Meh, What the Kark

[Ibby]

[SIZE=12pt]I haven't really been here long, but already I've found myself grinding out a crap ton of posts and whatnot. Which is one of three reasons why I decided to go ahead and send out an invitation for my own criticism. (The other two are that I worry over my posts, and intensely dislike my short posts [i.e. the three-or-four-sentences ones]; and [shamelessly/fully] everyone else was doing it, so I figured "why not"?)[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]So, yep. Let me know what areas I need to work on/ramp up/tone down/etc. My characters are:[/SIZE]

• [SIZE=12pt][member="Nei Laa"][/SIZE]
• [SIZE=12pt][member="Circes Litai"] [/SIZE]
• [SIZE=12pt][member="Kerstas"][/SIZE]
• [SIZE=12pt][member="Benedali Serrus"][/SIZE]
• [SIZE=12pt][member="Tipau"][/SIZE]
• [SIZE=12pt][member="Athena"][/SIZE]
• [SIZE=12pt][member="Roshki Belawiiks"][/SIZE]
• [SIZE=12pt][member="Aeris Vebrero"][/SIZE]
• [SIZE=12pt][member="Payiat"][/SIZE]
• [SIZE=12pt][member="Boomerang"][/SIZE]
• [SIZE=12pt][member="Erud'ryz'ladre"][/SIZE]
• [SIZE=12pt][member="Vina Zomo"][/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]I have excluded a couple toons who are currently shelved, either because they have not yet been written with or they really didn’t do much to begin with.[/SIZE]

 

[GalacticNiv]

Can't think of anything to critique off the top of my head.

You're a fair RPer, and I enjoy threading with you. Keep on it!

 

[Javar Ikon]

[member="Ibelia Sitos"]

You know I love your characters and writing to bits.

I'd also love it to bits if you'd make your Ikon-ling... Sort of waiting to see what you come up with XD

 

[Ibby]

[member="Nivag"] [member="Mitsubishi"]

Alright this is a tad delayed, but thanks for your compliments ^_^ But come on, there's got to be something I need work on. I mean, I know I'm the closest thing to perfect here I'll be the first to say that I'm not the greatest out there, so... COme on! Lay it on meh!