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Codex Denied Picket Fleet | Corporate Authorities of Denon

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a Space Navy for the Corporate Authorities of Denon
  • Image Credit: Here
  • Canon: Here
  • Permissions: Here
  • Links:N/A
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Organization Name: Picket Fleet
  • Classification: Naval Orginization
  • Affiliation: Corporate Authorities of Denon
  • Organization Symbol: N/A
  • Description: The Corporate Picket Fleet serves as the official naval arm of the Corporate Sector Authority with the Picket Fleet being tasked in hunting down Smugglers and Pirates and ensuring that Corporate Space is safe from outside threats.
GEOGRAPHICAL INFORMATION
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Hierarchy:
    • Head Overseer
    • Supreme Commander
    • High Admiral
    • Fleet Admiral
    • Vice Admiral
    • Rear Admiral
    • Commodore
    • Captain
    • Lieutenant
  • Membership: The Bulk of the Corporate Picket Fleet enlisted personnel is composed of Corporate Citizens though the mid-level and senior personnel consist of former officers of the Corporate Sector and of the Core Imperial Confederation.
  • Climate: Most members of the Picket Fleet are former Personnel from the CSA and some ex-Imperial officers. To many the Picket Fleet is seen as an attempt to ensure that the Corporate Authorities of Denon are able to remain independent from it’s neighbours as well as a means to correct the errors of the CSA and to prevent the CAD from making the same mistakes as them. In addition many members see working for the Picket Fleet as the best way to avoid the brutality of CorpSec and the dark nature of Darkwire.
  • Reputation: Given at how this Fleet was secretly assembled by Cal Morrow , both CorpSec and Darkwire distrust the Picket Fleet while the Big Five of the Direx Board see this as Cal's Attempt to further expand his influence and counter theirs.
  • Curios: N/A
  • Rules: The Picket Fleet follows the standard Rules of a Naval Organization
  • Goals: To Ensure that the Territories of the Corporate Authority of Denon are protected against Internal and External Threats
MEMBERS
Cal Morrow - The Head Overseer of the Picket Fleet
Dorian Sevanar - Supreme Commander of the Picket Fleet [Under the Identity of Josiah Truden]

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
After the Fall of the CSA , many Corporate Individuals unwilling to serve the Sith Empire fled to the Planet of Denon where they built a new Corporatocracy similar to the former CSA called the Corporate Authorities of Denon. Soon falling under the control of the mysterious Mr.Fey who became the ExO of the CAD by 858 ABY , the Corporate Authorities rose in prominence soon becoming a Major Power in the Galaxy. However despite this the core of the CAD's power was Darkwire , the criminal syndicate whom had been critical to it's rise in prominence. However with the ascension of Ewan Mansvolk , the CAD went through a new phase.

A Former businessman of the former CSA , Ewan Mansvolk saw that without a strong military the CAD was doomed to fall like it's predecessor and given that the CAD had grown reliant on Darkwire to expand it's influence , Ewan Mansvolk went on to secretly build a naval branch for the CAD with the support and funding of the various members of the Direx Board who secretly opposed the Strongest individuals of the Direx Board and their reliance on Darkwire intending to reduce the influence of those individuals given that they were very influential. By 860 ABY , this fleet came to be known as the Picket Fleet and was soon revealed to the ExO during a private meeting between the Prex and the ExO.

However despite such revelation , the Picket Fleet has yet to be revealed to Darkwire and the major players of the Direx Board as Ewan Mansvolk continues to build up his own influence within the CAD securing the support of other members of the Direx Board and elements of CorpSec opposed to Marlene Starlight.
 
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Kalic Daws

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Cal Morrow

Ok, while this looks cool, there are some issues.

First off, one of the major issues is the affiliation. The fleet is definitely the size of a major faction fleet, but without a link in the group it is involved with, it can be difficult to track who the fleet is under. If they are under a major faction, which I assume with you being in Darkwire, there won't be as many issues. If not, then this chart will help as a basic guide:
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One of the minor issues the link in your Permissions section should be in Image Credit. Permissions in for factory and codex subs that aren't open market, and leads to the next major issue. The first two ships you list are semi-unique, and limited to one per writer. Along with that, the Lucrehulk is a Silver Jedi Order variant, and the Vero-class is closed market. Along with this, the link to the Imperator-class leads to a completely different vessel.
 
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