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This is a rare thing for me. Over the years of ever-changing hobbies and forms of expression, I've found I'm quick to get used to communities, and therefore, quick to get bored with them. And yet here I am, still present on Chaos (though more so on discord) long enough for a year to go by. Whoop...

Today marks five years of SWRP for me. I joined this website at the onset of the strange, aimless summer before I started college and am now posting this feedback thread towards the tail end of the strange, aimless spring after graduating college. Isn't that crazy? I think it's crazy. I am...

Just what it says on the tin! How's my roleplay? What needs work? IC, OOC, my characters, storylines, ideas, grammar? I wanna hear it all! I want to know what you guys like, what's been working, and what I can work on to become better. (Me? Competitive? Nah...) I would really love to hear...

[hr] "Great, he's in the thread." "Not him again." "Just avoid him." [hr] In this thread, I need feedback. I'll say it forward and true to heart, that I hate my writing. Perhaps the style, the way I roleplay, whatever it is; and I understand only some of why I dislike it. What I'm...

A little while ago someone outlined the difference between good writing and good role-playing to me. A beautiful writing style and writing collaboratively with other people are two different things, but they go hand in hand on a role-play site. Lately, I’ve been trying to focus on the latter...

In March I will have been on Chaos for five years! I've been around the block in that time, ran a faction, been a roleplay judge but most important of all written some wonderful stories with some wonderful writers. I've been eyeing this little section of the board for sometime and figured that...

Before my recent LOA there have been some issues about me kinda overdoing it with Abyss, plus a ton of OOC salt. With my return it has been my first priority to avoid these things, but I think it's hard to judge that properly myself, so I ask you, the people that made me aware of these issues...

Alright guys. Been on this site for quite some time. However, instead of looking for some old critique thread, I decided I might as well throw a new one up because I am too lazy to find one, but not enough to type this out. You can critique me on anything. Writing, Characters, actions. IC, or...

Hello! Looking for feedback and critiques on all of the characters I have made! I haven't gotten a chance to rp with all of them quite yet...but I hope so to soon. *EDIT* - I would appreciate a peak at all my characters....I'd like to know which are most interesting, which are least....I'd love...

I'm curious just to see whats up here. I havent put many of these up in a long time. A lot of you know me and my characters. At least half the site has written with an alt of mine over the past four to five years. I have played most of the Raxis Characters, all the Whisperwinds, and my newest...

Well, It's been nearly a year since my last feed back post, and I got some good things then, and some bad things too. I'm just here to see what you all think; am I doing a better job, or do I still have a ways to go? Personally, I feel as if my writing skills have improved quite drastically, but...

So I'm back, more or less, and looking to continue to develop RCFC as a company. Though many things have changed while I was gone, reputation remains key to success of any endeavor, so it looks like as good a time as any to see where I, or more accurately RCFC, stand. With that in mind, I'm...

As the title says, I'm striving to be a better member of the community. I've been a frequent flyer for a few years now and have built a (mostly) positive reputation (I think), but there is always monumental room for improvement. Frankly, I want to improve. I want to serve my factions better. I...

"There's no better way to improve your writing than having others rain shit upon it." - Socrates All feedback welcome! I have been lately really trying to improve two aspects of my writing that I believe are at a subpar level: a ) Show, don't tell - I suck at doing this and I overuse active...

I've been on the site for just about 2 and a half years, and over time I know both my ability to write and the way I write have changed dramatically from month to month and year to year. And where everything good does, indeed, come to an end, I'd like to know how I have fared as a writer on...

It has been a long while since I've posted one of these as a Writer instead of the character. So figured I might as well toss this here. What can I do to improve my writing? I RP several characters, most prominent are likely Danger Arceneau, Kaileann Vera, Choli Vyn, Micah Talith, Adele...

I recently began asking a few folks what they thought of my writing and the responses were interesting. I haven't asked this in a while of the community i thought now would be a good time to do so. Now I know grammar and use of commas are on the list of a few folks. I am using word before I...

Hey! Here it comes, the third try! Like every other sensible writer, I wanna become a better person, advance and learn from my mistakes, but sadly a lot of those things can only be seen by other writers! So, come in, everybody, and let me know what you think about me! The prefix says...

Hey all, So now holidays and assorted other commitments are coming to an end, I have a fair bit extra time. I figured rather then doing a zillion role plays at once, to instead make a fact file for this community. It would be pretty similar in regards to overall how it works to the original...

So recently my close friend who is an English major in collage turned me down to write scripts for my New Updated on my new radio station for Chaos. Now I have no choice but to ask for outside help... Again. After my first Radio Update was released many people told me to get a better speech...