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Approved Starship The Jagged Smile

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Nodak

The Ironbreaker
Nodak
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: The Sith Order
  • Affiliation: Nodak
  • Market Status: Closed Market
  • Model: SF-13 "Legion" Class Star Frigate
  • Modularity:
    • Various aesthetic changes.
    • Various hanger loadouts.
    • Personalized Comfort Measures
      • Altered Officer's Quarters
      • Altered Captain's Quarters
  • Production: Unique
  • Material:
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Sith Shipboard Assault Frigate
  • Length: 500 meters
  • Width: 123 meters
  • Height: 118 meters
  • Armament: High (Due to the Fusion Accelerator Cannon; Low without it)
    • Fore:
    • Port / Starboard [Per Side]:
      • [2] Tractor Beams
      • [6] Hybrid Barbette Dual-Barreled Laser Cannons w/ Fast Track Mounts
      • [15] Recessed Missile Silos w/ Reinforced Blast Covers & Fast Loading Systems
      • [28] Hybrid Barbette Point Defense Cannons w/ Fast Track Mounts
    • Aft:
      • [7] Hybrid Barbette Point Defense Cannons w/ Fast Track Mounts
  • Defenses: Very High
  • Hangar Space: Average: 3
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters: 2 squadrons
    • Support Craft: 1 squadron
  • Single Craft Hangar:Yes
    • Shuttle
  • Maneuverability Rating: Low - 55 DPF
  • Speed Rating: Very High- 95 MGLT
    • Maximum Atmospheric Speed: 910 km/h
      • Lowest Rated Orbit: Landing Capable
  • Hyperdrive: HS-10 "Hermes" Class Hyperdrive w/ Reinforced Backup
  • Hyperdrive Class:
    • Primary Hyperdrive Rating: Class 1.0
    • Secondary Hyperdrive Rating: Class 5.5
  • Engine System: IE-10 "Event Horizon" Class Ion Engine
    • Primary Unit(s): [2] Main Engines
    • Secondary Unit(s): [2] Supplementary Engines
    • Accessory Unit(s): N/A
  • Power Plants:
  • Ground Compliment:
    • Military Personnel (Security & Operational Compliment):
      • 2,750 Sith Legionaries
    • Vehicle Compliment:
      • N/A
  • Crew Requirements:
    • Optimal:
      • Officer(s): 150
      • Crew: 9,543 (including Airwing)
    • Skeleton:
      • Officer(s): 17
      • Crew: 1,605
  • Escape Craft:
    • [2] Large Lifeboats
      • Fifty Person Capacity
    • [40] Medium Lifeboats
      • Twenty Five Person Capacity
    • [150] Planetary Escape Pods
      • Fitted to Officer Quarters
  • Cargo Capacity: 9,500 Metric Tonnes
  • Consumables: 1.5 Years
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
  • Powerful Shields / Armor Compliments
  • Military Grade Gravity Well Projectors
  • Stealth Field Generator
  • Sith Meditation Chamber
STRENGTHS
  • Bulwark -
    • Essentially nothing has changed insofar as the defensive capabilities and the ability to soak damage is concerned from the Jagged Smile and the base model of the 'Legion' Frigate. It still performs its roll with extreme prejudice save for the fact that with its augmented speed it is capable to close or widen the distance on enemy vessels more swiftly than its originator.
  • Shipboard Combat Focus -
    • Retrofitted and modified from its original design, the Jagged Smile is faster and more maneuverable than its fore bearer enable it to close on larger ships and maneuver close to them where there powerful guns will be less effective. It excels at ship boarding action, powerful tractor beams and magnetic clamps anchor the frigate to larger vessels or trapping smaller ones while umbilical assault tubes penetrate into their hulls and transport troops across on mass.
  • Stealth Field Generator -
    • Outfitted with a powerful Stealth Field Generator the Jagged Smile is able to strike and escape against enemy vessels unexpectedly. Larger Capital Ships have little chance of being able to detect the Frigate before it's to late and smaller vessels can fly into its reach without ever knowing.
NEUTRAL
  • Deadly at the Fore -
    • The Jagged Smile has a single powerful weapon built into its fore in the form of a Fusion Accelerator Cannon. It has the power to rip a standard Star Destroyer in half at range like other weapons of its caliber however it has only a single firing arc which is forward ensuring it is a useless weapon against anything on the Frigates port/starboard sides or in its aft.
  • Ultimate Power -
    • Antimatter is considered by some to be the ultimate power source, more intense than fusion and on the same level as singularity power though perhaps a tad more unstable. The Antimatter Reactor at the core of the Jagged Smile provides the necessary boost to the ships power output to make it faster, clocking the engines of the Frigate to even higher levels of velocity and ensuring its energy runs at maximum levels. Of course due to the instability of the Antimatter Core a large portion of the power created is used to maintain powerful shields that contain the core itself lest it rip the ship apart from the inside.

