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Approved Tech Tempest's Pretty White Robes

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Syn

Nimir-ra to Iella, Jedi Shadow
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Power emanations from the City of Dreams were untraceable in realspace due to its ethereal nature; in this way, its citizens could monitor Imperial transmissions undetected
the city had been created by his "psychic power," and everything in the dimension it existed was not material, but rather composed of "psychic energy."
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Other
  • Weight: Weightless
  • Resistances:
    • Energy: Very High
    • Kinetic: Very High
    • Lightsabers: Very High
    • Other: Sonic: Low
    • Other: EMP/ION: Very Low
    • Other: Sensors: Very Low
    • Other: Radiation: Low
    • Other: Fire: Average
    • Other: Cryo: High
    • Other: Acid: Average
    • Other: Vacuum: Very Low
    • Other: Darkside: Very High
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Force Affinity: Designed with force infused materials that imbue to the jedi wearing them a standard slew of protections and capabilities. The ability to better resist the darksides influence, ease the access to learned skills that have been practiced and feeling generally more energized and lively.
    • Force Resistance: Not pure resistance to the force but its influences specifically the darkside.
    • Force Enlightenment: A general enhancement of the specific jedi's talents in the lightside of the force. They don't know everything but using their own abilities is easier, sharper focus.
    • Revitalize: A more robust feeling mentally and physically aids in calming the mind and body to focus.
    • Force Form: Focusing and utilizing the force itself to improve the jedi's focus and mind as well as combative capabilities with the force.
    • Avar Kriss's Network: Connecting her to the jedi as a whole it follows much of what Avar did and lets her hear the song of the force.
    • Tutaminis: Advanced and formed within the robes themselves.. the material absorbs energy, heat, electrical, force, plasma and others to feed it into the jedis body and mind revitalizing their force powers.
    • Cleanse Mind: Focusing the force and clearing the mind of mental influences and those they can focus their attention on.
    • Force Binding: Designed and augmented into the robes, the pockets and robes themselves can be used to bind and contain influences when it is enclosed around a darkside object.
    • Inspire: Focused and empowered the jedi themselves as beacons within the force inspiring those around them to action and to shake off negative thoughts.
    • Controlled Descent: Focusing the force into a cushion around them the jedi are able to land from greater heights.
    • Force Familiar: Controlled and focused, the robes seek out a familiar creature and bonds with it... sadly while it connects them death of the jedi can kill the familiar.
  • Tempests Enhancements:
    • Inspire: Augmentations so that the jedi princess or princes mere presence can inspire others and raise their morale.
    • Ionize: A further extension of their channeling electric judgement through their hands and gloves.... being aable to ionize droids and disable them.
    • Force Harmony: Calming the mind and body to focus the jedi and aid in overcoming negative emotions.
    • Force generation: To enhance the jedi and give them a grounded focus on worlds strong in the force.
  • Jedi Utility Belt: For supplies
  • Cracken Survival Kit: Standard field kit
  • Sigil of Hope: A legacy piece of jediu equipment created from the dark harvesters.
  • Kojie: Underslung shoulder pack for extra equipment space.
  • Kirano Interface: Standard technical interface for operations.
  • Cracken Survival Kit: Standard field kit given for their clothing in case of attack.
  • Refined Sleg Ultracapacitors: Designed to improve the power of the suits and augment the shielding for radiation and heat in space or protect them when boarding other ships.
  • Advanced Regulator System: Designed to recycle oxygen and filter poisons for the common peoples in case of attack.
  • Seeker Drone: Companion to atrisians and function as one of two organization interfaces. Can work together with an astromech.
  • Makie Class Droid: A non-combative companion droid that works with the Atrisian citizens.
  • Heavy Praestigiae's Luminous Overlaid Technological Shields: Protective shielding designed to be used with the pilot suit in the event of out of ship combat scenarios.
  • Temperature control/heat reflection: Designed for additional protection when eva and in space.
  • Locator beacon: For emergencies to be retrieved with rescue ships.
  • Ablative Plating: Designed with the standard robes and armor plating itself in a combination. Made for attacks but to also streamline many of the outfits from Atrisians to reflect their more sophisticated natures.
  • Reflects Sensor Scans minorly
  • NanoTech Cleaning: To ensure Tempest's cleanliness is there always, the nanotech is cleaning the robes at almost all moments from the smallest levels and they can maintain a pristine color at nearly all times.
STRENGTHS
  • Superior Protection: Designed using the Synthmesh, wintrium that as it ages continues to grow stronger and skylar which offers a form fitted compression material.
  • Force Affinity: Infused and crafted with the force, the synthmesh, skylar and inth metal used all add force abilities to the outfit.
  • Protection: The hypermembrane provides a robust degree of protection so it can be used.
  • Self Repairing: Designed with the hypermembrane for protection but also the ability to repair itself over time with small damage being a few minutes to hours and sections of the suit being days.
  • Overly Engineered: Designed to give the jedi a powerful sense of control and protection.
  • Exotic Matter: The ethereal nature of the metal makes it near weightless despite being and looking dense within the pocket dimension of dream. In realspace it can be grasped and there is a steady supply able to be used by the jedi. When smelted with other materials it can decrease the weight of the material created by 50 percent. The exotic structure with the solidified force energy being able to skirt gravity as it has mass but does not become weighed down as long as there is force energy within it. When smelted and added to materials that are largely heavy it can reduce the weight depending on how much is use (ie: a few grams compared to ingots.. a couple grams might take off some pounds while an ingot will reduce the weight but also the quality of the metal since it doesn't augment the resistances.
  • Physics Meet Metal bat: Being from the dream pocket dimension the metal has unique properties generated and made by Krass. in this case it is psychoreactive and able to be bonded to a single person. That person can then bring it to them like they were holding a massive magnet with the range being hard to determine as they have to be able to sense and feel it.
WEAKNESSES
  • Requires Connection to the Force: For the synthweave effects to function within it the material needs to be able to feel the force energies around it. Vong tech, yalisimiri, voidstone, dampening fields are all counter to what the material can handle.
  • Self repairing: While it can repair its own micro stress fractures the capabilities can take days to hours depending on how damaged they become from use.
  • Exotic Particles: Largely unknown and not seen in the galaxy before. It isn't invincible nor is it really strong but it reacts violently near dark and anti-matter which can disrupt and destroy it or even cause it to rupture and disintegrate.
  • Exotic Matter: The tetherite and solarite metals are explosive when they come into contact with anti or dark matter.
  • Lightside beacon; The robes radiate the lightside of the force.
  • Lightside: Designed with the jedi and lightside in mind, the material can be worn andused by neutral and darksiders but it is uncomfortable.
  • Gravity field: The repulsors only function within a gravity field.
DESCRIPTION
Designed by Sasori as a normal robe for Syn's padawan Tempest. A young woman but very much a skilled jedi. The jedi master had them commissioned and made to fit her with skylar and nanotechnoloy. The mini droids serving to clean the robes and keep them clean. After their first meeting where he learned about her condition... the need to keep herself from getting dirty while wearing white clothing and robes. He thought nothing of it and thens eeeing her later she still seemed to cling to it.

