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Approved Tech RG Tactical Armor Mk. VII 'Agema'

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To create the armorsuit for the Second Generation Paladins, the Praetorians.
  • Image Source: N/A
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: Based on Mk. II "Tyth"
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Power Armour
  • Weight: Extremely Heavy
  • Resistances:
    • Energy: Very High
    • Kinetic: Very High
    • Explosives: Very High
    • Lightsabers: High
    • Sonic: Average
    • EMP/Ion: Average
    • Elemental: Very High
    • Force: None
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Spinal Cord Connectors (thought-impulse-unit): Through points along the body and the spine the wearer becomes directly attached to the armour, instead of wearing it, the armour becomes a part of the wearer, enhancing his speed and strength with its servos and own power generator. The movements are transmitted to the limbs as well as to the armour.
  • Tactical HUD: An interactive connection to the armour integrated sensors and scanners as well as The Phalanx's scanners, sensors and strategium gives a 3D HUD with the possibility to access a large variety of information. Tactical display and map, troop locations, targeting reticules, range finders, ultraviolet vision, infrared vision and night vision, as well as interactive com-link and holo-transmitter. The HUD works on thought activation. The helmet offers a strong increase of all senses, both due to the sensors and scanners and the natural enhancement of the wearer connected to them.
  • Internal power supply: A miniature power generator with a high energy output and high durability, but extensive maintenance if failures occur.
  • Life support: The armour features a rebreather unit to clean dirty or toxic atmosphere, allowing for unlimited deployment in Type III atmoshperes but also allowing deployment in atmospheres were a minimum of oxygen was present, utilising this bit, but only working for a limited amount of time.
  • Pressure system: For a limited time the armour suit allows the wearer to be deployed in space, utilising saved oxygen reserves to breath.
STRENGTHS
  • Second Skin: The armor has the benefit of not only being worn, but becoming a second skin for the wearer due to its extensive connections.
  • Enclosed: The armor allows a deployment in nearly all environments.
  • Tank: The suit is designed to withstand the most serious and heaviest of attacks.
  • Sixth & Seventh Sense: The armor expands the perception of the wearer to a superhuman level through scanners and sensors, giving impressions and information ordinary senses would not give as well as improving the common senses like vision and hearing through the helmet functions.
  • Tactical: The suit is made to be deployed in battle and its connection to its own scanners and sensors is used as well as the connection to the battlefield surveillance of the strong ship based scanners, if a ship of the Order is in orbit which can allow for a maximum overview and information access.
WEAKNESSES
  • Maintenance: The systems of the armour are very complex and therefore the maintenance of the armour is very time consuming if a system should fail.
  • Chain reaction: There is the very slight possibility that during a malfunction of the internal power supply, the suit of armour is getting permanently destroyed and killing the wearer due to neural connections overloading and melting.
  • Force: The armor does not protect the wearer from any attacks by the Force which affect the wearer directly/internally/mentally.
  • Weight: Unaltered individuals may only be able wear this armor if they are of an extremely strong physics.
  • Visibility: The armor is made of auromidium and therefore gold, it is very very difficult to hide in it.
  • Size: The armor is designed for very large individuals and therefore can only be worn by and altered for people in a specific spectrum of weight and height.
DESCRIPTION
Since the production and supply for the Rim-Guard Order got focused, they would move on from the hand-crafted sets for the First Generation and develop a faster but also more efficient and higher-quality production process.

The Mark VII 'Agema' is the high-end result of a string of steady improvements. It is the best armour the Order facilities can produce and reserved for the Praetorians. Lessons from the predecessors were taken in and peaked here, to supply the most capable warriors with the most capable equipment.
 
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I love powered armour, this will be fun

Ok, your links seem fine, as they're all your alts.

Weight should be Extremely heavy or Extremely Light. You'll need to define which way this one is going.
Weight: Extreme

Assuming the weight is V. Heavy, the points are balanced.

I feel like you're mentioning a lot of things in the special features section that should be mentioned in materials. Not necessary. But something to think about.

I'm going to need a very big HOW, on this one. Because you're making it sound like it's either accelerating their brain, or using something like a force power. Which should push it to go into a little more detail on how it accomplishes this. So far the only thing this could allure to is a high tech HUD.
Sixth & Seventh Sense: The armor expands the perception of the wearer to a superhuman level, giving impressions and information ordinary senses would not give as well as improving the common senses.

This sentence needs a little work, as it doesn't make sense. Does the armour link to a ship? Does it use ship scale scanning tech? I can't tell.
Tactical: The suit is made to be deployed in battle and its connection to its own scanners and sensors as well as the battlefield surveillance of the strong ship based scanners, can allow for a maximum overview and information access.

You have a lot of powerful strengths and functions, I am going to need a couple more weaknesses here. one of which should be to reflect the systems' weight.
WEAKNESSES
 
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