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Codex Denied The Tomb

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U N I O N

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Fleet Name: The Tomb
  • Classification: Attack Fleet
  • Affiliation:
  • Fleet Symbol: The Union's symbol with a allegiance class star destroyer in the middle.
  • Description: Comprised of the finest N&Z Umbrella Corporation ships, the Tomb fleet is a fearsome foe to be reckoned with. Not known to many, but those who have encountered the Tomb have told tales of destruction and darkness. Tales have been told that the Tomb rarely leaves any survivors, only a heap of scrap metal drifting aimlessly in the cold deep darkness of space. Those that have survived say the captain is the worst part. They describe a sort of dark aura around him. Some say his glare could rip men's souls apart.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Headquarters: Mobile fleet, no stationary headquarters.
  • Ports of Call:
  • Goals: Defend the interests, assets and values of the Union
  • Reputation: N/A
COMPOSITION INFORMATION
MEMBERS
Charles Castex Charles Castex - Rear Admiral/Fleet Commander

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
After the expansion of the Union, and inevitably the Navy, more recruits joined the Union. Filling in the gaps, more fleets were created and handed to fresh officers. The Tomb, a fresh hard hitting fleet was designated for the command of Captain Charles Castex. The Tomb Fleet participated in multiple skirmishes, and battles against pirates and other insurgencies.

As the fourth fleet gained more recognition via it's participation and wide-spread success in many Union battles (dominions), it's commander, Charles Castex was promoted to Rear Admiral, given a ground force to accompany the fleet, and had his fleet expanded with the addition of more and new vessels.

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6/25/2020- Members, Reputation, Composition, Historical Information, Fleet Size. Lead Ship
 
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Right Hander Narrator Right Hander Narrator Hey there! :) Nice sub, just one area that needs a bit of fixing:

In General Information, under Affiliation, your Zweihander Union link isn't working. Additionally, individual characters can't be affiliated with fleets, so I'm going to have to ask you to remove Charles Castex from the affiliation list. The character can still captain the fleet or be considered its head IC, but just not affiliated in this manner, as per in accordance with the Factory rules of what can be produced and fielded:
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Other than that the submission is fine. Please tag me back once you've edited and I'll be happy to approve it :)
 
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