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Approved Starship Sloane-class, Battlecruiser

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RAE SLOANE
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To submit Fiolette’s flagship the Rae Sloane.
  • Image Source: Ansel Hsiao (x)
  • Canon Link: n/a
  • Permissions: Solarium Glasteel (x), Affiliation Change (x)
  • Primary Source: Serran, Warspite, Resurgent
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Auxiliary Systems:
    • Auxiliary Power Generator Systems
    • Auxiliary Power Converter and Control Systems
    • Systems Control Center
    • Supplemental Power Control Center
    • Reserve Power Generator Systems
    • Emergency Back-up Power Generator Systems
    • Auxiliary Reactor Control Center
    • Auxiliary Core Coolant Systems Management
    • Auxiliary Shield Power Management Systems
    • Emergency Shield Operations and Power Management System
    • Emergency Command Operations Center
    • Emergency Disengagement Systems
    • Emergency Intrepid Hull Deployment Systems
    • Emergency Life Support Systems Management
    • Emergency Power Capacitor Control Systems
    • Escape Pod Control Systems Management
    • Automatic Failsafe and Containment Systems Management
  • Communication Systems:
    • Coordinated Command Integration Encryption Suite
    • Encrypted Communications Suite, Short-Range Encrypted Data Network
    • Fleet Control Data Exchange Network
    • Hyperwave Communications and Encryption Network
    • Interfleet, Intrafleet Communications and Encryption Network, [SIZE=10pt]and Key Systems[/SIZE]
    • Long Range Communications Management Systems, Encryption Key Systems
    • Standard Communications Management Suite
  • Flight Systems:
    • Flight Control Navigational Systems Suite
    • Primary Flight Controller Management Systems
    • Secondary Flight Controller Management Systems
    • Propulsion Systems Control Suite
    • Sublight Systems Control Suite
    • Flight Control Power Conversion Systems
    • Hyperlane Navigational Systems
    • Galactic Hyperspace Holosuite Systems
    • Hyperdrive Power Control Systems
    • Jump Point Navigational Control Systems
  • Engineering Systems:
    • Primary Power Management Control Suite
    • Secondary Power Management Control Suite
    • Power Conversion Systems Control
    • Reactor Core Control System
    • Core Coolant Management Suite
    • Fail-Safe and Containment Systems
    • Reactor Disengagement Systems
    • Engineering Control Suite
    • Secondary Reactor Control System
    • Secondary Core Coolant Management Suite
    • Secondary Reactor Disengagement Systems
    • Shield Generator Power Management Suite
    • Weapons Power Generator Management Suite
    • Life Support Systems Management
    • Hazard and Damage Control Management Systems
    • Holosuite Power Systems Management
    • Tractor / Pressor Beam Power Control Systems
    • Reactionary Repulsor Power Generator System
    • Waste and Hazardous Waste Management Systems
    • Primary Shield Generator Power Systems
    • Capacitor Control Systems Suite
    • Secondary Shield Generator Power Systems
    • Dedicated Power Blackout Power Generator
    • Secondary Power Conversion Systems Control
    • Secondary Engineering Control Suite
    • Dedicated Weapons Power Generator Systems
    • Back-up Dedicated Weapons Power Generator Systems
    • Emergency Fail-Safe and Containment Systems
    • Safety Management Suite, Escape Pod Power Reroute Systems
  • Tactical and Security Systems
    • Redundant Shield Management Systems
    • Swarm Targeting and Tracking Sensor Systems, Full Range
    • Semira Defensive Systems Management
    • Shield Capacitor Power System Management
    • Shield Management Systems and Power Conversion
    • Shield Booster Management Systems, Tertiary Shield Generator
    • Tactical Analysis, Computer-Aided Targeting Systems
    • Target Range Finder, Computer Aided Systems
    • Automated Target Lead, Lock-On System Management
    • Automated Reload and Internal Temperature Check Systems
    • Automated Weapons Waste Disposal Systems
    • Weapons Control and Munitions Management Systems
    • Weapons Waste Containment and Hazard Control Management
    • Nova Shield Management Systems
  • Sensor Systems:
    • Multi-Directional Long Range Sensor Arrays
    • Navigational Sensor Arrays and Control Suite
    • Short-Range Tachyon Sensor Network
    • Long Range Gravitational Mass Sensor Suite
    • Starship Signature Identifier Scanning Systems, Full Range
    • Full Range Hyper-Navigational Sensor System
    • Cargo Sweep and Identifier Scanning System, Standard Range
    • Full Range Planetary Scanner, Lifesigns Identifier System

ADVANCED SYSTEMS


Strengths:

