Have any critique for me?

[Helios]

Hello all, I'm open to constructive criticism on my both myself as a writer and on Helios.

Where can I improve? Whats lacking? Whats overpowering?

I don't have much content posted on any of my alt accounts so I suppose they don't need to be brought up.

Any and all comments are encouraged, apart from any bashing

 

[Darth Carnifex]

You're the best bby

Keep doin' whatchu do.

[member="Darth Helios"]

 

[Danger Arceneau]

I love the way you write. You have this way of writing Helios that just sticks to me. It is fantastic.

A suggestion? Post more

 

[Reverance]

[member="Darth Helios"] Bby come back, you can blame it all on me

Seriously, just come back to us...that's my only critique.

 

[Helios]

[member="Darth Vornskr"]

D'aw

I love the way you write. You have this way of writing Helios that just sticks to me. It is fantastic.

A suggestion? Post more

Lol thanks for the feedback. And yea, I can do better in regards to your suggestion. I don't post as much as I should. -_-

[member="Darth Helios"] Bby come back, you can blame it all on me

Seriously, just come back to us...that's my only critique.

Anything for you bby

 

[Grrwunhoooll Agaburry]

Best looking sithlord ive seen [member="Darth Helios"]

 

[Joy]

My only criticism is that you don't post enough.

 

[Mrrew]

Havent seen much from you, so there's not much I can say.

But you need a haircut.

 

[Onrai]

My only criticism is that you don't post enough.

^This. Haven't even ever threaded with you, I don't think.