All joking aside;
I think I know you from another roleplay a long time ago, but I'm not certain. Have you always done Star Wars RPs? Especially the Sith side of things?
But if that was you, I think that your writing transitioned well through the style of roleplay that the last one was in, and you are a much better writer in this style than the heathen style of that other roleplay. If that wasn't you, then nevermind.