WEAKNESSES
  • Almost Toothless -
    • Like a standard 'Legion' Frigate the Jagged Smile is not made to stand up to larger vessels and since it is unique among the Frigates it is based off of there is little chance of that changing. The Jagged Smile has one major offensive weapon, the Fusion Accelerator Cannon mounted at its fore which it is unable to fire while its Stealth Field Generator is activated and which only has a forward facing arc of fire.
  • Energy Drain -
    • The Stealth Field Generator draws power from the weapons system of the Frigate however as its primary purpose is to close with enemy vessels to commence boarding action this is usually only a minor inconvenience. In such cases where circumstances transform any engagement into a ranged one its is likely the Jagged Smile will use its powerful engines and high speed to retreat and out pace its opponents. Gravity Well Projectors also do not function when the ship is cloaked.
DESCRIPTION
Built off the original SF-13 "Legion" Class Star Frigate designed in 864ABY by Jaeger Solutions commissioned by the Dark Council the Jagged Smile is a unique ship retrofitted to advance the previous design and act as the personal vessel of Nodak, the Ironbreaker.

It retains all of the original systems of the regular 'Legion' Class Star Frigate but has cut back on the addition of several Escape Boats to make room on the hull for several new features. Tractor Beams and Magnetic Docking Clamps placed on the Port/Starboard sides enable the Frigate to attach itself to larger enemy vessels for ship boarding action, a Stealth Generator lets it move unseen as it makes ground on its prey and the transition of one squadron of Starfighters for Support Craft alongside Umbilical Assault Tube technology lets it deliver its troops with the highest rate of efficiency.

Other changes between the standard 'Legion' Frigate and the Jagged Smile are the use of an Antimatter Reactor which replaces the 'Minerva' Class Reactor but still generates the enormous amount of power that the ship requires to effectively use its Fusion Accelerator Cannon which replaces the "Pit Horror" Hypervelocity Cannon that is a standard feature on the base ship. Strictly speaking the Jagged Smile, like the standard 'Legion' Class is not designed with a heavy armament however due to the sheer power of its Fusion Accelerator Cannon it was rated by its developers as high.

Engine efficiency, upgraded thanks to the Antimatter Core make the Jagged Smile the top of the line. Even the fastest Cruisers and Star Destroyers have little chance to outrun it or train weapons on it effectively as it closes, only the fastest Corvettes Frigates have any chance of out pacing it and many Starfighters will even find themselves tested. Gravity Well Projectors make retreating into hyperspace even more unlikely when fleeing the Jagged Smile.

The Ironbreaker has outfitted the Frigate with a personal 'Meditation Chamber' as well allowing him to focus his connection to the darkside and augment his powers prior to a battle occurring. Naturally this chamber is also part of his personal lifeboat if the ship is threatened with destruction and ejection is required.

*Special thanks to Darth Empyrean Darth Empyrean for letting me create something using his original design from which this submission relies heavily on.
 
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MANIAC

HPI AI; Terraris Command
MANIAC
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Nodak Nodak

This is not really a modified version (what you asked from Earl), you literally copy pasted the original version and added a single Stealth field generator to it and modified the speed and maneuverability .
  • About the Affiliation. It is a Unique object, so it is the Faction's (which means anyone can use it without your permission, because it is the faction's) or yours? Please delete one of it.
  • Your ratings are underpowered (-1), if you want, you can edit.
  • You cannot use the following subs, because all of them are closed market submissions. Your permission is about only to use the ship as a basic ship, and you wrote you want to modify it for your own, thus it does not contain the permission to use the closed market technologies. So please delete or modify these, or ask Earl, Nicademus Blith and ADM. Reshmar for permissions.
    • DC-2A
    • Ferrocarbon Condensed-matter Composite "FCMC" Starship Frame System
    • BE-1313 "Gos Karza" Class Battery Emplacement
    • HVC-120 "Pit Horror" Hypervelocity Cannon
    • BWR-44 "Minerva" Class Reactor
    • SG-1113 "The Aegis" Class Shield Generator
 

Nodak

The Ironbreaker
Nodak
Character Bio
MANIAC MANIAC maybe I wasn't clear on what I was looking for, which if that is the case I take responsibility for. The intent was to take the original model and upgrade it so that it still remained a SF-13 "Legion" Class Star Frigate but with a few extra perks/modifications as it were. It is still largely the exact same vessel though the small upgrades, tweaks, etc make it 'unique' rather than of the standard 'minor' production rating the original design has. The original design, after all is quite well done and I wouldn't presume to want to change it on a grand scale.

All that said I can ask the original creator about the permissions and make myself more clear in case he misunderstood as well and I'll fix the affiliation and ratings.
 
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MANIAC

HPI AI; Terraris Command
MANIAC
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Nodak Nodak

Thank you! The "BWR-44 "Minerva" Class Reactor" are still closed market item. I can offer two other options instad of this one. One is Prawn's reactor, the other is my own. Both are open market and know the same what you want from the Minerva.
 
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