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Ranged Weapon Review O'dteyase Saranuhlr — Sahan Dragr's Legendary Verpine Shatter Hand Cannon

Manufacturer: Sahan Dragr
Market Status: Closed Market
Production: Unique
Weight: Average
Size: Average
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O'dteyase Saranuhlr, Sahan Dragr's Golden Dragon-refit Verpine hand cannon.​

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Golden Dragon Refit: The O'dteyase Saranuhlr has been refinished and rebuilt to match Sahan Dragr's modern Golden Dragon equipment suite, using metallic gold, red-orange, and dark gunmetal external styling with improved internal diagnostics and maintenance access.
  • Verpine Shatter Gun Core: Built from a modified HG-54 Vora-Class Verpine Hand Cannon, the weapon uses magnetic acceleration to launch compact slugs at extreme velocity with minimal sound compared to conventional slugthrowers.
  • Adaptive Magnetic Accelerator: The actuating module, accu-accelerator hardware, and refined magnetic coils help tune launch force for compatible ammunition types, improving consistency across standard slugs and more exotic specialty rounds.
  • Adaptive Magazine Feed System: The weapon uses smart magazines, an adjustable feed throat, and an internally indexing magazine follower to accommodate compatible slug and slug-like ammunition of varying size. Compact Verpine-style slugs allow the highest capacity, while larger exotic payloads reduce the number of rounds that can be carried in a magazine.
  • Smart-Tracking System: The O'dteyase Saranuhlr uses a compact laser/lidar target-marker, short-range encrypted telemetry link, and HUD-integrated fire-control processor to designate a target before firing. Once a target has been painted, the weapon can transmit a coded tracking profile to compatible smart ammunition loaded in the chamber or magazine. This does not make every shot a homing round; only purpose-built smart slugs or smart saboted specialty rounds can use the system.
  • Compatible Smart-Tracking Ammunition: Compatible tracking ammunition uses a ruggedized guidance sleeve or sabot built around the slug or specialty payload. Each smart round contains a hardened micro-seeker, inertial stabilizer, tiny control processor, and a ring of micro-repulsor steering nodes designed to survive the weapon's magnetic launch cycle. After leaving the barrel, the round reads the coded target-marker reflection and/or short-range telemetry from Sahan's HUD-linked weapon systems, then makes small course corrections during flight. These corrections are intended for terminal guidance, leading fast-moving targets, and correcting minor aim deviations, not for making hard turns or chasing enemies around cover.
  • Course-Correction Limits: The guidance package is deliberately small enough to fit handgun-compatible ammunition, so its maneuvering authority is limited. The micro-repulsor nodes can nudge the round's path, stabilize the projectile, and correct within a narrow firing cone, but they cannot reverse direction, perform missile-like turns, ignore intervening cover, or reacquire a completely lost target. Heavy payloads have less room for guidance hardware and may be slower to correct than compact smart slugs.
  • Golden Dragon HUD Handshake: The weapon can authenticate with Sahan's beskar'gam, feeding ammunition count, loaded round type, barrel temperature, coil stress, tracking status, and fault warnings directly to his HUD.
  • RWA-M1 Integrated Weapons Scope: A compact integrated weapon scope links into Sahan's helmet or visor systems rather than relying on a conventional external optic alone.
  • Ultrachrome/Haysian Smelt Circuitry: Premium wiring and micro-circuitry support rapid power transfer, cleaner coil regulation, stable diagnostic response, and reliable HUD communication.
  • Sealed Service Core: Force-Tech Environmental Sealing Gel and reinforced service channels protect the weapon's electronics, accelerator coils, diagnostic hardware, magazine feed components, and smart-tracking systems from dust, mud, sand, rain, snow, and battlefield debris.
  • Ion/EMP Hardening: Combat de-ionizer hardware, insulation, sealing, and hardened circuitry improve the weapon's resistance to ionization, EMP bursts, and battlefield electrical interference.
  • Thermal Stabilization: The G'ahycaya CPU Cooler and heat management channels help prevent the weapon from overheating during rapid fire or heavy use of high-energy magnetic acceleration.
  • Anti-Force Construction: Voidsteel, Vong bonemeal case-hardening, and reinforced material layering make the weapon difficult to directly seize, discharge, or manipulate through telekinesis.
  • Sahan-Locked: A biometric lock and armor-authentication handshake restrict advanced firing profiles, smart-link features, diagnostics, and safety overrides to Sahan Dragr or authorized maintenance access.

