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Approved NPC Prefsbelt Auxiliary Corps

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To flesh out the lore of Prefsbelt Command.
  • Image Credit: Atlas Kane for the gorgeous logo. Imgur [x] and the Resident Evil wiki [x]
  • Role: As a garrisoning force for Prefsbelt, but also to elaborate on lore there.
  • Permissions:
    • ApexTech [x]
    • Gat Tambor [x]
    • REC [x] [x]
    • Corondex [x]
  • Links: Found within submission.

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Prefsbelt Auxiliaries performing a sweep of the countryside.

GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Unit Name: Prefsbelt Auxiliary Corps
  • Affiliation: Prefsbelt Command, and the New Imperial Order [x].
  • Classification: Regular Infantry, with specialised branches of pioneers, artillery and mechanised units.
  • Description: The Prefsbelt Auxiliary are units which are more or less cobbled together as a mixture of ideological fanatics, misfits and idealists, all of whom have fallen some way or another onto Prefsbelt. From there, they’ve been drilled excessively, and are considered the first line of defence for any civil disturbance or military incursion. The Pefsbelt Auxiliary are a little less professional than the Stossjaeger. While most will deal with you quickly, some have been known to jeer at outsiders, and out of the two branches it is the Auxiliary who often get into scraps. The Auxiliary however when on the battlefield or when on base are disciplined, providing roving patrols and eyes on the ground for their superiors.

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The average Auxiliary in full combat dress.

COMBAT INFORMATION:
  • Unit Size: Large
  • Unit Availability: Uncommon
  • Unit Experience: Trained
  • Equipment:
    • KXR SFR-58 'Bozdugan' Blaster Rifle [x]
    • IL-22B Assault Carbine [x]
    • Rhypalm [x]
    • IL-62G Smart Grenade [x]
    • KXA ABDG-01x 'Null' Grenade [x]
    • BH 'Specter' Slicer Vibroknife [x]
    • REC-RCB/01 Enforcement Baton [x]
    • BH 'Durin' Charric Blaster Pistol [x]
    • KXR SBR-60x Particle Beam Battle Rifle [x]
    • PC-1 Auxiliary Trooper Armour [x]
  • Combat Function: The Prefsbelt Auxiliary are first and foremost an infantry corps. They are more than likely found on Prefsbelt IV and its adjacent space stations policing citizenry, and administering the laws of the sector. The Prefsbelt Auxiliary are also the first line of defence in case of any attack on Prefsbelt, and as such are always armed to the teeth, even if they are not wearing their full armour. Either with pistols or rifles. In high security installations, the Prefsbelt Auxiliary also undertake supportive roles, such as artillery gunners and operators to defend installations. On the offensive, the Auxiliary Corps is best deployed in a supportive role. While there may be better pioneers out there, the Auxiliary Corps can
Strengths:
  • To The Bitter End: The Auxiliary are loyal soldiers to the bitter end. Some believing their defence of Prefsbelt and their leaders to be the way righteous men die. As such, they are not the sort to give up and will continue fighting despite hopeless odds, to the bitter end.
  • We’ve Waited For This Moment: While their combat skill may vary, the Prefsbelt Auxiliary have long waited for their days of combat. As such, when faced in battle they are efficient and effective, putting long theoretical small unit tactics finally into practice.
Weaknesses:
  • Aggressive: The Prefsbelt Auxiliaries' enthusiasm to flex their muscle mixed with steroid use often lapses their professional demeanour . They can be rather unpolite and unpleasant to those considered beneath them, and in combat can often be a little too zealous with their tactics.
  • Poor Equipment: The Prefsbelt Auxiliary by design is equipped with poorer and easier manufactured gear than their allies in the Stossjager [x], and as such they do suffer as a result.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The Prefsbelt Auxiliary Corps started its life in the First Order Werewolf partisans [
x], a group of ideologically charged civilians armed with rifles who formed their own militias independent of Dosuun’s rule after the Ssi-Ruuk Incursion. Many such militias and roving bands fell victims to groups like the Outer Planets Alliance, Eternal Empire or the Confederacy, and simply melted back into society. But before such governments capitalised on the First Order’s demise, there was an effort by some to resist, aided by a military junta in the Unknown Regions. When the logistical realities of this conflicts futilities became apparent, the mission from the junta became less to defend these homelands and simply to bolster numbers.

Over months, and years the militia fighters and guerilla fighters who did not find solace in the new regimes ravaging the First Orders former dominion fled it, many regrouping on Pa’Desh. A great deal found military training, and were soon being drilled to become avengers of their former homeworld. These irregulars would soon be merged with local Pa’Deshi volunteers. Many of whom were of the poor Liaa’tu laborer class, seeking a way off world to improve their lot in life, but others were defectors from sympathetic local forces. Over the years of waiting in the Unknown Regions, these soldiers became hardened, and eager for combat, although that never came.

