Approved Starship The Immaculates

[Angelus Hafey]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• New Intent: To make a very scary ship.
• Image Source: Here
• Permissions: Magenta Permission Permission V2
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Angel Arms
• Affiliation: Sith Order
• Market Status: Closed Market
• Model: N/A
• Production: Semi-Unique (4)
• Material:
  Duralloy (Hull Plating)
  Phkalt Metal (Hull Coating)
  Transparisteel (Viewports)

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Heavy Warship
• Length: 4000 Meters
• Width: 1750 Meters
• Height: 2500 Meters
• Armament: Extreme
  13x Psuedosonic Heavy Continuous Beam Cannon (At the Bottom)
  120x Psuedosonic Heavy Beam Cannons
  320x Psuedosonic Beam Cannon Turrets
  150x "COB" Lightning Cannons
  90x FAE/SW-09 Hybrid Scatter Cannon - Light
  3x Capital Grade Torpedo Launchers:
  Seismic Missiles
  Cluster Seismic Missile
  Quake Missiles
• Defenses: Extreme
  Phkalt Metal
  10 SLD-14 Shield Generators
  10 Ion Shields Generators
  Missile Deactivation Transmitter
  Micropoles
• Hangar Space: Average: 28
• Hangar Allocations:
  Starfighters: 24 squadrons
  Support Craft: 4 squadrons
• Maneuverability Rating: Low
• Speed Rating: Low
• Hyperdrive Class: 1
  Microjump Capacitor

STANDARD FEATURES

Has the ability to combine all the Psuedosonic Heavy Continuous Beam Cannons into one array towards the front, allowing it to fire onto large targets.

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

• Isotope Trithium Zero Generator
• C-3a "Mercury" Class Communications Suite
• STS-84 "Artemis" Class Targeting & Sensor System
• FAE/S-05 ECM Array
• Missile Deactivation Transmitter
• Microjump Capacitor
• Electronic Countermeasures Suite
• Antivirus and Security: TunnelNet VPN & AEGIS SH13LD
• Spectral Diffuser
• Photonic Emitter
• Signature Modulator
• Nightshadow Compartments
• Phkalt Metal
• Micropoles

Strengths:

• Juggernaut: Taking down this ship with just turbolaser fire just won't do it unless you just fire upon it with everything the enemy has for a decent amount of time. The amount of defenses due to the shield generators as well as the use of Micropoles and Ion Shield Generators makes it a near impossibility of it being destroyed without a heavy use of fleet firepower. With it also now being upgraded with Phkalt Metal, it is now even more of a painful situation.
• Wipe This Pathetic Excuse From the Face of the Galaxy!: With the ability to combine all the Psuedosonic Heavy Continuous Beam Cannons complete might, it has the ability to strike at possible destroyers, battlecruisers and even dreadnoughts, allowing the potential chance to destroy them.
• Activate the Cloaking!: It can shimmer in and out of the light, using its Phkalt Metal to go into a stealth like mode.

Weaknesses:

• Charging, Please Stand By!: It takes time to fire the very large and dangerous combined weapon, taking at least some time before firing. The larger the target, the longer it will take.
• Don't You Know This Costs Money?!: It is a very expensive starship and requires it to be upkept through a lot of financial means.
• Shoot Through the Very Small Exhaust Port!: In the center of the starship, it has a very small port that could be destroyed which if done during firing, completely implodes the Immaculte.

Description:
The Immaculates were created for the sole need for an actual dangerous Battlecruiser for sale or use among Angel Arms. Having the possible ability to combine its weaponry into one dangerous weapon, it was an option towards fledging new factions to have a very dangerous yet potential flagship for others.

 

[Ivory Stroud]

"The ability to destroy a planet is insignificant to the Power of The Force."

An impressive & dangerous starship, Mr. Hafey. However, I did find a handful of things wrong:

Wipe This Pathetic Excuse From the Face of the Galaxy!: With the ability to combine all the Psuedosonic Heavy Continuous Beam Cannons complete might, it has the ability to strike at possible destroyers, battlecruisers and even dreadnoughts, allowing the potential chance to destroy them. This can also be used to demoralize cities, having pericision to strike among the cities and with maximum firepower, obliterate not only cities, but continents and possible asteroids along with small moons.

This is an immensely powerful effect, and I believe it is pushing the envelope when it comes to the rules on Super-weapons. Unfortunately, I'm afraid I can't approve this level of firepower. Please edit or remove this effect to a more manageable level.

Secondly, the ship's size is listed as 5km, but Combat Ships at your current production level are limited to 4km in length. Please adjust this.

Edit: After some further review, I've identified a few more things which need to be corrected.

3. Your total squadron count does not add up to 28; and furthermore, 28 squadrons is far too many for a ship of this size.

4. Your ratings are very over-powered, especially with up to 28 squadrons. 20 Squadrons, at a Low rating, would balance the sub.

Thank you for your patience, and helpful instruction!

Angelus Hafey

 

[Angelus Hafey]

I have modified the affiliation to a major faction known as the Sith Order, fixed up my strength over the power of the weapon and added in the stealth cloaking field of Phkalt Metal.

Ivory Stroud

 

[Ivory Stroud]

"So this is how Liberty dies... to thunderous applause."

Long may the Sith Order reign.

APPROVED