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Approved Tech The Eyes of Je'gan

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Other
  • Weight: Weightless
  • Resistances:
    • Energy: Very High
    • Kinetic: Very High
    • Lightsabers: Very High
    • Other: Sonic: None
    • Other: EMP/ION: Very high
    • Other: Disruptors: None
    • Other: Radiation: None
    • Other: Fire: Average
    • Other: Cryo: Average
    • Other: Acid: Average
    • Other: Vacuum: None
    • Other: Darkside: Extreme
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Force Affinity: Designed with force infused materials that imbue to the jedi wearing them a standard slew of protections and capabilities. The ability to better resist the darksides influence, ease the access to learned skills that have been practiced and feeling generally more energized and lively.
    • Force Resistance: Not pure resistance to the force but its influences specifically the darkside.
    • Force Enlightenment: A general enhancement of the specific jedi's talents in the lightside of the force. They don't know everything but using their own abilities is easier, sharper focus.
    • Revitalize: A more robust feeling mentally and physically aids in calming the mind and body to focus.
    • Force Form: Focusing and utilizing the force itself to improve the jedi's focus and mind as well as combative capabilities with the force.
    • Avar Kriss's Network: Connecting her to the jedi as a whole it follows much of what Avar did and lets her hear the song of the force.
    • Tutaminis: Advanced and formed within the robes themselves.. the material absorbs energy, heat, electrical, force, plasma and others to feed it into the jedis body and mind revitalizing their force powers.
    • Cleanse Mind: Focusing the force and clearing the mind of mental influences and those they can focus their attention on.
    • Force Binding: Designed and augmented into the robes, the pockets and robes themselves can be used to bind and contain influences when it is enclosed around a darkside object.
    • Inspire: Focused and empowered the jedi themselves as beacons within the force inspiring those around them to action and to shake off negative thoughts.
    • Controlled Descent: Focusing the force into a cushion around them the jedi are able to land from greater heights.
    • Force Familiar: Controlled and focused, the robes seek out a familiar creature and bonds with it... sadly while it connects them death of the jedi can kill the familiar.
  • Kirano Interface: Standard technical interface for operations.
  • Jedi Utility Belt: For supplies
  • Cracken Survival Kit: Standard field kit
  • Sigil of Hope: A legacy piece of jediu equipment created from the dark harvesters.
  • Kojie: Underslung shoulder pack for extra equipment space.
  • Perfumed Sleeves: Defensive Measures designed for jedi robes
  • Refined Sleg Ultracapacitors: Designed to improve the power of the suits and augment the shielding for radiation and heat in space or protect them when boarding other ships.
  • Advanced Regulator System: Designed to recycle oxygen and filter poisons for the common peoples in case of attack.
  • Seeker Drone: Companion to atrisians and function as one of two organization interfaces. Can work together with an astromech.
  • Makie Class Droid: A non-combative companion droid that works with the Atrisian citizens.
  • Heavy Praestigiae's Luminous Overlaid Technological Shields: Protective shielding designed to be used with the pilot suit in the event of out of ship combat scenarios.
  • Advanced Micro Thrusters: Designed to increase movement speed of the jedi while moving around.
  • Strength/Speed Enhancement: Enhancing the body to increase the pilots natural state. In the event they are without their ships they can defend themselves.
  • Temperature control/heat reflection: Designed for additional comfort when on other worlds
  • Locator beacon: For emergencies to be retrieved with rescue ships.
  • Ablative Plating: Designed with the standard robes and armor plating itself in a combination.
  • Collects INformation and sends to the Great Library of Manuals
  • Biometric Data
  • Astrometric Information
  • Navigational Charts
  • Historical Records
  • Educational Content
  • Holonet Archives
  • Basic Information
  • Detects various forms of illusion
STRENGTHS
  • Superior Protection: Designed using the Synthmesh, wintrium that as it ages continues to grow stronger and skylar which offers a form fitted compression material.
  • Force Affinity: Infused and crafted with the force, the synthmesh, skylar and inth metal used all add force abilities to the outfit.
  • Protection: The hypermembrane provides a robust degree of protection so it can be used.
  • Self Repairing: Designed with the hypermembrane for protection but also the ability to repair itself over time with small damage being a few minutes to hours and sections of the suit being days.
  • Overly Engineered: Designed to give the jedi a powerful sense of control and protection.
  • Exotic Matter: Altered at the molecular level and force enhanced to be force enhanced to be highly protective.
  • Detection: Designed to be the ultimate detection system through technological, biological and force based.
    • Illusion based Cloaking: The white current is possibly the strongest of the illusions and hard to see. The lenses of the system are able to peer into it and detect the subtle flaws in the illusions that can form with cloaking of the type and as the cloak gets larger the more flaws can appear like for ships and vehicles.
    • Light Bending based cloaking: Being able to pick up the shimmer of the light around the user. Light bending based illusions are easier to see with the spot the flaw method and the crystalline lenses aid in this.
    • Personal Cloaking devices, stealth technologies that bend light around a being or ship can function much the same way but need to fall into the small line of sight with the glasses same as it all.
      Mental Persuasion Based Cloaking: The jedi mind trick can be strong but it requires a weak mind and will to be persauded you aren't seeing what is right in front of you. Generally the wearer of the glasses has a strong will and mind to focus the force making the ability to detect very high.
      Sith Magic Based Illusions: A rare form that only a small handful of a small handful can do. Sith magiv based illusions can be deadly compared to the others and the glasses don't directly have a method to determine if they are real or fake.
    • Radiation: Designed to Detect low traces of radiation produced when exiting hyperspace and from engine emissions using tibannax gas to propel themselves forward.
    • Concealment: Taozin based, yasalimiri based and force null type concealment to hide presences as well as ships register as a vacuum area and spatial anomaly rather then background noise and can bring attention to it.
WEAKNESSES
  • Requires Connection to the Force: For the synthweave effects to function within it the material needs to be able to feel the force energies around it. Vong tech, yalisimiri, voidstone, dampening fields are all counter to what the material can handle.
  • Self repairing: While it can repair its own micro stress fractures the capabilities can take days to hours depending on how damaged they become from use.
  • Exotic Particles: Largely unknown and not seen in the galaxy before. It isn't invincible nor is it really strong but it reacts violently near dark and anti-matter which can disrupt and destroy it or even cause it to rupture and disintegrate.
  • Exotic Matter: The tetherite and solarite metals are explosive when they come into contact with anti or dark matter.
  • Lightside beacon; The robes radiate the lightside of the force.
  • Lightside: Designed with the jedi and lightside in mind, the material can be worn andused by neutral and darksiders but it is uncomfortable.
  • Simple Program: Designed to be nothing dangerous, the program just rewtires a little coding to have droids send information to severs within the Great Library.
  • Not a master Key: The program isn't an instant secrets revealed of a government or group, information that would be normally available is accessed easier because the droids do not have as much protection. Dedicated droids that are reinforced from slicing and hacking can be protected against it.
  • Tunnel Vision: Using the force effects to long can lead to a tunnel vision where your focus clocks out everything around you
  • No Protection: Designed to fit over the bridge of the nose and eyes... the glasses themselves provide little protection aside from solar and light protection as sunglasses
  • Line of Sight: The vision only works by looking through the glasses lenses. Everywhere else is pretty much free to have cloaked beings but in her direct line of sight through them she can see better. THe further away something is from the wearer the less and less detail they may be able to see.
DESCRIPTION
Designed for the Namelewss one a jedi Librarian type scholar. Based off of the notes of an ancient jedi who developed electrobinoculars into a stealth detection system for their homeworld. The glasses are done much the same with the exception of the materials and based. THey can't zoom in but they can allow seeing stealth based beings easier. It won't be perfect, it won't automatically allow them to see someone but she'll be more aware of it and as a means to protect others and the library.

