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Approved Starship Nega Wing Class Starfighter

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Krass Wyms

Jedi Tech Division
Factory Judge
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Choushin Class Uneti: The heart of the ship and a gift from the commonwealth for the jedi in their forging. Krass has one of the younger generation trees installed allowing the jedi to contact without communications other choushin class ships.
  • Seven Points: Throughout the ship, the amnioid fluid flows like a bloodstream throughout it which is duel edged. It it like a circulatory system that keeps the techno-organic systems of the ship flowing and feeds into the seedlings that are being grown for children ships. It shares a mitochondrial cell connecting the ships to the mother and are organelles that will take in nutrients then break them down and create energy rich molecules for the ship. The seven main points are points that can be accessed to connects with the ship so it is always running smoothly.
  • Bonding: The trees are finicky and require a jedi to bond with them locking out others. The duel nature of the starfighters sees them using a dwarfed tree intentionally small and within the control systems. The pilot bonds with it as the ship interior is grown.
  • Duel structure: Designed two fold, the first is the exterior exoskeleton that gives the appearance of a standard starfighter. The interior itself usually measuring in the module of the ship itself is techno-organic with the tree. Encased in the framework and superstructure of the exoskeleton for protection.
  • Slave System: Designed to be able to function with one jedi controlling several ships at a time in unison like old model vectors. A single pilot can't deftly control a ship and make it preform complex mocves but flying in unison, using weapons systems and jumping to hyperspace is able to be done.
  • Lightside Aura: The choushin design is meant to make sure this is a lightside vessel. it radiates the lightside of the force to repel darksiders from entering and most who touch the darkside feel sick when inside of the ship. When on the ground it makes a bubble of force energy with the light about ten meters. The kyber crystal heart of the ship lets it emanate the force.
  • Advanced hyperdrive: The ship is equipped with an advanced hyperdrive that uses a whammy upgrade to produce an interdiction field around it for a brief moment.
  • Experimental Speeds: The hyperdrive is highly experimental and designed to push the limits of the technology. With the force enhancement to the ship it creates a Hyper tunneling effect that accelerates the ship to speeds previously unseen but it requires substantial recharges before it is able to be utilized again.
  • Powerful darksiders: The lightside nature of the ships make it harder to alter or target it with the darkside to all but the strongest of masters. However that means the ship itself is vulnerable to force attacks.
WEAKNESSES
  • Kyber crystals: Using the design of the finalizer and enhancing the power of the weapons with crystals gives the ships a secondary effect as the crystals used for weapons can be explosive if cracked.
  • Sleg: A powerful energy enhancer, the sleg absorbs and channels the excessive heat generated by the chassis of the speeder. Making them maintain a stronger level of power but also increases the chances that they could explode from the heat.
  • Hive Minded: A benefit in some ways allowing the ships to heal each others internal systems itself but it also means that they share pain. A strange effect is choushin ships can refuse to attack each other.
  • Organic: With the amnioid a skilled force user is able to properly stun and stop the functions in their tracks. As Satele Shan showed the fluid produced by the circuits can be manipulated and used to calm or disable the bodies for a time as long as there is concentration and knowledge of the fluid. Like a blood flow in the body it can be constricted and have build up of waste or gunk that damages the ship like a heart attack or even stroke.
  • Limited Armament: Designed with self replenishing ordinance bays. While it can eventually restock its own bombs and missiles it isn't instant and can take several hours.
  • Shared Pain: A danger and something felt from the onset and creation of them. The choushin share pain which can affect all of the ships from starfighters to capital ships.
  • Radiates the Lightside of the force like a beacon alerting others to its location.
  • Force Nullification: The ship is seeped in the lightside of the force and such it does not function well when the force is nullified. The choushin itself can be damaged or even die without the force over an extended period of time.
DESCRIPTION
Designed at the request of Vexander to Sasori, Krass though received the specs and went to work engineering a sophisticated model starfighter that would serve an elite jedi fighter squadron well enough. He wanted an x-wing and it was doable, the design was slighhtly rounded up legnth and size wise. The structure designed to allow maximum protection and maximum space used as a living module was built for the pilot to be able to survive on long term missions with recyclers for food, water, air. Advanced communication systems, replenishing weapons that could overtime refill their bays. This cut down on attaching heavy bomb bays same as using somin class turrets which gave the iconic design several turrets that functioned in different firing modes as well as features.

