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The Mantle of the Griffin of Zakuul

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Mantle of the Griffin of Zakuul
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Personal Power Armor
  • Weight: Extremely Heavy
  • Resistances:
    • Energy: Extreme
    • Kinetic: Extreme
    • Lightsabers: Very High
    • Sonic: Low
    • EMP/Ion: Average
    • Elemental: Extreme
    • Force: High
    • Corrosive: Very Low
    • Disruptor: Very Low
SPECIAL FEATURES
STRENGTHS
  • Second Skin: The armor has the benefit of not only being worn, but becoming a second skin for the wearer due to its extensive connections.
  • Enclosed: The armor allows a deployment in nearly all environments.
  • Tank: The suit is designed to withstand the most serious and heaviest of attacks.
  • Sixth & Seventh Sense: The armor expands the perception of the wearer to a superhuman level through scanners and sensors, giving impressions and information ordinary senses would not give as well as improving the common senses like vision and hearing through the helmet functions.
  • Tactical: The suit is made to be deployed in battle and its connection to its own scanners and sensors is used as well as the connection to the battlefield surveillance of the strong ship based scanners, if a ship of the Order is in orbit which can allow for a maximum overview and information access.
  • Jump!: The jetpack allows limited, fast redeployment.
  • Invisible Guard: The protection is even increased by the Golden Halo, featuring a personal shield generator.
  • Crafted onto the skin: The Mantle is created to fit Aurelian Sigismund, his physics and to perfectly support his movements and way of moving.
  • Lightning: The Force enhancements are strongly amplifying Force Speed and allowing to Force Travel for short distances which are in view range.
WEAKNESSES
  • Maintenance: The systems of the armour are very complex and therefore the maintenance of the armour is very time consuming if a system should fail.
  • Chain reaction: There is the very slight possibility that during a malfunction of the internal power supply, the suit of armour is getting permanently destroyed and killing the wearer due to neural connections overloading and melting.
  • Force: The armor does not protect the wearer from any attacks by the Force which affect the wearer directly/internally/mentally.
  • Weight: Unaltered individuals may only be able wear this armor if they are of an extremely strong physics.
  • Visibility: The armor is made of auromidium and therefore gold, it is very very difficult to hide in it.
  • Size & Fit: The armor is designed for very large individuals and therefore can only be worn by and altered for people in a specific spectrum of weight and height. Furthermore it is crafted for Aurelian Sigismund, not just anyone, making it dramatically less efficient for a different wearer.
  • Drain: If jetpack and shield should be used too much, the armor's energy supply might shut down to recover, disabling many of the power armor advantages.
  • Void: The Force enhancements are seriously impaired by the presence of a Ysalamiri and artifacts such as the Void Stone.
DESCRIPTION
Among with the blade Urizen, Aurelian Sigismund was working on his personal suit of armor. Taught over generations by various different smithing schools, industrial armor engineers and forgers, he taught the original Forgelords of Highcastle himself in the arts and employed most capable weapon- and armorsmiths. The power armors of the Legionnaires are a well designed conception to allow maximum battle efficiency. The Agema suits improving on the concept and creating sturdier guardians. This armor would surpass all others ever crafted on Vandemar.

Not only the steel had to be tempered, not only the measurements had to be taken or connections with the spinal cord made, but the entire movement muster and physical motions of the High Imperator had to be captured and analysed, years of practice in endless scenarios and situations were issued, analysts watching every muscle, every step or instinct. The Forgelords were watching, documented and interpreting along with their master.

Months of forging, smithing, tempering, connecting, trying followed which slowly but sturdily clad the Vandemarian ruler in a masterfully crafted suit of protection and utility The coat of arms was just a cosmetic addition, red leather adorning as tabard. The jetpack was installed in wings which would extend if activated and used and the Golden Halo was an addition to the throat plates, integrating a small, personal shield generator to protect the Hegemon.


