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Approved Tech Lorna's Cloak

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Other
  • Weight: Weightless
  • Resistances:
    • Energy: Very High
    • Kinetic: Very High
    • Lightsabers: Very High
    • Other: Sonic: Low
    • Other: EMP/ION: Very Low
    • Other: Disruptors: Very Low
    • Other: Radiation: Average
    • Other: Fire: Average
    • Other: Cryo: Average
    • Other: Acid: Average
    • Other: Vacuum: None
    • Other: Darkside: VExtreme
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Force Affinity: Designed with force infused materials that imbue to the jedi wearing them a standard slew of protections and capabilities. The ability to better resist the darksides influence, ease the access to learned skills that have been practiced and feeling generally more energized and lively.
    • Force Resistance: Not pure resistance to the force but its influences specifically the darkside.
    • Force Enlightenment: A general enhancement of the specific jedi's talents in the lightside of the force. They don't know everything but using their own abilities is easier, sharper focus.
    • Revitalize: A more robust feeling mentally and physically aids in calming the mind and body to focus.
    • Force Form: Focusing and utilizing the force itself to improve the jedi's focus and mind as well as combative capabilities with the force.
    • Avar Kriss's Network: Connecting her to the jedi as a whole it follows much of what Avar did and lets her hear the song of the force.
    • Tutaminis: Advanced and formed within the robes themselves.. the material absorbs energy, heat, electrical, force, plasma and others to feed it into the jedis body and mind revitalizing their force powers.
    • Cleanse Mind: Focusing the force and clearing the mind of mental influences and those they can focus their attention on.
    • Force Binding: Designed and augmented into the robes, the pockets and robes themselves can be used to bind and contain influences when it is enclosed around a darkside object.
    • Inspire: Focused and empowered the jedi themselves as beacons within the force inspiring those around them to action and to shake off negative thoughts.
    • Controlled Descent: Focusing the force into a cushion around them the jedi are able to land from greater heights.
    • Force Familiar: Controlled and focused, the robes seek out a familiar creature and bonds with it... sadly while it connects them death of the jedi can kill the familiar.
  • Halcyon Legacy: Designed to augment Lorna's family skills... the halcyons were not the best at applications of the force with telekinetics but absorbing energies and making illusions being their skills.
  • Kirano Interface: Standard technical interface for operations.
  • Jedi Utility Belt: For supplies
  • Cracken Survival Kit: Standard field kit
  • Sigil of Hope: A legacy piece of jediu equipment created from the dark harvesters.
  • Kojie: Underslung shoulder pack for extra equipment space.
  • Perfumed Sleeves: Defensive Measures designed for jedi robes
  • Refined Sleg Ultracapacitors: Designed to improve the power of the suits and augment the shielding for radiation and heat in space or protect them when boarding other ships.
  • Advanced Regulator System: Designed to recycle oxygen and filter poisons for the common peoples in case of attack.
  • Seeker Drone: Companion to atrisians and function as one of two organization interfaces. Can work together with an astromech.
  • Makie Class Droid: A non-combative companion droid that works with the Atrisian citizens.
  • Heavy Praestigiae's Luminous Overlaid Technological Shields: Protective shielding designed to be used with the pilot suit in the event of out of ship combat scenarios.
  • Advanced Micro Thrusters: Designed to increase movement speed of the jedi while moving around.
  • Strength/Speed Enhancement: Enhancing the body to increase the pilots natural state. In the event they are without their ships they can defend themselves.
  • Temperature control/heat reflection: Designed for additional comfort when on other worlds
  • Locator beacon: For emergencies to be retrieved with rescue ships.
  • Ablative Plating: Designed with the standard robes and armor plating itself in a combination.
  • Halcyon Legacy:
STRENGTHS
  • Superior Protection: Designed using the Synthmesh, wintrium that as it ages continues to grow stronger and skylar which offers a form fitted compression material.
  • Force Affinity: Infused and crafted with the force, the synthmesh, skylar and inth metal used all add force abilities to the outfit.
  • Protection: The hypermembrane provides a robust degree of protection so it can be used.
  • Self Repairing: Designed with the hypermembrane for protection but also the ability to repair itself over time with small damage being a few minutes to hours and sections of the suit being days.
  • Overly Engineered: Designed to give the jedi a powerful sense of control and protection.
  • Exotic Matter: Altered at the molecular level and force enhanced to be force enhanced to be highly protective.
WEAKNESSES
  • Requires Connection to the Force: For the synthweave effects to function within it the material needs to be able to feel the force energies around it. Vong tech, yalisimiri, voidstone, dampening fields are all counter to what the material can handle.
  • Self repairing: While it can repair its own micro stress fractures the capabilities can take days to hours depending on how damaged they become from use.
  • Exotic Particles: Largely unknown and not seen in the galaxy before. It isn't invincible nor is it really strong but it reacts violently near dark and anti-matter which can disrupt and destroy it or even cause it to rupture and disintegrate.
  • Exotic Matter: The tetherite and solarite metals are explosive when they come into contact with anti or dark matter.
  • Lightside beacon; The robes radiate the lightside of the force.
  • Lightside: Designed with the jedi and lightside in mind, the material can be worn andused by neutral and darksiders but it is uncomfortable.
DESCRIPTION
Designed for Lorna after she reached the rank of jedi knight. This personal cloak is in the Corellian style. Green skylar with synthmesh and weaves made into it so it is thicker and able to cover her body. It leaves areas exposed, the face, hands, feet and opened area in front where it doesn't close. It is meant to be worn over robes and clothing as a second layer, it works to protect from a number of attacks with the synthmesh being strong against lightsabers and blasters energy.

