"10 years of experience" Guy Needs Critique; Chaos Says, "Meh?"

[Helmut Todstern]

I constantly like to say I have ten years of roleplaying experience under my belt, but I'm never really sure if I do my posts well enough or everythings up to par. I know I don't pump out posts as fast as a majority might (different environment might be it, not much of a texter so speed typing is difficult), but I still like to hear feedback about not only my characters but the profile/persona I write as OOC.

I say profile/persona because if you trapped me in a corner IRL I probably wouldn't as verbose as I am writing this post.

Anyway, your sharp and piercing critiques are awaited.

#TyrannyDoesntReign #TyrannyPours

 

[Jsc]

Since to my knowledge we've never RP'd IC, my feedback would be sporadic at best. Though, I have always wanted to ask you what your favorite type of RP would be? You know, what kind of thread would really get you excited to be posting in? Adventure, romance, industrial, or Fleeting maybe?

I've always wondered since your signature is either a Killjoy or a pointed awareness of George Lucas' writing style. Lol.

 

[Helmut Todstern]

Since to my knowledge we've never RP'd IC, my feedback would be sporadic at best. Though, I have always wanted to ask you what your favorite type of RP would be? You know, what kind of thread would really get you excited to be posting in? Adventure, romance, industrial, or Fleeting maybe?

I've always wondered since your signature is either a Killjoy or a pointed awareness of George Lucas' writing style. Lol.

I'm actually a big fan of mystery RP and Wu Tang Kung Fu stories.

The second moreso because it's combat, but exaggerated to almost silly extremes.

 

[Nikolas Faselli]

[member="Darth Realmstream"]

You use Avi as your playby.

 

[Helmut Todstern]

[member="Darth Realmstream"]

You use Avi as your playby.

Cosmetic changes over 6 years XD

I saw the video for the first time, and I was, that is what I was looking for all this time XD

 

[Preliat Mantis]

your signature isn't up to par


ey yoooooooooooooooooooooo


nah ur fine

 

[Ferian Adair]

[member="Darth Realmstream"]

Centre your signature, for feth sakes. <_<

 

[Helmut Todstern]

[member="Darth Realmstream"]

Centre your signature, for feth sakes. <_<

I'm a rebel

Like that.​

 

[Artemis Vahl'Nyx]

Centre your signature, for feth sakes. <_<

Does he even have a signature? Because if he does, I can't see it.

On a more serious note: Love the playby. Love it. So much<3
As for your writing... I haven't seen to much, but from what I've seen it's good! The flow is nice and it has a good amount of detail. I'd say what you could maybe work on, but I'm to tired to think of something like that to say.
GRADE RECIEVED: A

 

[Werdla Dardalab]

[member="Darth Realmstream"]

You made me google the dude/folks/song in your avatar because it's just.. I can't look away. I regretted it.

...I still can't look away though.

Then I read a few of your posts and they're actually quite good! Until halfway through when I go back to looking at your signature o.o

 

[Helmut Todstern]

[member="Darth Realmstream"]

You made me google the dude/folks/song in your avatar because it's just.. I can't look away. I regretted it.

...I still can't look away though.

Then I read a few of your posts and they're actually quite good! Until halfway through when I go back to looking at your signature o.o

Yes...be entranced by my hypnotic vision...