A caste of soldiers able to work in a support role to more experienced troops. This caste of soldiers became known as the Auxiliary, and when Rausgeber negotiated the entry of his forces onto Prefsbelt, the Prefsbelt Auxiliary Corps. This Corps fits the role of a first response force, and they undertake the primary duties associated with garrisoning while the Stossjäger nominally take point on Off-World operations. Which isn’t to say that the Auxiliary hasn’t offered supporting roles as engineers to the Stossjaeger, but that they are far more comfortable on the defensive.
 
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Robogeber Robogeber

Hi my name is Judah Lesan, and I am here to review your sub!

A lot of this checks out and is good work. There are a couple of things I do need from you before we can wrap up this submission.

No. 1. IMAGE CREDIT

While it is fine to put images anywhere in the submission you would like, no one should have to search your submission for the credit. It is obvious, but I would prefer to see it in the actual image credit portion of the template. That is why it is there after all.​

No. 2. PERMISSIONS

The first issue is that you do not link to a purchase or interaction where you have been given permission to use the submissions from the NIO. You will need to provide this. Also in looking over some of the equipment you do have closed market pieces which do not belong to the NIO. I would look over your pieces listed and ensure you have the proper permissions for the equipment you are using. This would include ensuring that you have permission from each individual writer as I also notice that some of these submissions were done via multiple characters.​
As per the General Submission Guidelines:​
Factory Submissions that are included in Codex Submissions must conform to the limits of production and affiliation set forward in the Factory. If an item listed was created by another member and has specific affiliations or is listed as "Closed Market" you will be required to include proof of purchase/permission by the original submitter for the equipment or you will need to choose something else. (A more detailed breakdown of affiliations and permissions can be found here.) No exceptions.

Go ahead and tag me when you have this all sorted and we can get this moving on. I am training so this will need a second review once I pass it up.
 
Judah Lesan Judah Lesan

The image credits have been put back where you wanted them.

Also, totally have the NIO's permission, here's a screengrab from their main man Irveric Tavlar, giving me perms for that:
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And as such, I have permissions for the following, as I think they're the only factory subs I need to verify (?). Please do correct if I have missed a manufacturer.
ApexTech x
Gat Tambor x
REC x
CORONDEX x
 
:: HERO of KORRIBAN ::
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Robogeber Robogeber

The issue I had was that the permission wasn't linked or visible in the template. And as the guidelines do state the need to be there, no exceptions. Once you include them in the submission template in the proper place I can pass this up.

Thank you kindly good sir!
 
Robogeber Robogeber | Judah Lesan Judah Lesan

Howdy, I'll be handling the secondary. Overall - The content is pretty solid. There are just a couple of items to take a look at and then I'll get you on your way.

1.) Image: This image will need to be removed/replaced from this submission. While it does initially seem to depict Finnish Soldiers from WWII it seems that one of the men was shown was actually a Waffen-SS Captain among other things. I won't go into detail as it defeats the purpose of keeping that content off the site, however, it does run afoul of the following General Rule.

Imagery depicting real-world controversial events, or people, such as "Nazi" or "Fascist" groups should not be utilized.

2.) Affiliation: Please link the New Imperial Order per the template.
Affiliation: [ Who is this unit loyal too? Usually a faction, company, or character. Link any relevant character bios, faction pages, or groups. ]


3.) Permissions : These are almost perfect, but, you're missing one.
Keep in mind that the NIO likely has permission to use a lot of items, however, it must be included in each and every submission. I was actually able to find it for you here. Please add that in. [Permission]

4.) The Stossjäger Corps: As this submission is mentioned in this sub I would advise linking it somewhere for ease of access.

5.) Links: I would also suggest linking some of the threads that you've mentioned in the history, if possible, though this is merely a suggestion not a demand.

That's all - Everything else is Kosher. Please give me a tag when you're ready or if you need any assistance.

Thank you!
 
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Srina Talon Srina Talon

So first and foremost, want to apologise. I never spotted the guy, genuinely thought those guys were Finn's. I figured with the ole PPSH's, they were totally on the level. They have been changed to certified Poles.

As for the rest of the changes, they've been made.

As for the links to threads, I actually haven't been able to RP with the ole Prefsbelt Command too much as of yet. These Codex subs are sort of setting the grounds for that.
 
Robogeber Robogeber

Thank you for editing - It's perfectly all right. Sometimes it can be hard to tell and this replacement works just fine.

As for links - Perfectly n okay as well. I was just making the suggestion if there were any. As they develop you can always do a sub mod to add any of their new adventures at your leisure.

Thanks for working with me! Enjoy! [APPROVED]
 
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