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You may roast me or toast me, or any of my characters, at your leisure. Though I appreciate genuine constructive criticism more than anything. Begin.

Hi guys. I've written a lot of things on another website that I transferred in from. A lot of it is summaries and write ups about certain scenes I did in first person type roleplay on a chatroom that I still log onto. I'd like to start with the first submission I made in a diary I began...

lay it on me i'll probably take your advice

Hello all. I will join the bandwagon, but mainly because I'm curious to see what type of critiques (if any) I'll receive as a writer who doesn't write a whole lot and also as an RPJ who maintains a low public profile. I am expecting serious and humorous responses. So, have at it!

Just judge me, okay? I want to know what i should do better, what's good, or if I'm just bland dumb. If you want characters, just take a look at my profile, it's not that difficult.

so I've been here for a little over a month and I wanted to know your opinion on my writing and rp. this is so I know where to improve etc

Everything. Judge. Everything. I write Graxlrod [member="Calico Tal'verda"] [member="Monitor"] [member="Corrin Tal'verda"] [member="Sylvanan Tal'verda"] [member="Darth Mephirium"] [member="Book"] And the lovely [member="Norge Rucras"]. Insults or compliments, whatever flies I suppose.

Open d Gates!

Lay it on meh! TELL ME YOUR DIRTY SECRETS ABOUT MEH! WHISPER SWEET NOTHINGS INTO MUH EAR!

Alright, you've given me feedback on my character, which I greatly appreciate. Now, what about the individual behind the writing and the character? What do you think of me? Don't be afraid to tell me how it is. I'm a big boy. :p

I'm interested in seeing what everyone thinks of me as a writer as well as my characters. I'm always looking to be a better writer so any criticism is fine with me; Don't feel the need to pull any punches, I won't get annoyed. I'm Mrrew, Khan Ra, Makkik, Bobawwa, Robbi and many others...

You've seen all the threads, have at me. Main Characters [member="Lysle of the Hydian Way"] [member="Darth Vidar"] [member="The Dark Man"]

I really wanted to do this for the character, but since Rev is really my only character for right now (still getting my feet with with [member="Yurzhoc Shai"] and [member="Relit Vandal"]), I figured I would name this for writer and let anything go. And lets be honest...I'm pretty lazy. So...

Although I'm a bit apprehensive of what might be written, I believe everyone is entitled to speak their mind - Freedom of speech and all that. I want to know what people think. I understand polite and such but please let me know. It will only help me improve what I can improve or have been...

Ok so my turn. I'm ready for anything! I write as the following characters: - Asterion - Connor Harrison - Fixx Kearney - Krius Syonis - Talos (was Kail Ragnar) I also act as a Role-Play Judge under Asterion. Feel free to lay down all feedback and critique on my presence here, my characters...

Let's see what happens. Anyhow, critque away. My writing style, tendency to post meta everywhere, characters etc. Snarky posts are welcome. Serious ones as well. Actively rped chars at present: Siobhan Kerrigan Moira Skaldi Kaida Taldir Naamah Aesham

...was only able to be fought off for a few hours before posting here. I've been here a while now, and still haven't written with that many people, but I'd love to get feedback on my style, approach and characters! Khallesh Val Kairon Rees Irys Arist'lar Asmus Janes Jacen Voidstalker Vexen

So, in case you haven't checked my character list at some point, y'all might know me as Cross, Malachite, Gavin (only recently), Cobalt (also recently), Zatten, or Hijinks.... What do you think of me, and my writing, and my characters? I'd honestly like to know.

Wow. I went to bed last night and this whole thing was created. Cool. I've put up a couple feedback threads in the past, but now that everyone's doing it like it's going out of style, I figured I'd post this official version of it. I arrived on this site in early September back in 2013 thanks...

(...Because Jon hasn't posted one of these yet and we need to peer-pressure him with moar participation. Also, bandwagon.) :D ___ This is the publicly available Feedback thread for JSC on the Internet. Go crazy. :P :D :P :D Erm, please note that also accept Feedback in the form of PMs...