STRENGTHS
  • Hand Cannon Bite: As a Verpine shatter handgun firing compact slugs at extreme velocity, the O'dteyase Saranuhlr hits far harder than most ordinary sidearms.
  • Long-Reaching Sidearm: Its Verpine shatter gun design, smart optics, and magnetic acceleration give it excellent range for a handgun-sized weapon.
  • High Rate of Fire: The refit preserves the older weapon's fast cycling and high fire rate, allowing rapid follow-up shots when Sahan needs to overwhelm a target or exploit an opening.
  • Wide Ammunition Compatibility: The weapon can use standard slugs and a broad range of specialized slug-like ammunition, making it highly adaptable against armor, droids, shields, Force-users, vehicles, and environmental targets.
  • Adaptive Capacity: Smart magazines and an adjustable feed system let the weapon carry up to fifty compact slugs while still accepting larger specialty payloads at reduced capacity.
  • Smart-Linked Precision: With a clear line of sight and enough acquisition time, Sahan can paint a target and feed a coded tracking profile to compatible smart ammunition. The round can then make limited terminal course corrections using its micro-seeker and micro-repulsor steering nodes, making it much harder for a marked target to evade in the open.
  • Armor Integration: When paired with Sahan's beskar'gam, the weapon provides ammunition counts, chamber status, round-type identification, heat levels, tracking status, and maintenance warnings directly to his HUD.
  • Weather-Hardened: Sealed electronics, Force-Tech Environmental Sealing Gel, and internal hardening address the usual Verpine shatter gun weakness against rain, mud, sand, dust, and battlefield contamination.
  • Ion/EMP Resistant: The weapon is significantly more resistant to ion and EMP disruption than an ordinary smart weapon or unmodified Verpine shatter gun.
  • Anti-Force Handling: Anti-Force materials make the gun difficult for enemy Force-users to directly steal, twist, or discharge through telekinesis.

