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[Aurelian Sigismund]

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ETERNAL LEGION OF ZAKUUL
LEGIONARY SQUAD

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To submit the standard clone trooper unit of the Eternal Legion.
• Image Credit: Here, And Here
• Role: Variable
  • Heavy Clone Stormtrooper Squad
• Permissions: Breshig, Apex, Grenades
• Links: Homo Aurum, Clone Trooper, Death Trooper, Clone Braze Trooper, Imperial Legion, Mandalorian Crusaders

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GENERAL INFORMATION

• Unit Name: Legionary Squad of the Eternal Legion of Zakuul
• Affiliation: Imperial Technocracy of Zakuul and Vandemar
• Classification: Heavy Clone Stormtroopers
• Description: The Legionary Squad are the standard Clone Stormtroopers of the Eternal Legion, equipped for serious infantry combat and trained for a great variety of operations, by taking major inspiration from the Mandalorian Crusaders and Supercommandos as well as Death Troopers, and even receiving direct initial training by the latter. They are entirely composed of Homo Aurum clones bred in the Star Fortress Invictus Antagonistes and known for their extreme discipline, impressive weapon handling and cold pragmatism. They are very stoic and have a distanced attitude towards any outsiders, especially Force Users which can be outright hostile, but a brotherly approach to each other. Among their peers they are considered to be the 'regs' or 'regulars' and focus on stormtrooper tactics, directly engaging the enemy at short and long ranges. They are the vanguard of a new age of enlightenment, spreading from the worlds of Zakuul and Iokath.

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COMBAT INFORMATION

• Unit Size: Small {8}
• Unit Availability: Rare
• Unit Experience: Elite
• Equipment:
  • Armor:
    • Advanced Tactical Bodyglove 'Titan'
    • Phase I Legion Armour [Variant A2, No Jetpack]
    • Battleshield 'Aegis' [Optional]
  • Ranged Weapons:
    • Lancer Blaster Pistol [Sidearm]
    • Lancer Blaster Carbine or Imperial Concussion Carbine
  • Melee Weapons:
    • Royal Expugnator Blade
  • Heavy Weapons: [Two per Section]
    • Plasma Disruptor
    • RS 'Vulcan' Heavy Flame Caster
    • Heavy Lancer Blaster
    • Heavy Concussion Repeater
    • ML-04 Missile Launcher
      • Cretanr-class Guided Plasma Missile
      • Striilir-class Brilliant Missile
      • Dtema-class Carbonite Missile
    • MCDC-01 Man-portable Class-D Disruptor Cannon
    • MHRR-02 Man-portable Heavy Repeating Ripper
  • Grenades:
    • Project RUUSAN: MK1. Ravenous Grenade
    • Rhypalm Grenade
    • Thermal Detonators
• Combat Function:
  • Combat Functions & Tactics:
    • All Combat & Warfare Competences of Homo Aurum Minor Training
  • Habits:
    • Nicknames [Given to each other]
    • Kill Counters [To compare after or during battle]
    • Tattoos [Of names, places, battles, deaths, honours, spirit animals etc]
    • Sign Language [Common among the Legionaries, its a simplistic but efficient sign language]
    • Battle Pledges [A form of swearing ones self to triumph in the coming fight]
    • Songs [For marching or when on the move, the Legionaries tend to sing]
  • Goals: As part of the Eternal Legion, the Legionaries hold true to the very same values as the rest of the clone army. They oppose the rule and power of any and all Force sensitives and believe in the rule of the masses, represented by equals and the enlightenment through science, order and justice. In battle the Legionaries are the heavy lifting stormtroopers of the Eternal Legion, composing the majority of its units.
• Force Abilities (Force User Units Only): Force Dead

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STRENGTHS

• Tactical Flexibility and Superiority
• Superlative Physiology
• Operational Versatility
• Powerful Equipment
• Force Dead

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WEAKNESSES

• Stealth? No Thank You.
• Nimble & Acrobatic Melee Fighters
• Weakness to Force based attacks
• Cannot use all kinds of transports or speeders due to size & weight
• Reputation for brutality
• Social Difficulties
• Overconfident
• Difficult, expensive and time intensive to replace

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HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Project: Genesis of the Imperator Aurelian Sigismund saw the creation of a new generation of Clone Troopers after the practical experiments with the Rim-Guard Order. Meant originally to supplement the New Imperial Order and later Empire with a caste of extremely capable super-soldiers, the Eternal Legion was instituted shortly before the Battle of Exegol and hence saw little service in the Second Great Hyperspace War, due to the decline of the Empire and its capabilities as well as the focus of their founder on rebuilding both Zakuul and his asset, Vandemar.

The concept originated in the Project: Exarch which Aurelian Sigismund was part of himself, making him a warrior and soldier beyond even his understanding, leaders who were only brought down by a Force Avatar. Over the many wars he fought, experiencing Mandalorians, Sith, Jedi, various Special Forces, Stormtroopers, Death troopers in battle, they were envisioned to surpass them all by taking what is best from all of them. Laying a physical and biological foundation, they were then enhanced in discipline and tactics, developing and progressing individual specialisations into proper battlefield units.

In the two decades that followed, the Eternal Legion grew in size and capability equally, making way for plenty more Legionaries and also for introducing further organisation into the now founded Legions. Unit distinctions were made to increase combat effectiveness and elevate the troops from a supplementing force to a stand-alone army. Though despite early estimates and a more than extreme training regime, it took more than ten years to achieve the desired capability in the clones, but now surpassing Death Troopers and other elite formations as desired.


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