The kinetic weave helping from impact and slugs and sound dampening against sonic. Shrapnel is also reduced heavily as the material doesn't tear easily and it can prevent something from going through or slicing you up. The impact might be reduced but you can still feel the hit. The clasp of the cloak is an old family coin that was struck for her family and bares the halcyon insignia with the jedi insignia. Taking a few cues from Sor-Jan one of the more skilled Corellien jedi masters the engineers at Sasori tried to make sure it is able to fit and be measured to Lorna's body with a little extra so it can be worn over her own clothing/armor.

Since it relies on the force itself to have the bulk of its resistances and augments, the material needs an active force user who isn't being blocked by vong tech, voidstone/steel and worlds like myrkr. The lightside beacon effect of the robes is also a big thing as it is made to not be used or worn by darksiders and the final pieces were the inth and agena. Metals and materials to add additional levels of protection and personilization as it will be augmentable to become hers and hers alone.

Lorna's cloak has been updated and upgraded over the years... providing her increased skill with her families techniques... allowing her to absorb energies from just about anything and convert it into force energy she can use to fuel her skills. A jedi credit for the clasp and her own families holocron included with the robes allow her to be able to add information and give the others a better chance to understand what has happened with the force dynasty over nearly a thousand years.
 
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Anaara Clandestine said:
Intent: To create and have a sub for Lorna's cloak

Anaara Clandestine said:
Image Source: Corellian Jedi

Anaara Clandestine said:
- Explosive: High
How is a cloak providing any amount of resistance to explosions? I could see if this was armor, like full-body armor or plated armor, but this is a cloak. I was going to ask for you to increase the weight to justify so many high resistances when I realized this, as your description and strengths and most of the rest of the sub make mention of robes and other things that aren't present in your submission.

I did notice some similarities with another submission you made in the past, and I'm assuming you utilized it as the basis for this submissions, did you by chance accidentally leave in information from that submission? (the submission in question) If so, please remove anything left over from the other submission that isn't supposed to be in this one (like the mention of robes and such things).



Anaara Clandestine said:
Exposed Sections: Designed with more freedom of movement in mind, there are areas under the cloak are generally open to attack and not as protected depending on what is being worn
If this is intended to inform those reading this submission that only the areas covered by the cloak (i.e; a lightsaber strike to the back where the cloak comes between the saber and the person wearing this), then please make that a little more clear. An example of how this can be worded would be the following:
  • The cloak only provides protection to the area it is directly covering, any areas left exposed are not protected by this cloak.
 
[member="Nadja Keto"]

changed the wording so it was more clear and changed it to explosive shrapnal as you are right but like kama it should and would easily be able to protect from the debris thrown off by an explosive. As for the sub I used the other as a basis as most of the things were covered. Just made some changes to fit the mold of a cloak that would go over the robes. Hopefully it looks more clear now and the only mention of a robe is that it is meant to worn over robes/armor.
 
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Submission Name: Nameless Robes
Link to Submission: Nameless Robes
Reason for Factory Modification Request: updates

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Submission Name: Lorna's Cloak
Link to Submission: Lorna's Cloak
Reason for Factory Modification Request: updates

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Submission Name: Guardian Robes of The Whills
Link to Submission: Guardian Robes of The Whills
Reason for Factory Modification Request: updates

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Submission Name: Robes of the Weavers
Link to Submission: Robes of the Weavers
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Submission Name: Saori Packs
Link to Submission: Saori Packs
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