defensive shield: A projector designed to come from the ship over a small area. Each carrier can project one but it is only over a limited area such as bases or villages/towns. Cities will usually have their own shields.
WEAKNESSES
  • Sleg: A powerful energy enhancer, the sleg absorbs and channels the excessive heat generated by the chassis of the speeder. Making them maintain a stronger level of power but also increases the chances that they could explode from the heat.
  • Balanced: The cruiser is designed to be balanced in its loadouts with nothing being on the high end but it also doesn't lack in any area.
  • Orissa: Designed with the Orissa that is a solid plate covered in drop pods reducing underside defenses and cannon.
  • Dome SHielding: The dome shiled the carrier is able to project is meant to be strong and protective but it also cuts down on weapons that can be fired reducing it by a third as well as the range as they can't penetrate the shield.
DESCRIPTION
Designed for the Silver Jedi ground forces, the planetary shield helicarrier uses powerful repulsor engines powered by solar ionization and photon 8 reactors to power its main purpose and systems. Projecting over a limited area a powerful anti orbital bombardment shield that is used to project from other shield. Being in the air with anti fighter and gunship defenses makes getting up to it from the ground forces of an enemy. Its strong shielding and weapons being built to give it a strong defense from fighters and bring to a planet side engagement a ship for the ground forces to work with and coordinate. Able to deploy its small gunship squadron in the small hanger to deploy troopers where they need it.

Communications for the ground forces to be able to use with more troopers within the shield area they can work with. The power situation with the ship is worked on, the main space that would be used for hanger to hold more ships houses the reactors needed to power the shield itself. The shield in general while not able to be a full planetary shield can cover an area to protect a location instead of trying to cover everything cutting down on the power strain. Still though to cut down on the power drain that could come with it the shield projected is not the full size being a fraction of roughly twenty five kilometers.

More then enough to secure an area in a ground battle and lessening the major drain. From times the empire battled the Omega Protectorate their shield cruisers which were small and designed to make shields able to protect battlecruisers with little effort were a strong defense and nuisance in general engagements. These operate on a similar idea but have the benefit of being larger for more reactor space and being able to adjust the shield to prevent orbital bombardment.

Sala'dine has continued to over the years with newer technologies and improved methods... upgrade their ships. The simple carrier becoming something for ground troop support with heavier defenses and fighter support. NEwly designed orissa to deploy pods as the ship needs and a stronger theater shield using world armor to protect an area around the ship in a dome. As an improved upon means of getting soldiers and jedi around in a battlefield it is designated one of the better planet side cruisers that can be brought down.
 
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ADM. Reshmar

Directorate Officer Fleet Admiral SJC 3rd Fleet
RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
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Starwars Chaos:
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
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WITH DEV THREADS
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SUGGESTIONS
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ADM. Reshmar

Directorate Officer Fleet Admiral SJC 3rd Fleet
[member="Sala'dine"]


Sala'dine said:
No Capital Weapons

Sala'dine said:
100x Triple Ion Cannons
These two contradict one another. Please remove the no capital weapons weakness.



Sala'dine said:
DefenStar 5000
while I see this as a cool concept the power draw for such a large shield is simply too much for any reactor that could fit in a ship this size. I think maybe a quarter the rated range would be about the max this could do at this size vessel. That is still 25 km which I am still on the fence about but since it is the major function of the vessel and basically just blocks orbital bombardments I think it will work. PLease add something which explains the power requirements of the Defenstar 5000 and the vessel only able to run it at a quarter its radius.

You could consider making the vessel larger if you want more radius but realistically covering 25km is enough for any ground battle.
 
FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Saotome Carrier
Link to Submission: Saotome Carrier
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Updating to new factory guidelines

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Saotome Staging Frigate
Link to Submission: Saotome Staging Frigate
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Updating to new factory guidelines

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Saotome Orbital Station
Link to Submission: Saotome Orbital Station
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Updating to new factory guidelines

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Sato Holochair
Link to Submission: Sato Holochair
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Updating to new factory guidelines

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Omnipotence Class Dreadnought
Link to Submission: Omnipotence Class Dreadnought
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Updating to new factory guidelines
 
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