writer

Bring me your tired, your sick, your old, your poor....but especially your criticisms! Honestly I've seen a lot of people doing this so I decided why not it could be fun to see what people have to say. If you don't know my chars besides Laith I play.... [member="Ronan Dyre"] [member="Garrus...

Alright, so I said I'd allow myself thirty days and request feedback from the community again - without silly memes. Alot can change in a short amount of time and I'm hoping it has, for everyone - beyond myself. That being said - if you would like to leave feedback on me, please feel free to...

So I've kinda wanted to do one of these for a while, but never took the time to sit down and do it. So what do you all think? And please say more than "good". I still need to learn a lot. For those who don't recognize the writer account, I'll list characters below. Strask Ak'lya (@Spectre)...

Looking for any feedback, advice, favorite moments or suggestions you lot have for me for the following characters: Ijaat Akun Aitis Powarth Shywooshk Thanks in advance, and i'm not surprised if I don't get much, I am new here.

I am only asking to currently critique my main character Jericho and my writing thus far. Anything I can approve on and so on, thanks.

Hello all, I'm open to constructive criticism on my both myself as a writer and on Helios. Where can I improve? Whats lacking? Whats overpowering? I don't have much content posted on any of my alt accounts so I suppose they don't need to be brought up. Any and all comments are encouraged...

I figured i'd do a new thread here, since the last one was more focused on Gherron. I have a bunch of characters now, and have had the pleasure of roleplaying with a lot of great writers here. I'll go ahead and list some of my recently active characters here, though you can always check my...

For me that is. So I would like anyone and everyone to critique my characters and myself as a writer. *I have one set up for my character nick, but I wanted one for a writer* so here it goes. Anything you want to say on one of my many characters. Xander Carrick [member="Darren Shaw"]...

I offer myself for judgment. Lay your judgement upon me. Chaos, I have never asked you to critique me before. I have no tongue for it. No one, not even you will remember if I was a good man or bad, why we fought, or why we killed characters off in roleplays with god-like characters and that...

Yep all of my characters are girls. So how are they doing so far as where they are with writing and development? Just be Candor and tell me what's on your mind when you see them post.

A lot of you know me and some of you don't. I've rped with a vast selection of newbs and experienced alike, as far back as the days of the not to be named board. I'm looking for feedback, both on the chars and my writing. Or just me as a writer! You may know me by the following RC 212...

I haven't really been here long, but already I've found myself grinding out a crap ton of posts and whatnot. Which is one of three reasons why I decided to go ahead and send out an invitation for my own criticism. (The other two are that I worry over my posts, and intensely dislike my short...

I constantly like to say I have ten years of roleplaying experience under my belt, but I'm never really sure if I do my posts well enough or everythings up to par. I know I don't pump out posts as fast as a majority might (different environment might be it, not much of a texter so speed typing...

Nah, not really. I know I haven't been part of this community for an incredibly long time, but everyone else is doing this and I'm a sucker for peer pressure. I guess give me some critiques and stuff.

By this I mean her writer, of course. So I joined in August '13 and was ridiculously active for a year (until life happened ;l) Y'all can be mad at me for my rocky 'attendance' these past 8 months, and honestly I apologise for it. I only hope you can understand and realise there had to be a good...

I've been waiting for something like this to pop up since joining Chaos, and I after watching everybody else do it I figured I might as well jump on the bandwagon. Critique away!

You probably don't know me. I don't get out much. But I make a lot of noise. And it's only right that I be held accountable. [member=Tyger Tyger] [member=Trenchcoat Man] [Member=Rain] At your leisure.

I know what this is now... Derp. Writing of [member="Alicia Drey"], [member="Vilox Pazela"], [member="Ella Nova"] and [member="Dianna LaCroix"]. Could I have some feed back? It would be appreciated.

I know some have plenty to say, so let me hear it. Nyos Val Miles Varden Thane Drexel Titan James Mathison Darth Legion Marrik Aloxum Nagate Hei Nolan Detta Cyrus Falcor Steve

Go for it. Say something. Say anything, about anything. Be it: Me. How many times I've removed you from Skype. My characters. That time we went to New Orleans together and I tried to sell you for gumbo. My odour. The way I can fit my arm into a Pringle tube.