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[Jacen Cavill]

I may be completely forgotten by now, but some feedback would be appreciated. I have a couple of main characters; Darron Wraith and Jacen Cavill.

Jacen lost his company(BlasTech) while I was gone and I need help on where to go with him now.


Darron was struck down and the Galaxy thinks he's dead but he's been brain-washed into becoming Death's Hand. What should I do with him now?


Basically I'm asking what did you guys like/dislike prior to me leaving that I should focus on/or eliminate, as well as a general direction for the two above listed characters. Or should I just write with my pilot character whos Darrons child?

 

[Arage Bao]

Clearly you should convince Danger to give you your company back (or kill her and take it back anyway) and then return to the corporate fold.

 

[Ignatius]

You could do what Ashin did.

Lose your force powers somehow, and then work your way back up to master rank.

 

[Sarge Potteiger]

I never really got to write with you a whole ton, but I would love to see you return; Bailey Triumphant.

So my advice here is you do you. You wouldn't post this if you didn't have an idea of where you wanted to go, and while I cannot refine your thoughts or give voice to your instinct on where to move forward, what I can do is say this entirely unhelpful phrase.

You do you.

Write that child of Wraith, and maybe, in the process, discover what you already know.

 

[Jacen Cavill]

[member="Sarge Potteiger"] you're the man.


Side note: I tried LOL for a day, realized those are some crazy folks who take it way too seriously.

 

[Lief]

[member="Jacen Cavill"]

y u reject my skype

dont u luv me any more

cry sob

it's Libby/Kara btw

 

[Djonas Vile]

Clearly you should convince Danger to give you your company back (or kill her and take it back anyway) and then return to the corporate fold.

I second this.

 

[Djonas Vile]

[member="Sarge Potteiger"] you're the man.


Side note: I tried LOL for a day, realized those are some crazy folks who take it way too seriously.

Same with Smite..

 

[Lief]

[member="Jonas Vile"]

HEY DUDE SMITE IS AWESOME

DON'T YOU DARE DIS SM---


--- oh... xD xD (thatwasjokesbtw)

 

[Jacen Cavill]

[member="Jyn Sol"] bby Im not even on skype right now.


[member="Jonas Vile"][member="Jared Ovmar"]. Companu takeover huh? Okay.


[member="Akuma"] Id love to, but I'm not half the writer Ashin is.

 

[Lief]

[member="Jacen Cavill"]

well u suk! <3

Also we should RP for once..

.. and finish the dang thread!! <3

 

[Jacen Cavill]

I agree, but Im looking for feedback. It can be positive or negative, constructive criticism hasn't killed me yet.

 

[Ignatius]

[member="Jacen Cavill"], I think differently. You have talent, and you already have gotten to master a few times. Why not do it again? I mean your IC reason could be "I was once strong, and now I am pathetic. I will train to become stronger than I was before!"

*Shrugs shoulders* Or you could just go and take your company back like it was said above.

 

[Sarge Potteiger]

[member="Jacen Cavill"]

Low level league is filled with incompetents outsourcing anger at their own lack of ability onto the mistakes of others.

 

[Corey's OOC]

Corporate lyfe

 

[Djonas Vile]

[member="Jyn Sol"] Hey I love Smite! It's just that I get destroyed. Alot. I do have good games sometimes lol.

[member="Jacen Cavill"] Besides the company takeover, you should also join or create a tight-knit group of Sith with whom you travel the galaxy with in search of a purpose. Or something of that sort.

 

[Ashin Varanin]

[member="Jacen Cavill"]
Hey dude - I'm on LOA, but immensely glad to see you around.
Also, +1 to [member="Akuma"]'s suggestion. Having Ashin get Jedi Exile'd down to Padawan again, and working my way back up with an even more specialized build, was a ton of fun.

 

[Hailyn]

Make [member="Danger Arceneau"] feel special and I'm sure she'll give you anything.

 

[Ignatius]

[member="Ashin Varanin"], I liked the idea and thought about putting a few of my own characters through that.

*Fist pump for getting a +1 from Ashin*

 

[Josh Dragovalor]

Teach me how to fly like Superman *shot*

I'd honestly love to thread with Darron Wraith again. It's been so long, and we never really got to have them interact the way we had wanted them to when we were both on the Council.