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Approved Lore 1st Task Force - CIS Navy

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Fleet Marshal, CIS Navy
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Fleet Name: 1st Task Force.
  • Classification: Expeditionary Task Force.
  • Affiliation: Confederacy of Independent Systems
  • Fleet Symbol:
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  • Description: Professional fleet operating as a large task force in the CIS Navy in order to protect peoples who are unable to protect themselves. The task force was created after the disastrous defense of Csilla to fill the gap in defensive and offensive fleets that the CIS had.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Headquarters: Based on Naboo.
  • Ports of Call: The 1st task force is very mobile, and usually does not return to any one port of call.
  • Goals: To deal with threats that a normal fleet would be unable to handle. With the annihilation of Csilla and the defensive failures there, an obvious need was present for a task force capable of operating separately from the CIS Navy in order to provide defensive support for allies and those in need.
  • Reputation: The 1st task force is known as a large and powerful force, prepared to go wherever the Confederacy needs huge amounts of firepower to right unjustice.
  • Fleet Size: Large (28.956km)
  • Lead Ship: CNS Hellfire
  • Composition:
    • 402nd Heavy Attack Line - 12.01km total legth
      • x5 Grievous-class Star Destroyer
        • CNS Avenger
        • CNS Dying Breath
        • CNS Closed Hand
        • CNS Confederacy's Fist
        • CNS Broken Chain
      • x2 Argente-class Assault cruiser
        • CNS Thor's Hammer
        • CNS Worker's Might
      • x4 Terrus-class Flak Corvette
        • CNS Lord's Shield
        • CNS Plasmafist
        • CNS Fighter's Bane
        • CNS Devil's Hands
    • 407th Carrier Line - 10.18km Total length
      • x1 SC-013 "Lucrehulk" III-class Supercarrier
        • CNS Hellfire
      • x2 Providence II-class Assault Carrier
        • CNS Swarm's Revenge
        • CNS Queen's Mandate
      • x4 Bonteri-class Escort Carrier
        • CNS Hive's Mind
        • CNS Homeworld's shield
        • CNS Starlight
        • CNS Thunderhead
    • 403rd Siege Line - 6.766km total length
      • x1 Thoros II-class Siege Battlecruiser
        • CNS Trebuchet
      • x2 Argente-class Assault Cruiser
        • CNS Devastation
        • CNS Fireball
      • x10 Miraj-class Heavy Assault Dropship
MEMBERS
Leader: Jason Breaker Jason Breaker , Fleet Marshal, CIS Navy.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The 1st Task force is a extremely new fleet created to fill a needed role of an all around utility fleet, to be used whenever a normal fleet would not be beneficial to use. The 1st has not seen any combat as yet, and is awaiting their first tasking. Those who destroy worlds must be punished. The task force has been trained in special tactics for situations they would be likely to encounter, such as a pirate fleet or rouge elements of any federation's navy. The 1st task force's special training, as well as special assets including an Artificial Super Intelligence and a large element of BX series commando droids.
 
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Jason Breaker Jason Breaker | Fiolette Fortan

This is a pretty nice submission, there are just a few extra little bits I'd like to bring up before we go forward.

1) Image Credit

The article you link to in your submission doesn't actually contain the image you're using as part of your submission. After looking around the internet I found the image here on shutterstock. Please update the submission accordingly.

2) Description

Description: Professional fleet operating as a large task force in the CIS Navy,

Could you please flesh this section of the submission out a little more? What is the purpose of this taskforce?

3) Terrus-Class

x4 Terrus-class Flak Frigates

You have written them up as Frigates here, however, the submission is actually a corvette per this submission.

4) Historical Information

The 1st Task force is a extremely new fleet created to fill a needed role of an all around utility fleet, to be used whenever a normal fleet would not be beneficial to use. The 1st has not seen any combat as yet, and is awaiting their first tasking. Those who destroy worlds must be punished.

Could you flesh this section out a little more as well? What kind of situations would they be called up into action for? Why would they be used rather than other fleet elements?
 
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