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Approved Lore Striking Serpent Battlegroup

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Commodore Burtch

Naval Officer Of The Elysium Empire
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Fleet Name: Striking Serpent Battlegroup, or BG01-FT01 (battlegroup 1 of fleet 1)
  • Classification: Naval Strike Force
  • Affiliation: Elysium Empire Navy
  • Fleet Symbol: The Purple Lion of the Elysium Empire, surrounded by a snake.
  • Description: The Striking Serpent Battlegroup is the first experimental Naval Squadron to implement the Elysium Battleline Synergy Project configuration. It is very professional and many of the personnel assigned to it are experienced veterans from previous engagements of the Elysium Empire Navy.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Headquarters: The nomadic Elysium Empire civilian fleet
  • Ports of Call: Typically near Dagobah and Sluis Van.
  • Goals: Represent the military interests of the Elysium Empire and defend the subjects of our exalted King, Heath Valhoun.
  • Reputation: Most ships are fresh out of the shipyards of MandalArms and Veinstein Labs, however, some have previous combat experience and have been reassigned to this new unit. While Admiral Keatoch and his Battlegroup are the primary ambassadors of the Elysium Empire to the Mandalorians, many of the ships in this Battlegroup are somewhat known to the Mandalorians as friends and allies from small engagements. Some have experienced combat with pirates and enjoyed training exercises with friendly Mandalorian allies. Notable ships are as follows:
    • HMS Basilisk - Participated in an escort mission to transport a massive shipment of Beskar for Loreena Arenais-Valhoun and the MandalArms corporation. This ship and its captain are notable for allowing Loreena to literally slingshot a captured enemy fighter into the hangar bay causing minimal damage. Loreena Arenais-Valhoun was charged for the damages.
    • HMS Makashi - The first ship in the Makashi class light cruiser line ever made. Participated in the same escort mission as HMS Basilisk to transport Beskar.
    • HMS Shii-Cho - Second Ship completed in the Makashi class light cruiser line. Participated in the Beskar escort mission, as well as a training exercise between the Elysium Empire and the Children of the Protectors. Was present at the wedding of Loreena Arenais-Valhoun and Rex Valhoun where it launched an exorbitant amount of fireworks. She was also the assigned protecting cruiser for the Sluis Van Summit between the Sluissi and the corporate members of the Elysium Empire. She is now assigned as the flagship of the Striking Serpent Battlegroup.
    • Line-Captain Thaliias’s original sub-division - First ships to be fully updated for the Battlegroup using the new protocols. Known for hunting pirates that prey on the Elysium Nomadic Civilian Fleet.
      • HMS Bloodbath
      • HMS Stormwind
      • HMS Umbral Flame
      • HMS Burning Brand
      • HMS Blazing Wind
COMPOSITION INFORMATION
  • Fleet Size: Small
  • Lead Ship: HMS Shi-Cho
  • Composition: 9800 meters
    • 1x Longneck Hangar Ship
      • HMS Basilisk
        • 3x X-class Elysium Starfighter Squadrons (X)
        • 3x Moon-Class Interceptor Squadrons (X)
        • 3x Ferrum-Class Bomber Squadrons (X)
    • 4x Rectifier Class Heavy Cruisers
      • HMS Judge
        • 1x Saberdroid Starfighter Squadron (X)
      • HMS Jury
        • 1x Saberdroid Starfighter Squadron (X)
      • HMS Executioner
        • 1x Saberdroid Starfighter Squadron (X)
      • HMS Bloodbath
        • Notable Marine Units:
          • Viper Battalion (1100 troops)
          • Cobra Battalion (1100 troops)
        • 1 Squadron Support (4 ships)
    • 4x Makashi Class Light Cruisers
      • HMS Shii-Cho (Flag)
        • 1x X-class Elysium Starfighter Squadron (X) 163rd Squadron
        • 1x Ferrum-Class Bomber Squadron (X) Bantha Boy Squadron
        • 1x Imperial LAAT-2 Squadron (X)
        • Module slots have high powered sensors and comm arrays for breaking through jamming
          • (X) booster included
      • HMS Makashi
        • 1x X-class Elysium Starfighter Squadron (X)
        • 1x Ferrum-Class Bomber Squadron (X)
        • 1x Imperial LAAT-2 Squadron (X)
        • Module slots have EIX 1 ION cannons mounted (4x per side, 2 per module, 8 cannons in total)
      • HMS Soresu
        • 1x X-class Elysium Starfighter Squadron (X)
        • 1x Ferrum-Class Bomber Squadron (X)
        • 1x Imperial LAAT-2 Squadron (X)
        • Module slots have been fitted with Battledroid racks, entire ship is capable of carrying 8000 battle droids at a time.
      • HMS Storm Wind
        • Notable Marine unit:
          • The 204th, “Storm Chasers” (110 troops)
        • 3x X-class Elysium Starfighter Squadron (X) (with fighter hangar modules)
          • Hammer Squad (senior)
          • Skull Squad (veteran)
          • Arrow Squad (recruits)
        • Support Craft: 1 Squadron support swapped out for tanks
          • Anvil Squadron
    • 3x KH-ICC Corvettes
      • HMS Viper
        • 1x Saberdroid Starfighter Squadron (X)
        • 1x Imperial LAAT-2 Squadron (X)
      • HMS Garter
        • 1x Saberdroid Starfighter Squadron (X)
        • 1x Imperial LAAT-2 Squadron (X)
      • HMS Adder
        • 1x Saberdroid Starfighter Squadron (X)
        • 1x Imperial LAAT-2 Squadron (X)
    • 9x Val Khaar-class Corvettes
      • HMS Black Mamba
        • 1x ST-Class Multirole Starfighter squadron (X)
      • HMS Python
        • 1x ST-Class Multirole Starfighter squadron (X)
      • HMS Constrictor
        • 1x ST-Class Multirole Starfighter squadron (X)
      • HMS Cobra
        • 1x ST-Class Multirole Starfighter squadron (X)
      • HMS Rattler
        • 1x ST-Class Multirole Starfighter squadron (X)
      • HMS Asp
        • 1x ST-Class Multirole Starfighter squadron (X)
      • HMS Umbral Flame
        • 1x ST-Class Multirole Starfighter squadron (X) | Umbral Squad
      • HMS Burning Brand
      • HMS Blazing Wind
        • 1x ST-Class Multirole Starfighter squadron (X) | Lightning Squad
    • 3x Special Forces Val Khaar-Class Corvettes
      • HMS Wickes
        • 1x Imperial LAAT-2 Squadron (X)
      • HMS Clemson
        • 1x Imperial LAAT-2 Squadron (X)
      • HMS Fletcher
        • 1x Imperial LAAT-2 Squadron (X)