From laser to ion and the ability to tag for nano missiles up to the all important composite beam blast which would allow the Nega class to smash into ships well above its weight class with a turbolaser blast. The flight systems were set up with most systems using the long nose to be housed in a more complicated area but the ship has advanced system optimizations, hyperspace tracking programs, slave circuits with a built in slicer allowing it to slice into other ships in range if they have circuits, advanced shielding designed to absorb blaster and kinetic shots to protect itself as well as resist ion and gravity. Hydro-shielding let it go underwater and serve like a submersible fighter and the ability to maneuver seamlessly between water, space and atmosphere turns it into a highly functional fighter.

Then came the jedi aspects of it, the rest was fairly standard feature wise bbut the jedi aspects meant using thee choushin and kybber hearts. Krass went to work and each ship is grown essentially for the pilot and bonded to them... each one imprinting to them as their connection as well as and water nourishes the smaller trees into becoming much stronger. A kyber crystal is made to augment the already impressive power supply on top of letting it ooze and radiate the lightside of the force to the jedi and their allies. Each one being able to make a bubble of the lightside that can be felt. The final thign though was making it like the newly rediscovered vectors.. thhey couldn't mirror the saber cannons but the slaving allowing one pilot to control several ships for attack runs was possible.

Work on the ship yielded more, the testing and improvement of the hyperdrive let them push towards methods to try and icnrease the power and speed of hyperspace travel. Utalizing the force enahcement from the ships systems and its construction it can enter almost sub-hyperspace where the iso-didact power can penetrate to move through the galaxy and cover vast distances much faster. This does give a strange effect as the fighters can be seen from multiple locations around the galaxy at the same time as it moves through sub hyperspace. THe power required to punch through though overheats the capacitors built into the ship and it is not sustainable over large periods of time but it could allow vast travel distances.
 
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Krass Wyms Krass Wyms

Why hello there; we've got a few matters to resolve before I can Approve this.
  • You'll probably want to include Vexander himself in Affiliation, given the Intent.​
  • Is this meant to have a 0.03 Hyperdrive? If so, that's significantly faster than anything I've seen approved on the site before; Hyperdrive Class isn't terribly important in general, given how time works on Chaos, but something that unusual will require some justification.​
  • Force Nexuses are the purview of Codex, not Factory - as such, I would prefer you rename the "Force Nexus" Strength to something with fewer implications. The contents themselves are fine.​
  • "Powerful Darksiders" doesn't really read like a Weakness, quite the contrary - the way I read it is that only the strongest of Masters would be able to affect it with force abilities, which is clearly not much of a Weakness. "However that means the ship itself is vulnerable to force attacks." seems to contradict this, however - I'd ask that you clean up that Weakness somehow, make the intent more understandable.​
  • What exactly does the "Duel structure" Strength mean? "The interior itself usually measuring a kilometer of the ship itself is techno-organic with the tree." is especially difficult to understand, do you mean to imply that it is "bigger on the inside" and significantly so?​
 

Krass Wyms

Jedi Tech Division
Factory Judge
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the duel stggructure goes with the design of the choushin. it is organic internally in this case the module for the ships interior with one of the smaller saplings there to bond with the jedi pilot and then an exterior of metal and ship design with its systems. I edited it to hopefully sound bette rin many places and added a little more about the hyperdrive. ANy more edits please tell me.
 
Krass Wyms Krass Wyms

Alright, that does it for me - just be aware that any references to sub-hyperspace should be treated as comparisons and fluff, not a reflection of capabilities in any way shape or form analogous to Starkiller Base. I'd suggest ensuring that anyone who uses this submission understands that.

Not that there are many people that'd be crazy enough to try that, given the restrictions on Superweapons.

Approved.
 
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