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Approved Starship FDS Titan | Imperial II-Class Star Destroyer

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Experimental Configuration | The FDS Titan has been equipped with a vast array of "exotic" weaponry, mostly acquired from the Open Market and from Friendly Corporations that have worked with SularenCo and the Final Dawn throughout the past. These exotic weapons with their special features, allow the FDS Titan to deal more damage against enemy warships in combat then regular Star Destroyers of the Final Dawn Navy
  • Durability | Through it's Phalkt Metal Hull, the FDS Titan is nearly-invulnerable to energy weapons and certain projectile based weapons such as Torpedoes and Missiles, which combined with the typical triple-layered shielding system and Shield Force Multipliers, allows the Star Destroyer to put up a fight even when outnumbered and outgunned
  • Stealth Systems | Thanks to it's Phalkt Metal Hull, the FDS Titan is able to utilizing a shimmering effect that renders the ship invisible to the naked eye. When combined with a series of advanced sensor systems installed throughout the ship which in turn are utilized to keep the ship hidden from the sensors of enemy warships, this allows the FDS Titan to avoid detection from enemy warship in addition to being able to utilize it's weapons and travel through hyperspace while it remains "cloaked"
  • High Starfighter Compliment | Perhaps one of the biggest upgrades given to the FDS Titan is it's enlarged hangars which allows the FDS Titan to hold up to 10 Squadrons of Starfighters and Support Craft, allowing it to operate alone without the need of escort ships to provide it with additional starfighters.
WEAKNESSES
  • Mobility | Just like many Warships of Imperial Design, the FDS Titan has low speed and maneuverability suffering from reduced Mobility that stems over a preference for Heavy Firepower, Durability and Larger Starfighter Capacity over Mobility, which is typical for the Battlecarriers made by SularenCo
  • Rear Blind Spot | Another Common Design Flaw featured on the FDS Titan is it's Blind Spot at the rear of the warship as there are few weapon emplacements that cover that area, which would allow faster and more maneuverable vessels to get around the ship's primary weapons and hit both the bridge tower and engines virtually unopposed.
  • Vulnerable to Kinetic Weapons | Despite the great amount of strength provided to it via it's Phalkt Metal Hull, which grants the FDS Titan near-invulnerability to energy weapons, the Phalkt Metal Hull possesses a major weakness which manifests in the form of a vulnerability towards kinetic force and by extension kinetic weapons such as hypervelocity canons, auotcanons and other exotic weapons with ordinance weapons such as missiles and torpedo's being capable of doing moderate damage to the hull
  • Shield Force Multipliers | Despite the advantage provided by the Shield Force multipliers, every time they are activated, despite reinforcing the shields of a particular area of the FDS Titan from concentrated attacks, it leaves the rest of the shields across the Star Destroyer weakened which can be something enemy warships and starfighters can exploit
SIGNIFICANT WEAKNESSES
  • Exposed Hardpoints | As is typical of Warships of Imperial Design, the FDS Titan is riddled with numerous design flaws in the form of numerous exposed hardpoints such as it's Engines, Bridge Tower, Ventral Reactor Bulb and Axial Psuedosonic Heavy Beam Cannon which can be easily targeted. Should they be destroyed the following effects will happen to the FDS Titan :
    • Engines | Reduced Speed and Maneuverability, Inability to Jump into Hyperspace
    • Bridge Tower | Loss of Navigation Control
    • Ventral Reactor Bulb | Major Structural Damage to the Hull, Appearance of "Breaches" (When Targeted, it further damages the Hull to devastating effect), Destruction of the Axial Psuedosonic Heavy Beam Cannon
DESCRIPTION
The Titan is an Imperial II-Class Star Destroyer manufactured by Kuat Drive Yards during the rule of the First Galactic Empire under Palpatine over eight-hundred years ago. During the height of the Galactic Civil War, command of the Titan was given to a young promising officer by the name of Lyra Rohm who had recently been promoted to Captain on the recommendation of Grand Admiral Thrawn. On the eve of the climatic Battle of Endor, the Titan was set to join the rest of Darth Vader's Death Squadron in preparation for the planned Imperial Ambush however an unexpected malfunction occurred while the Ship was transitioning in hyperspace and as a result, the Titan reverted out of hyperspace above Endor, but eight-hundred years into the future, far after the collapse of Palpatine's First Galactic Empire and right after the collapse of the most recent itteration of the Empire.