MEMBERS
  • Commodore Thaliias- Commander In Chief of the Striking Serpent Battlegroup (PC)
    • Chiss Female
  • Captain Treyfa - Captain of the HMS Shi-Cho (NPC)
    • Pantoran Female
  • Commodore Burtch - Previous Commander In Chief of the Striking Serpent Battlegroup (PC) (now at a desk assignment)
    • Chiss Male
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The first of many battlegroups formed and shaped by the goals of the Elysium Empire Battle-Line Synergy Project. This battle group is made to test out the technologies and tactics of the Elysium Empire before refining them for the rest of the navy. Some of the ships are already veterans, and some are new. It will be interesting to see how they fair in battle.
 
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Commodore Burtch

Naval Officer Of The Elysium Empire
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Allyson Locke Allyson Locke

Changes made:
  • Placed Thaliias Thaliias in charge of the Battlegroup
  • Organize the ships for better reader comprehension.
Also, if at all possible, I’d like to grant Thaliias Thaliias formal permissions to request and make edits on this submission if I am unavailable.
 
Taiia's Shadow
Roleplay Judge
Also, if at all possible, I’d like to grant Thaliias Thaliias Thaliias Thaliias formal permissions to request and make edits on this submission if I am unavailable.

Unfortunately, you cannot grant permission to another character(writer) to edit a submission of yours. Only the OP can request edits, and only the OP can make those edits. This is per the Codex Guidelines & per the Codex admin Srina Talon Srina Talon
 
Thrice-Born Hound
Codex Judge
Under Review Commodore Burtch Commodore Burtch

The changes all look good to me, but I do have one question. For your image credit, you list Heath Valhoun. Did he produce this logo entirely from scratch, drawing it by hand or in a computer program? If not (and I'm guessing not, because I see the WoW Alliance emblem in there, and the two parts of the image are of different image style and quality), we need links to the source images used in the symbol.

Please check with Heath Valhoun about that. Once we have sources, or if he confirms that he hand-drew it, I'll stamp this approved.
 
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