  • Long Range: Many of the weapons aboard the vessel are able to strike at a distance.
  • Stealth: It contains a number of stealth technologies in an effort to conceal its presence both to the naked eye and to sensors.
Weaknesses:
  • Lumbering: A very slow maneuvering and slow ship in general, the ship is unable to outpace much in the way of speed. Making it vulnerable to smaller and more agile ships that may be able to weave in and out of its firing arcs and blind spots before it can turn away from danger.
  • Short Range: While having many long-range and even some standard range weapons, the vessel is unable to defend effectively. While it does employ a number of point defense systems in conjunction with missile systems. Overall, the ship is heavily reliant on its escorts and starfighters to keep it safe.
DESCRIPTION:
Initially, the project was set to be the refit of the Elidibus, however; after a number of disagreements, the project changed. No longer were the specifications listed to be for an overhaul, but instead were to go to Fiolette Raaf’s personal flagship the Rae Sloane. The Rae Sloane would serve as the Lord Admiral’s mobile base of operations while engaging the enemies of the Sith Empire. Having since retired from active military duty with the Sith Empire. Fiolette Raaf has since worked to acquire the rights to purchase her ship outright from the Sith Empire (a bit ludicrous in her opinion since she built it).

Utilizing Project Serran as a basis, both Fiolette Raaf and her daughter Ryssa Yvarro led the new Project Sloane into the construction phase. Work for the Sloane would be done in a set of orbital shipyards within the Galidraan System.

Project Sloane would be based on the old Bellator designs but with an upgrade or two and a change in aesthetics. A black matte paint scheme with a reflec-nykkalt coating to keep it off sensors at least for a moment followed by an exact layer by layer hull scheme that the Serran was built on. Then comes the guns, and on Ryssa’s orders a divorce from utilizing Aurora Industries weapons and going back to basics when it comes to turbolasers.

While Fiolette objected, Ryssa insisted it would be for the better as the new Chief of Operations works to realign the company’s goals and workloads. Defensively the Sloane would have a few differences between it and the Serran but would keep in the tradition of having a very similar schematic. Advance systems would also be similar but not the same with key differences being highlighted with one or two features. This includes the hyperwave beacon scrambler, gemcutter and the inclusion of the optical camouflage system and the thrust trace damper.

The Sloane would also boast thirty squadrons for combat with six support squadrons in addition to that. In keeping with Primo Victorian’s full utilization philosophy the ship when not in combat is designated a deep-space exploration and recon vessel and is equipped with various deep-space and long-range scientific scanners and scientific laboratories not normally found on other Sith-Imperial vessels. The ship would also boast the ability to cater to diplomatic functions with elegant suites and conference rooms in addition to this the Sloane can also work to decrypt sensitive information and keep intelligence networks going.

The Rae Sloane also features a ‘Galaxy-view bridge’ that eliminates the normal day to day Imperial vessel trench. Everything is brought to a level with the commanding officer being able to oversee or view the array of consoles and computers that work to keep the vessel going. A small raised platform that is designated the ‘command center’ also works to give the command team a great survey of the bridge area. A captain’s ready room and admiral’s ready room are also attached to the bridge to help manage both the vessel and the fleet that the Rae Sloane will no doubt lead.


Change Log;

  • January 13th 2020; General cleanup, formatting disrupted due to server migration.
  • May 18th 2020; Affiliation/manufacturing removal (to reflect updated Factory standards that companies no longer need a major faction for ships up to 5000m), sensor suite change to remove Sith Empire affiliated gear. Armament updated to include vilestar plasma cannons, and covenator flak cannons.
 
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Fiolette Raaf

Wow, another terrific submission! Hi, I am Vis and I will be reviewing this submission.

I don't mean to put a damper on this, because honestly it's a very nicely-made, clean sub and frankly, it's one of the nicest battlecruisers I have seen role through here. But, since the site update, all of your links to Chaos canon submissions and entries are broken. It's something we're all experiencing and I know the frustration, however, I still have to ask you to please repair these to their updated locations on this new server. Also, we're using the 5.1 Ship Templates now, and there's only a few small changes but they're still now in effect, and your submission needs to reflect them.

I know, after all the work you have obviously put in here, to say it's frustrating is nothing short of obvious, and it seems hair-splitty but it's really just our attempt to bring the Factory into harmony with modern tech across the Board and establish some consistency going forward. Thank you so much for all you have done, and I am sorry to ask you to do more but alas I have no choice.

Please let me know if you'd like me to move this to pre-factory or what you'd like me to do. Again, it's a great submission, and the adjustments are minimal but frustrating I know. Also, by my reckoning you're two ratings low on this submission. I'll look again to be sure, but you might want to bump up your ratings a bit.

Thanks in advance for your patience, cooperation, and understanding.
 
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