After a short encounter over the Forest Moon of Endor, the Titan's crew we're quickly informed of the current state of the galaxy by a warship of the Final Dawn, a Neo-Imperial Faction currently based in the Unknown Regions whose ideals closely resembled that of the Old Empire. Finding themselves in an unfamiliar galaxy that had drastically changed, Captain Rohm made then decision to follow the Final Dawn into the depths of the Unknown Regions to seek clarity and a new purpose for her and her crew. Eventually, Rohm and her crew would proceed to join the ranks of the Final Dawn, with Rohm retaining her rank as Captain to resume the promising career she had started while serving within the Imperial Navy eight-hundred years ago.

With it's crew joining the ranks of the Final Dawn Navy, the Titan was eventually subject to retrofitting in order to grant the Warship the ability to challenge more modern warships of similar size and above, with SularenCo making the bold decision of giving the Titan an experimental configuration to it's weapon's composition, equipping the Star Destroyer with exotic weaponry acquired from the open market and friendly corporations that have worked with SularenCo and the Final Dawn throughout the past few years. With these new "exotic weapons" it is expected that the Titan would be able to inflict more damage then the regular frontline warships of the Final Dawn providing it with a greater advantage over other warships equipped with regular and simplistic weapons.

In addition to the exotic weapons, the Titan's Hull has been stripped down and replaced with Phalkt Metal, which has granted the Star Destroyer near-invulnerability to energy weapons along with the ability to utilize a "shimmer effect" which renders the entire hull invisible to the naked eye, when combined with an extensive amount of advanced stealth systems installed throughout the Star Destroyer, this grants the Titan cloaking abilities along with the ability to utilize it's weaponry and travel through hyperspace while it's "cloaking" systems remain active. The Hangars of the Titan have also been enlarged in order to accommodate more starfighters in order to negate the traditional disadvantages of the original Imperial Star Destroyer design via an increased starfighter compliment.

While negating some of the disadvantages of the Imperial Star Destroyer, these refits have brought in new weaknesses of their own most notably it's extreme vulnerability to kinetic weaponry and vulnerable hardpoints (Engines, Bridge Tower & Reactors), however even then through these refits, the FDS Titan is still expected to become a Force to be reckoned with on the Battlefield, spearheading a new era of shipbuilding for the Final Dawn that will ensure that it will maintain the innovative advantage it has held over it's rivals since the beginning of the Second Great Hyperspace War.


07/27/2023
  • Reworked Out of Character Information
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  • Reworked Technical Information
  • Reworked Standard Features
  • Reworked Advanced Features
  • Reworked Strengths & Weaknesses
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[member="Maracel Yorkell II"], Solid Sub overall, just got a couple things I'd like to discuss before I can slap an approval on this



Maracel Yorkell II said:
Material: Durasteel hull
Please remember to link any specifically named materials in the submission

When I crack the numbers for the ratings, it's coming up as a little overpowered to be "Mass-Produced" (just a point). If you could drop a rating to cater to balance, that would be greatly appreciated as to avoid the possibility of a future report of the site. However, I can approve this without this change if you don't wish to make it.

Please remember to tag me with any changes or clarifications you make to this submission
 

Runi Verin

Two pounds shy of a bomb.
Moved to Pre-Factory as per author's request. Please remember to make a note at the bottom of your submission summarizing the changes you have made and tag a member of the Factory Staff once you're ready for active judgement.
 
This one is a doozy. We have problems.


PRODUCTION: Minor

Special Features: HIMS

Particularly rare or powerful special features may necessitate using a lower level of production (cloaking technology, personal cloaking devices, gemcutters, crystal grav traps, moon dust, equivalent stealth or anti stealth technologies), or rare canon technologies (Hyperwave Inertial Momentum Sustainers, etc) and their equivalents will only be permitted at Semi-Unique production.

