True To Caesar
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Today marks the one year anniversary of me joining this community. A year of writing with the greatest folks around, my boys and girls in the First Order. Before I jump into the whole critique thing, I think it prudent to thank the people who gave me this start on this site, and whom I have come to call friends.
In no particular order, [member="Darth Metus"], [member="Natasi Fortan"], [member="Valessia Creed"], [member="Asharad Graush"], [member="Rolf Amsel"], [member="Alaric Kirchenhof"], [member="Kyrel Ren"], [member="Torian Pierce"], [member="Ara Ren"], [member="Samka Derith"] and [member="Aedan Miles"]. You guys are great. You, in particular you Natasi, helped me get my bearings on this site, and start off down this rabbit hole. You've all had to deal with my ungodly unfunny jokes, my incessant meming. My politicially incorrect humour and the general kark ups and mistakes found within my IC and OOC conduct. I would like to say, that despite all the mistakes, all the arguments and tantrums, that you have stood by me. And that is something that I feel that I cannot really properly express in words alone. I love you guys. I really do, and I want you to know that if anyone of you were to die, I'd be at your funeral in a heartbeat.
But now onto the important part. The review of my work in general. Over the past twelve months, I've really sunk my teeth into two characters proper. [member="Carlyle Rausgeber"] and [member="Rexus Wenck"]. Although I'd like to think these two characters are well written, the fact is is that I could suffer the Dunning-Kruger effect and need to get off of my high horse. So if you feel the need to, kark my pooddoo up.
Some samplings of Carlyle posts:
At a ceasefire.
Orbiting Mustafar.
Leading attacks.
Miscellaneous post.
Rexus samples:
Being an a-hole on Mustafar
NPC I made
Another NPC
More NPC's
My favourite Rexus post of all time
I'd love to hear your thoughts on my writing, me as a writer, and ways I can improve in both IC and OOCly.
In no particular order, [member="Darth Metus"], [member="Natasi Fortan"], [member="Valessia Creed"], [member="Asharad Graush"], [member="Rolf Amsel"], [member="Alaric Kirchenhof"], [member="Kyrel Ren"], [member="Torian Pierce"], [member="Ara Ren"], [member="Samka Derith"] and [member="Aedan Miles"]. You guys are great. You, in particular you Natasi, helped me get my bearings on this site, and start off down this rabbit hole. You've all had to deal with my ungodly unfunny jokes, my incessant meming. My politicially incorrect humour and the general kark ups and mistakes found within my IC and OOC conduct. I would like to say, that despite all the mistakes, all the arguments and tantrums, that you have stood by me. And that is something that I feel that I cannot really properly express in words alone. I love you guys. I really do, and I want you to know that if anyone of you were to die, I'd be at your funeral in a heartbeat.
But now onto the important part. The review of my work in general. Over the past twelve months, I've really sunk my teeth into two characters proper. [member="Carlyle Rausgeber"] and [member="Rexus Wenck"]. Although I'd like to think these two characters are well written, the fact is is that I could suffer the Dunning-Kruger effect and need to get off of my high horse. So if you feel the need to, kark my pooddoo up.
Some samplings of Carlyle posts:
At a ceasefire.
Orbiting Mustafar.
Leading attacks.
Miscellaneous post.
Rexus samples:
Being an a-hole on Mustafar
NPC I made
Another NPC
More NPC's
My favourite Rexus post of all time
I'd love to hear your thoughts on my writing, me as a writer, and ways I can improve in both IC and OOCly.