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Approved Starship The Bryn'adûl | The Epitaph

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The Bryn'adûl | The Epitaph
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: Create a individualised version of the Burrower.
  • Image Source: X
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Burrower Deployment Craft
  • Length: Two-Thousand Metres
  • Width: Two-Thousand Metres
  • Height: Four-Thousand, Five Hundred Metres
  • Armament: None
  • Defences: Extreme
    Exterior Verikast Hull Plating
    Qullxyn Shielding
  • Hangar Space: Very High | Thirty-Nine Squadrons
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters: Twenty Squadrons
    • Support Craft: Nineteen Squadrons
  • Manoeuvrability Rating: Low
  • Speed Rating: Extreme
  • Hyper-drive: 2.0
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
  • Drill System: The bottom of the Burrower, as indicated by its name is a large drilling mechanism powered by the Draelvasier technology.
  • Kraemonen: The Kraemonen hivemind has replaced the links between the Mind Stones and the systems within the Epitaph.
  • Quilxyn Shield System: The ships shield system is a complex interwoven hive of Quilxyn directly connected to the power supply of the ship, utilizing force imbued pillars to be communed with through Draelvasier technology and communed with by the Bryn'adûl. This shield system can be assisted by Ashaka or Shamans, using beast mastery, battle meditation or other buff-type force abilities to sustain the Quilxyn further. Additionally, this shield when the Epitaph is stationary; due the ability of the Quilxyn to manipulate the format of their produced shielding is capable of producing a dozen kilometre circumference shield. However, this shield is a one-way system. Things moving at a slow pace came come in, but nothing can leave the interior without destroying the Quilxyn or the ship itself. Additionally, this defensive shield leaves the Epitaph vulnerable, only its plating to defend it.
  • Radesh Coated: The Epitaphs exterior is covered in a coating of enhanced radesh oil, allowing it to bypass gravity tethers and tractor beams with more ease and pass through shields with the loss of one sixth of its speed.
  • Offensive: The Epitaph is capable of carrying smaller craft inside its infantry bay alongside various holding cages for the various beasts within the arsenal of the Bryn'adûl.
STRENGTHS
  • Ready for some Speed, Schutta: For a vessel of its size, the Burrower is an incredibly fast orbital descent vessel. Using the Errindak to propel itself downward into a descent, crashing into the surface.
  • Tightly Packed: The Burrower comes with a powerful accompaniment of landing forces, able to hold up to ninety-thousand infantry/beasts/ect in accompaniment to its Support Vessels.
  • High Defence: The Burrower is designed to tank anything thrown at it, crashing into a surface and burrowing deeper underground to deploy forces to attack from all angles.
  • Powerful Drill: The drill mechanism in the base of the Burrower is powerful enough that it can nearly swim through the earth, pulling itself in upon landing.
  • Defensive shielding: The Quilxyn Shielding provides powerful interfacing shielding.
  • Kraemonen Hive-Mind: Due to the nature of the Epitaph's interior, the Kraemonen can commune with those inside the Epitaph and help with repairs and coordination.
WEAKNESSES
  • Speed Decrease: Will lose a portion of its speed when bypassing a defensive shield due to its coat of radesh oil.
  • No Offence: No offensive measures to speak of, this vessel isn't intended to be occupied for very long.
  • Can't have your Jawa and eat it too: The Quulxyn Shielding must be disabled for the ship to bypass any shielding.
  • Stationary: To utilise the quilxyn's alternative modes of shielding, the Epitaph must be stationary/landed.
DESCRIPTION:
The enemies of the Bryn'adûl often feel the need to build large walls or underground bases. Thusly, their response from Phedrak Munitions was to design a larger platform capable of carrying both massive forces for planetary deployments for the inclusion of recent Kaiju beasts created by the Shamans. But also to allow the vessels to Burrow deep into a planets surface near instantaneously upon landing.
 
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HPI AI; Terraris Command
Factory Judge
Tathra Khaeus Tathra Khaeus

Hello! I'll be your judge today. Very nice and detailed ship! Ok, because you don't have any armament I accept the higher "Hangar Space" than the usual, this is balanced in such way. However I found three problems:
  • The ship is overpowered (+2), plese fix it.
  • Please provide a list for the Defences, what the Extreme value comes from; one simple list will suffice
  • The third is the Hangar Allocations, you mention here 45 squadrons, while the ship has only 39. Please detailed how many of the squadrons are fix, and how many are interchangeable to get the right number, the 39.

That's all, please let me know if you edited these.
 
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