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Approved Location Jadeite Retreat

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Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
SETTING INFORMATION
  • Structure Name: X Temple
  • Classification: Jedi Temple
  • Location: Cloud Nine
  • Affiliation: Silver Jedi
  • Accessibility: Designed in two fold stages... with the exterior and the interior accessible from the anchorpoints which allow the temples main structures to be concealed and harder to disturb. The exterior however is importantly made and through use of dimensional engineering the area can be larger and built up more then it appears using solarite stone and a quasi sentient security system that makes the temples themselves able to react to the ones who are within shifting rooms or locking doorways if it reads darksiders and hostile intent.
  • Description:
  • The main exterior of the convent is sealed and solid save a main entrance leading into an indoor garden and entryway where scanners and Shatory floor panels are installed to protect the floors. Different plants can be grown in the front garden where sunlight is able to filter in from slits in the stone. Then it leads to the main doors that can be sealed in case of emergency and serve as a layer of defense. The stone work around the central building leaves a gap able to wrap around and creates a roof with spires jutting upwards.

    Continuing around the entryway the large square has stairs leading down into the sections of the building. Filled with rooms that contain bunks for people to sleep and facilities. A heavy gravity room for training and exercise, a room designed for varied environments. A central area that gets bigger leading up from the center towards the larger part of the central dome crisscrossed with bridges and platforms allowing it to look out into the large centralized room filled with holoprojectors for slid state hardlight images.

    Within the building there are ponics modules and converters from Sasori and Wey'lan able to be used to grow their own food to last for awhile. With work from Saori and Shion the retreat also serves as a vacation section catering to those who wish to experience more natural remedies to their stress like mud baths and massages. The chance for Phenex and Chai la workers to be able to get away for a singles retreat with trained professionals on a world with a beautiful view is not completely lost as the central area and sections serve to provide them comforts with trained staff.

    The spires and rest of the building is designed for Sasori's use, storing things they have found or for researchers and works to have a place to stay if they are traveling over to another project. A landing pad for the shuttles to touch down on and deposit or pick them up is good enough. The final really nice part is the astrometrics lab for observing the planets and rooms dedicated to jedi watchmen for getting their charges a ride to the order.
POINTS OF INTEREST
Clarity Gate: A gate designed at the top of the stairs going into the higher grounds. Designed to be blocked off through advanced shielding technologies controlled by the Rests collected stars... a quasi sentient spirit in the rest that keeps security measures going and works with the jedi. In this case enforcing the required meditation time and reflection that must go into the jedi to calm them down before entry to the upper areas where the masters and grandmaster are.

Kyber Arch: A reconstructed arch from the one on Coruscant that was made from the crystals of fallen jedi. A meditative technique meant to test those who were called to it.

Lecture Hall: A massive lecture hall allowing for classes to be taught by many of the jedi themselves. Those who need it can book it and the ones who want to get a class going quickly will have plenty of space as it is meant to be modular and shift to accommodate several classes at once.

Medical Hall: Advanced combination hospital, research center and lab as well as a healers hall. Able to give the jedi healers and doctors the edge over many institutions in the galaxy.

Confessional: Located in the center of the council chambers and able to be brought out for those who come before them. The confessionals weigh whoever is inside and many are crushed under the weight of their own self.

Jedi Temple Obstacle Course: Reconstructed from the main jedi temple a thing of beauty for shifting and changing. The jedi have made to it test and challenge even the grandmaster in terms of what it can do with various model droids and biot droids able to be used across it all.

Vaults: IN the main temple and hidden away, to secure dangerous artifacts in nullification resin, holocrons and anything else that might prove a danger to the jedi there. For security the temple guards are located clossest to the vaults to defend and protect them.

Cold Storage: Designed to hold jedi craft for them to use on missions and store ships recovered from enemy forces within a safer area.

Room of a Thousand Fountains: Reconstructed for the silver rest as a deep area od meditation and calmness that can wash over the ones within.

Jedi Anchorpoints: Designed to be the bridge point between the temple and the planet it is located on. The anchorpoints allow entry and exit from the temples and are in concealed locations.

Advanced Early Detection Systems: Connected to monitors across the planet, in orbit and using the Saotome Monitoring Stations as a means to map the system. Able to give them information as soon as it is alerted by the Saotome Planetary Defensive Network.

Solarite Nexi: Created from the vergence created in the temple and stoked by the living Silver Solarite Stone and Choushin Uneti that has been transplanted to the heart of the temple itself from the main source. It creates a living sensation within the temple giving it a life pulse that grows and extends to the perimeter of the stone.
SECURITY
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SETTING INFORMATION
  • Nexus Name: Nexus
  • Nexus Alignment: Light
  • Location: Varies
  • Affiliation: Silver Jedi
  • Size: Medium
  • Strength: Strong
  • Accessibility: Felt as soon as one enters the area of the temple. THe proximity to the solarite stones and their construction enclosing the temple.
  • Description: Created from several factors, the living stone that has been used to rebuild and construct the temples... the choushin uneti tree that serves as the heart and the artificial intelligence that is able to be used by the temple. The nexi created are vergences that are in the locations, weaker or in the beginnings of their strength from use of the area by the jedi. With the living stone acting like a perimeter and the uneti working to stoke it from a small ember to a flame. The nexi isn't all powerful generally just fractionally stronger then it was before and able to enhance or lessen the strain of force users within it.
NEXUS EFFECTS
Heavily in tune with the lightside of the force and empowering lightsiders minorly.... it will make them calmer, less stressed and ease mental or physical fatigue while darksiders will feel like they are moving underwater or in syrup.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Built almost entirely within the plot of land bought at the auction. THe retreat focused on maximizing the space with a large base covering the area and then dug down into the ground while building up to give it as much interior as possible. Carved from black marble stone for its sleekness and color. The convents modest look compared to the rest of cloud nine is simple but made to function to provide shelter to those who need it and food or clothing as well as a place for others in need to come for sanctuary.

The years even decades of use have changed the retreat.. from a sanctuary in the areas of wild space into a jedi fortress that is able to be used by watchmen in the sector. It is both a beacon of hope and a school to teach the newest generations. The Silver jedi under matsu coming to the retreat and overhauling much of it. The life vergences of the jeid who had been there influencing it so that they would be able to further use it as an enclave in the galaxy.
 
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I'll take this

Overall looks very good just a few points :



Matsu Ike said:
Built almost entirely within the plot of land bought at the auction. THe retreat focused on maximizing the space with a large base covering the area and then dug down into the ground while building up to give it as much interior as possible. Carved from black hijarna stone for its sleekness and color. The convents modest look compared to the rest of cloud nine is simple but made to function to provide shelter to those who need it and food or clothing as well as a place for others in need to come for sanctuary.
You can move this to the history section

Beyond that everything looks good

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[member="Matsu Ike"]

This submission, along with two others of yours, is being pulled due to the use of hijarna stone.

The canon wiki reference does not offer enough valid information to support the idea that hijarna stone is a resourced material. It is found in only one canon location and due to its rather powerful attributes I will be requiring you do greatly scale down the use of this stone as well it must be linked in this and every submission it is used in from now on.

You may not source hijarna stone as the main component for this building. I am not opposed to it being used in small amounts as added protection such as on doorways, but nothing more. You may consider this a rare material henceforth.

I do not want to see it snuck in like this again.

Please tag me when you have finished making the necessary edits.

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Submission Name: Seimei Ossus Restoration
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Submission Name: Jadeite Retreat
Link to Submission: Jadeite Retreat
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Submission Name: Vatsu
Link to Submission: Vatsu
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