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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION Intent: To develop an advanced warship for the Shrouded (And write a good story about it) Image Source: ModDB Canon Link: N/A Restricted Missions: None Primary Source: N/A PRODUCTION INFORMATION Manufacturer: Developed by the Wolfe Design Bureau / Produced by the...

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Today marks the one year anniversary of me joining this community. A year of writing with the greatest folks around, my boys and girls in the First Order. Before I jump into the whole critique thing, I think it prudent to thank the people who gave me this start on this site, and whom I have come...

Figured as it was roughly a year since I last sought some feedback out on my character, I would ask to see what anyone thought of her

Hey guys, almost 10 months ago I started the character of Thomas Kyrel, who then later became Kyrel Ren a servant of the Dark Side and devout follower of the Supreme Leader of the First Order. Throughout his time he has witnessed the outbreak of the Black Wing Virus within the Red Nebula. Aided...

How are we doing? How are you doing? We used to do these Critique threads way back in the day to get honest feedback from the community on how we can improve our jobs. Chaos has been going on for a fairly long time now, and I'm very proud of how far we've come. So let us know! Good or bad...

....Chaos has had a tumultuous relationship with drama. We love it We hate it We love to hate it We hate to love it. How do you make amends with drama? Do you enjoy being a centerpiece of it? Do you enjoy watching it? Do you hate it and want to ban it forever? Or do you believe a nice...

What was fun about it? What memories do you specifically recall that made that time memorable? What roleplays, what stuff was going on, what drama, etc, etc. Let's throw don on some nostalgia today and chat about the yesterdays of Chaos.

Alright, so, I've only done one of these before, but, I thought it might be time to do another one at last. I'm currently at a set of crossroads with Lykos, readying to start off a new arc for him, and, well, rather than risking continuing writing him as I have been and not correcting any huge...

Mother of Dragons So after a while of debating it i finally decided to get some original art of my character Scheherazade...otherwise known as 'Cinder'. And after finding an artist to draw her we had to figure out...what does she even look like? And what you see now is the result i am...

Calder's been around for a while, though normally he's just been another of my alt accounts that I forget about or can't write out in the way I want to. Thankfully, the big fluffy has taken most of my attention and I've been having fun writing out both his inner turmoil and old wisdom (Well...

So I have been writing Myles Davorak for about two months now and I just wanted to get some opinions on the writing? This character is different than the ones I have made in the past with other RP channels. Other characters I have made were based on myself and I found that boring. With Myles I...

A lot of Chaos characters are humans or near-humans. I think so, especially with some of the more experienced rpers, that this happens because humans have more images and gifs than aliens. I've tried to be diverse and include as much non-human characters as possible, with at this point, 7...

Planets: Commenor (Capital World) Gyndine Talasea Cato Neimoidia Cyrillia Yutan Attanox Sev Tok Tarhassan Belasco Mek Va Uil Surron Founded: 16-September 2016 Members: 51 Description: The Commenor Systems Alliance first started out as an dream, a galaxy not so heavily polluted in war...

I've seen the evolution of Canon Companies since we brought them into fruition at the birth of the board. There are many strong opinions on the matter and we kept them because of the nostalgia factor. However, personally, reviewing the rules and regulations with canon companies, why bother...

I know this runs along the same vein as "Do you think it is worth tiering up your company?", but i wanted to do an opinion poll on companies and how they work right now. What changes, incentives, or suggestions do you have for how Companies Tier Up and work? I love brainstorming sessions, and...

Or are you more apt to just tier up until tier 3 and stay there? ( you can build ships beyond 1000m and mass produce at this level) We are in the process of revamping the Factory due to no dev and such, and in that companies have come into the spotlight. The bulk of the feedback i've...

I often wonder if we lack in strong leaders, if we're seeing a new trend of people shying away from factions, if a lot of the concepts have 'already been done', if we're 'in between eras' with a lot of the Major Factions out of play right now, or if our expectations for factions are too high...

Greetings chaos! I was hoping to see what the other writers of Chaos think of Tyluko Dubykee. I have only been a member for a few short months and Tyluko is my only character so far, but he is something that I have taken great pride in and is someone I would like to improve, since he is my...

February 19, 2017 Blarghity Blargh Blargh-Today at 6:18 PM Can I ask your advice? Its not Chaos tech related or anything specific that staff can answer. More something in your wheelhouse whenever you have the time.(edited) Tefka sup Blarghity Blargh Blargh When your interviewing for an...