This is not allowed at the Minor Production Level. Either remove it or make this all Semi-Unique.

  • Manufacturer: SularenCo
  • Affiliation:
    • New Imperial Order
    • Vicondor Union
    • Constitutional Protectorate of Byss
Armaments:
  • Proton Torpedoes
  • Brilliant Missiles
  • Disruptor Torpedo
  • Mag-Pulse Warheads
  • Advanced Concussion Missile
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Solar Ionization Reactor
  • Docking Clamps
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
  • Electronic Countermeasures Suite
  • G-32 Evasive Armor Plating
  • Laser Reflective Armor
  • Anti-Ion Emission Tracers
  • Shroud
  • HIMS
  • ABC Scramblers
  • AR-0B Damage Reduction Armor Component
  • Armament Duplicators
  • Magnite Tractor Beam Array
  • Animated Metal Sealant

These all need hyperlinked. Please link each one of them...unless it is the HIMS and you decided not to be semi-unique, then in that case, ignore that one and throw it out.

  • Length: 1,950 Meters
  • Width: 1,200 Meters
  • Height: 750 Meters

  • Hangar Space: Extreme
  • Hangar Allocations
    • Starfighters: 20 squadrons
    • Support Craft: 0 squadrons

  • Hangar Space: (Please provide the amount of fighters/support craft this submission can hold in it's hangar by count of Squadrons, which hold 12 average Starfighters. The higher your squadron count, the lower your Armament and number of advanced systems should be. )
1000m [Base: 1 | Very Low: 3 | Low: 4 | Average: 5 | High: 7 | Very High: 9 | Extreme: 11]
1500m [Base: 2 | Very Low: 4 | Low: 6 | Average: 8 | High: 10 | Very High: 12 | Extreme: 15] <---------------------------------
2000m [Base: 2 | Very Low: 5 | Low: 8 | Average: 11 | High: 14 | Very High: 17 | Extreme: 20] XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

Rules state that unless you are SPECIFICALLY up at 2000 Meters, you cannot use the 2000 Meter hanger bays. I am sorry, that is just the rules. You either can make the length at 2000 meters to get around this...or not. Either way, this is still a Star Destroyer. That or refix everything from starfighter numbers all the way to squadron amount.


Hyperdrive Class: Class 2 | Class 8 Backup

Just add Average at the end of this please. Rules.


Strength:
Double Purpose :
In addition to it's large Hangar Allocations , the Glory-Class is equipped with Extreme amount of Weaponry allowing the ship to have a Double Purpose of being a Battleship and a Fleet Carrier at the same time making it a sophisticated Battlecarrier.
Impenetrable Defenses :
In addition to it's Extreme Hangar Allaocations and Extreme Armament , the Glory-Class also is equipped with powerful shielding and a tough Armor allowing it to withstand attacks from even Battlecruisers up to 3 Kilometers in size.

Please reword as you do not have an "Extreme Amount of Weaponry". Your armament rating is High, just sigh High Amount please. That will work.


Strength:
Impenetrable Defenses :
In addition to it's Extreme Hangar Allaocations and Extreme Armament , the Glory-Class also is equipped with powerful shielding and a tough Armor allowing it to withstand attacks from even Battlecruisers up to 3 Kilometers in size.

Please just remove " up to 3 Kilometers in size.", no rough exact numbers please. It can toe to toe yes, but no rough numbers. Just say Battle Cruisers.


Then I would suggest one more weakness for this to feel properly balanced. I can recommend easily Exposed Rear or Exposed Bridge from just sight of the picture alone just to give some suggestions.



Let me know when you make the required changes. Otherwise...your completely balanced in ratings! So feel good about that!
Marlon Sularen Marlon Sularen
 
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Shawn

Get to the next screen.
Submission Name: Glory-Class Battlecarrier
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Pre-Factory Request: To make final modifications to the sub

Moved to pre-factory per OP request!

Please remember to include a list of changes when you tag a member of factory staff to move the submission to live judgement.
 

Fiolette Fortan

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Marlon Sularen Marlon Sularen

  • Please link your manufacturers and affiliations.
  • Please include a list of changes for this submission.

Once this is complete I'll give it another look.
 
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