So the jedi master worked to respect that feeling allowing the saori designers to add for her robes something to keep it clean no matter the situation. The small droids would clean it, and maintain the threading of the robes regardless but they serve no other purpose. To get this effect the synthweave was removed taking away those benefits but leaving the duraplast benefits of higher protection. Over all the protection fo the robes are average and not overly protective or weak but it can protect the young woman in the field.

After getting his robes updated the jedi master Syn did the same for his padawan. Tempests robes were different fitting more to her personality as she liked things clean... in contrast to her master who would get dirty and fight in the mud.... so the improved nanotech for cleaning and repairing itself was important. The changes to many of the robes and improvements that were done to bring them up to a new standard for protection and allow her to be safe.
 
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The Resistances seem in order, so that portion is squared away.

Minor Arms Protection: Small blades and calibur or powered weapons can be deflected and handled by the silk that is used. With reinforcement from the threaded material
Could you specify for me how much resistance this affords to blades, i.e. piercing versus slashing?

Kinetic: The threaded material is woven enough that it can lessen reducing the impact of a mandalorian shotgun being fire point blank to the groin. The material might not be penetrated but it will be like getting slammed and smashed with a truck which can make your insides liquid.
Clarify what you intend with "Mandalorian Shotgun" for me- does this afford protection against, say, birdshot? A round with enough penetrative power would most likely go through even the toughest woven fabric without much issue.

Kinetic Impact: High grade kinetic impact from heavy slugthrowers, mass drivers and even matukai styled punches cannot be dispersed
Remove Mass Drivers- they are capital ship weapons and the impact would destroy the wearer entirely.

Cracken: Field kit is restricted to pc characters using submission
This submission is Unique and cannot be used by NPCs anyway, even if the Cracken submission itself potentially could. Please remove this weakness.


Reduced Quality: While it is made from woven together materials that are by themselves pretty strong, combining them has reduced and taken away some fo the levels of protection that the material can offer.
Please specify what losses have been incurred, and how it affects the final product.


Rigid Material: Designed to be protective and the closer it is to the body, the more compression of the fabric the less it is able to bend or stretch
This weakness is listed twice, please remove one instance.

Protective Area's: The quality of the fabric is good but generally small areas that are needed for movement are with lesser protected areas. Under the armpits, the back of the knees and the neck, elbows that can be used to offer a stiff range of motion.
Please clarify what you mean by this.

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Nimir-ra to Iella, Jedi Shadow
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I think I got all fo the edits done if I missed any sorry.

to answer your question the areas for the joints where you move your arms and legs wouldn't be as rigid so the wearer isn't stiff in their movements.
 
Two things-

For kinetic under strengths, could you remove the part about the shotgun and replace it with something like "affords the wearer some protection from ballistics?" As it reads, it sounds more like it stops them from being shot in the groin and little else.

And last, could you revise the Protective Areas weakness to plainly state what you just described? Thank you for your cooperation!

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