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11th October 2023 - Complete overhaul


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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: The personal battle armor of Aurelian Sigismund.
  • Image Source: Artstation
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: Agema Armor
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Personal Power Armor
  • Weight: Extremely Heavy
  • Resistances:
    • Energy: Extreme
    • Kinetic: Extreme
    • Lightsabers: Very High
    • Sonic: Low
    • EMP/Ion: Average
    • Elemental: Extreme
    • Force: None
    • Molecular: Average
    • Atomic: None
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Spinal Cord Connectors (thought-impulse-unit): Through points along the body and the spine the wearer becomes directly attached to the armour, instead of wearing it, the armour becomes a part of the wearer, enhancing his speed and strength with its servos and own power generator. The movements are transmitted to the limbs as well as to the armour.
  • Tactical HUD: An interactive connection to the armour integrated sensors and scanners as well as allied orbiting ships scanners, sensors and strategium gives a 3D HUD with the possibility to access a large variety of information. Tactical display and map, troop locations, targeting reticules, range finders, ultraviolet vision, infrared vision and night vision, as well as interactive com-link and holo-transmitter. The HUD works on thought activation. The helmet offers a strong increase of all senses, both due to the sensors and scanners and the natural enhancement of the wearer connected to them.
  • Internal power supply: A miniature power generator with a high energy output and high durability, but extensive maintenance if failures occur.
  • Life support: The armour features a rebreather unit to clean dirty or toxic atmosphere, allowing for unlimited deployment in Type III atmospheres but also allowing deployment in atmospheres were a minimum of oxygen was present, utilising this bit, but only working for a limited amount of time.
  • Pressure system: For a limited time the armour suit allows the wearer to be deployed in space, utilising saved oxygen reserves to breath.
  • Jetpack: The armor features a jetpack which is fully integrated into the armor.
  • Golden Halo: A small, personal shield generator projecting a personal ray and particle shield.
STRENGTHS
  • Second Skin: The armor has the benefit of not only being worn, but becoming a second skin for the wearer due to its extensive connections.
  • Enclosed: The armor allows a deployment in nearly all environments.
  • Tank: The suit is designed to withstand the most serious and heaviest of attacks.
  • Sixth & Seventh Sense: The armor expands the perception of the wearer to a superhuman level through scanners and sensors, giving impressions and information ordinary senses would not give as well as improving the common senses like vision and hearing through the helmet functions.
  • Tactical: The suit is made to be deployed in battle and its connection to its own scanners and sensors is used as well as the connection to the battlefield surveillance of the strong ship based scanners, if a ship of the Order is in orbit which can allow for a maximum overview and information access.
  • Jump!: The jetpack allows limited, fast redeployment.
  • Invisible Guard: The protection is even increased by the Golden Halo, featuring a personal shield generator.
  • Crafted onto the skin: The Mantle is created to fit Aurelian Sigismund, his physics and to perfectly support his movements and way of moving.
WEAKNESSES
  • Maintenance: The systems of the armour are very complex and therefore the maintenance of the armour is very time consuming if a system should fail.
  • Chain reaction: There is the very slight possibility that during a malfunction of the internal power supply, the suit of armour is getting permanently destroyed and killing the wearer due to neural connections overloading and melting.
  • Force: The armor does not protect the wearer from any attacks by the Force which affect the wearer directly/internally/mentally.
  • Weight: Unaltered individuals may only be able wear this armor if they are of an extremely strong physics.
  • Visibility: The armor is made of auromidium and therefore gold, it is very very difficult to hide in it.
  • Size & Fit: The armor is designed for very large individuals and therefore can only be worn by and altered for people in a specific spectrum of weight and height. Furthermore it is crafted for Aurelian Sigismund, not just anyone, making it dramatically less efficient for a different wearer.
  • Drain: If jetpack and shield should be used too much, the armor's energy supply might shut down to recover, disabling many of the power armor advantages.
DESCRIPTION
Among with the blade Urizen, Aurelian Sigismund was working on his personal suit of armor. Taught over generations by various different smithing schools, industrial armor engineers and forgers, he taught the original Forgelords of Highcastle himself in the arts and employed most capable weapon- and armorsmiths. The power armors of the Legionnaires are a well designed conception to allow maximum battle efficiency. The Agema suits improving on the concept and creating sturdier guardians. This armor would surpass all others ever crafted on Vandemar.

