Huxy
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It's not finished, I know. But I'm just curious as to what people think of my bio so far, if it's too much, too little, what I should add/remove...that type of stuff. If you know Garrus from ME, that's who I'm trying to 'recreate.' Let me know if the humor I put in, yeah I'm bad at humor, but let me know if it's good, bad or cringy and how to fix it. I've never written a slightly-comedic character before.
Name: "Arcan Castilion, at your service"
Alias: "Uh...none"
Faction: "I'm on nobodies side cause...uh, cliché reason, exactly"
Rank: "Well, I mean I am a security guard"
Gender: "I'm male, obviously"
Age: "Uhm..thirty-one? No, I mean twenty-eight"
Species: "The beautiful Glaucus"
Skin Color: "I'm a very handsome grey with beautiful blue warpaint"
Eye Color: "A beautiful sapphire blue, blue as the sea...poetic, right?"
Height: "I don't know, six foot?"
Weight: "Hey, that's rude...actually, I don't know"
Force Sensitive: "No, and I'm glad 'bout it"
Sexuality: "I'm not answering that"
Marital Status: "I'm single ladies..."
Morale: "Uh, what's morale, again? Uh hu, sure...well I, good?"
Motto: "Some people do things for glory, some for money, some for justice. I'm a mix of all three with a sarcastic seasoning on top."
"Agh noo! Don't look at it! It was for a film class and I was that guy the girl falls for in the movie...but I was also the guy who died first...nevermind"
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"See this, that's me, my weird alien dog, and my red-headed friend, Sam. No, the girl's named Sam, the dog's just Jerry."
"I'm the one on the right. No, not the lizard dog...I'm the tall and handsome Glacus with beautiful eyes"
Arcan Castilion
Name: "Arcan Castilion, at your service"
Alias: "Uh...none"
Faction: "I'm on nobodies side cause...uh, cliché reason, exactly"
Rank: "Well, I mean I am a security guard"
Gender: "I'm male, obviously"
Age: "Uhm..thirty-one? No, I mean twenty-eight"
Species: "The beautiful Glaucus"
Skin Color: "I'm a very handsome grey with beautiful blue warpaint"
Eye Color: "A beautiful sapphire blue, blue as the sea...poetic, right?"
Height: "I don't know, six foot?"
Weight: "Hey, that's rude...actually, I don't know"
Force Sensitive: "No, and I'm glad 'bout it"
Sexuality: "I'm not answering that"
Marital Status: "I'm single ladies..."
Morale: "Uh, what's morale, again? Uh hu, sure...well I, good?"
Motto: "Some people do things for glory, some for money, some for justice. I'm a mix of all three with a sarcastic seasoning on top."
"Agh noo! Don't look at it! It was for a film class and I was that guy the girl falls for in the movie...but I was also the guy who died first...nevermind"