The Nameless one though did something else when asking for these going to a workshop within Sasori that specialized in making materials imbued with the force. SInce Kiriko's passing the workshop sat slightly unused but the artisan's were there to work on things. The name of the object though she wanted to make to honor one of the jedi she knew was strong and great at teaching how to see through illusions. Je'gan a talented master and great mentor to the order despite being at times a little inflexible... She still respected him greatly and he was possibly the strongest follower of the white current in the order. Being able to at best see something was off from a user with it would be a welcome thing.

THe years have been kind as the jedi librarian was able to work with many of the materials and even more as they have developed technologies like the kirano interface which including its frames allow the interface to overlay with the lens. THe jedi master herself is able to use them as she always had but now her information and visuals are directly uploaded through the lomi software to the great library. She has managed to streamline and improve all of her information gathering techniques.
 
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Hello!

Thank you for your patience. And also, huge fan of characters wearing and using glasses.

As one of the few White Current RPers floating about these boards this submission took me a little more time to examine.
I think it's just a tad too powerful in what it does.

The trade offs a Fallanassi writer has to make in order to maintain their character are so severe that even taking away their ability to fully rely on Force Immersion to help defend themselves strikes me as: too little, too much. Even "sensing that there may be something nearby" completely circumvents the intention of the ability. Keep in mind that someone immersed isn't able to directly manipulate or attack anything in the physical world without dropping their veil.

With that in mind I would suggest changing that line to be something like: "it can notify one of illusions. Or draw attention to white current styled illusions." There is a difference in both.



Nameless One said:
Light Bending based cloaking: Being able to pick up the shimmer of the light around their cloak, the likely hood of finding and being cloaked beings is higher compared to none Disciples of Twilight who invented a skill.

What exactly does this mean? Are you saying the glasses can help you detect cloaked beings using personal cloaking devices? And with more effectiveness than the secret Force sect that invented the ability? If so then you don't need to change wording. However, does this boon extend to ships and large vehicles using stealth tech or is just for individuals.



Nameless One said:
Mental Persausion Based Cloaking: The jedi mind trick can be strong but it requires a weak mind and will to be persuaded you aren't seeing what is right in front of you. Generally the wearer of the glasses has a strong will and mind to focus the force making the ability to detect very high.

This seems redundant to me. Do the glasses also increase your resistance to mind tricks? It seems to me that you are saying the wearer already has these traits. If the wearer is already an expert in this just remove this strength. If you are saying the glasses further increase your resistance then reword this to directly state such.

Anyway, that's what I have for the strengths section of your submission. Let me know what you think. I hope we can hammer out these details because again, I really do have a thing for glasses and characters using them and the aesthetic.

Warm regards,
---Major

[member="Nameless One"]
 
Thank you and edited to clarify hopefuly everything. Now for it

the mental illusions was included for the posterity of talking about force illusions. using Je'gan's guide also added sith based illusions that are a weaknesses now because rarely seen or used just to properly. Added a note about line of sight, you can see far but you can't actually make out details of a person at twenty miles. The eyes previously were used from electrobinoculars whch would have been able to zoom but these are just more or less a normal pair of glasses with special lenses.
 

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