Not only the steel had to be tempered, not only the measurements had to be taken or connections with the spinal cord made, but the entire movement muster and physical motions of the High Imperator had to be captured and analysed, years of practice in endless scenarios and situations were issued, analysts watching every muscle, every step or instinct. The Forgelords were watching, documented and interpreting along with their master.

Months of forging, smithing, tempering, connecting, trying followed which slowly but sturdily clad the Vandemarian ruler in a masterfully crafted suit of protection. Plates of auromidium and songsteel gave it a distinct golden-shimmer, a chainmail of cortosis weave and matrix-armor was added as a layer of protection. The coat of arms was just a cosmetic addition, red leather adorning as tabard. The jetpack was installed in wings which would extend if activated and used and the Golden Halo was an addition to the throat plates, integrating a small, personal shield generator to protect the High Imperator.



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Ravenfire

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FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Mantle of the Griffin of Zakuul
Link to Submission: Link Here
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Update Submission


FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Urizen - Flame of Enlightenment
Link to Submission: Link Here
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Update Submission
 

Ravenfire

King of Pumpkins
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Aurelian Sigismund Aurelian Sigismund

Hi there, I will be the judge for this submission.

So lets do a quick run through of somethings, do you have permissions to use both x and x.

Also even through this is a unique submission I don't know if Force Travel should be something that can be added as alchemy to an armour set. I will double check with the Factory Admin, but my suggestion would be to remove it.
 
Ravenfire Ravenfire Added permission from Jaeger, removed the utility belt.

As for the enhancement - it specifically supports this ability - not automatically allows to use it. Like the Force abilities listed are not "granted" to the wearer, but the wearer is supported when using them. :) Still, check with John, wanna make sure.
 

Ravenfire

King of Pumpkins
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Aurelian Sigismund Aurelian Sigismund

I've spoken with the factory admin, and we both agree that its quite strong but that in the form your suggesting is at least somewhat reasonable. However you need to add some strengths and weaknesses to the sub that pertain to that specific force power as it is effectively like using a hypergate or the like since its fairly instant teleportation.

However since you want the FA to look after your stuff, I am going to pass it off to them. John Locke John Locke
 
Aurelian Sigismund Aurelian Sigismund

So, reading through the sub I think it could be made clearer.

For example:

Ravenfire Ravenfire Added permission from Jaeger, removed the utility belt.

As for the enhancement - it specifically supports this ability - not automatically allows to use it. Like the Force abilities listed are not "granted" to the wearer, but the wearer is supported when using them. :) Still, check with John, wanna make sure.

In your reply to Ravenfire you state that the wearer is supported, but the ability isn't given to the wearer, however in the submissions itself you say:

Lightning: The Force enhancements are strongly amplifying Force Speed and allowing to Force Travel for short distances which are in view range.

The wording, "allowing to Force Travel" would indicate that it is an ability that is given to the wearer. While this might not be your intent, the wording is unclear and would need to be clarified.

Also, you state that:

Force: The armor does not protect the wearer from any attacks by the Force which affect the wearer directly/internally/mentally.

However, the armour has a Force Resistance of High.

Force: High
Could you explain what ou mean by this?

Finally,. the augmentations. You state that:

Void: The Force enhancements are seriously impaired by the presence of a Ysalamiri and artifacts such as the Void Stone.

How are the enhancements seriously impaired in a situation where the force is no longer accessible? Wouldn't they be nullified completely? Also, are these enhancements alchemized, or provided through Alkahest or another lightside technique? This will affect what will weaken or affect them accordingly.

Please look through my notes and come back to me.
 
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