WEAKNESSES
  • Variable Capacity: The weapon can carry up to fifty compact slugs in a magazine, but that number drops when using larger, heavier, or more complex specialty payloads. Exotic ammunition may also require careful loading and magazine calibration before use.
  • Feed Complexity: The adaptive feed system is more complex than a simple fixed-caliber magazine. Dirt, damage, poor maintenance, or badly made ammunition can cause feed errors, misalignment, or forced fallback to simpler ammunition profiles.
  • Specialty Ammo Problem: Standard slugs are the easiest ammunition to source. The more exotic rounds are expensive, uncommon, and often difficult to replace in the field.
  • Tracking Takes Time: Smart tracking requires a clear, unobscured line of sight and several seconds of target acquisition before a reliable firing solution can be created. Snap-shots, sudden melee pressure, smoke, cover, sensor baffling, darkness, reflective interference, jamming, or broken sightlines can prevent a successful tag.
  • Smart Ammo Required: The tracking system only benefits compatible smart slugs or smart saboted specialty rounds. Ordinary slugs, simple specialty rounds, or damaged smart rounds may still be fired accurately, but they receive no homing or course-correction benefit.
  • Limited Course Correction: Compatible tracking rounds are not miniature missiles. Their micro-repulsor steering nodes allow small terminal corrections within a narrow firing cone, but they cannot make hard turns, loop around shields or cover, chase a target through walls, or continue guiding if the target-marker is lost.
  • Guidance Can Be Spoofed or Broken: Electronic warfare, sensor ghosts, heavy particle interference, chaff, active jamming, reflective clutter, or decoy target markers can degrade the smart round's guidance. In those cases, the round may lose its correction ability, drift toward the wrong marker, or default to a normal ballistic shot.
  • Not a Blaster Hose: Despite its high rate of fire, the O'dteyase Saranuhlr is still a precision hand cannon, not a squad automatic weapon. Prolonged suppressive fire will overheat, drain, or empty it quickly.
  • Average Recoil: Condensed-matter composite and magnetic tuning help, but the weapon still kicks more than a light pistol or standard blaster sidearm, especially with heavy specialty slugs.
  • Cumbersome Sidearm: It is compact enough to carry as a handgun, but it remains a large and powerful hand cannon. Tight grapples, cramped quarters, or weak wrists make it harder to use properly.
  • Maintenance Hungry: Magnetic accelerator coils, adaptive feed components, smart-tracking emitters, sealed diagnostics, HUD links, and exotic material layering require careful maintenance. Neglect can degrade accuracy, tracking, feeding, or firing consistency.
  • Ion/EMP Resistant, Not Immune: Heavy ion or EMP exposure can still disrupt smart-link functions, tracking, diagnostics, or the weapon's firing systems if the protections are overwhelmed or breached.
  • Anti-Force, Not Force-Proof: The anti-Force materials protect the weapon itself against direct manipulation. They do not protect the ammunition after it leaves the barrel, nor do they stop indirect Force attacks aimed at Sahan, the environment, or his firing lane.
  • Owner-Locked Complications: If the biometric or armor-authentication systems fail, the weapon can fall back to basic local functions, but Sahan loses advanced firing profiles, HUD support, diagnostics, and some safety overrides until repaired.

DESCRIPTION

The O'dteyase Saranuhlr began life as Sahan Dragr's heavily modified O'dteyase, itself a customized HG-54 Vora-Class Verpine Hand Cannon rebuilt to better suit a Mandalorian bounty hunter, warrior, and eventually Forgemaster. The original weapon was already a dangerous sidearm: quiet, accurate, hard-hitting, and unusually adaptable thanks to its compatibility with a wide range of slug and slug-like ammunition.

The Golden Dragon refit brings the weapon in line with Sahan's modern armor, forgecraft, and Iron Covenant-era equipment standards. Its frame has been reinforced with high-carbon beskar steel, ve'vut beskar, zûtsina, condensed-matter composite, liquid-aenite, voidsteel, and Vong bonemeal treatment. The external finish now matches Sahan's newer gold, red-orange, and dark gunmetal aesthetic, making it visually consistent with his Golden Dragon beskar'gam and refit melee weapons.

Functionally, the weapon remains a Verpine shatter hand cannon. It uses magnetic acceleration to launch compact slugs at extreme velocity, delivering far more kinetic force than most conventional pistols. Its high rate of fire lets Sahan rapidly follow up shots, while its long effective range gives him more reach than many handgun users expect. Standard slugs work well enough, but the weapon truly shines when loaded with specialized ammunition such as cryo slugs, blackout rounds, anti-droid rounds, Force Breaker rounds, pyro slugs, Tracyntium rounds, or other compatible payloads.

The refit's most important improvements are not raw damage upgrades. Instead, Sahan focused on control, integration, and battlefield reliability. Ultrachrome/Haysian Smelt wiring improves power transfer and internal response. The updated accelerator assembly helps tune launch force for compatible ammunition types, while the adaptive magazine feed system allows the weapon to use compact Verpine-style slugs or larger specialty payloads. Compact slugs allow the highest magazine capacity, while bulkier exotic rounds reduce the number of shots carried and may require careful magazine calibration. The sealed service core protects the coils, electronics, diagnostics, magazine feed system, and smart-tracking components from the contamination problems that often plague delicate Verpine shatter weapons.


The weapon's smart-tracking system remains one of its most useful tools, but it depends on compatible ammunition rather than turning every slug into a guided projectile. When Sahan has clear line of sight, the hand cannon can paint a target with a coded laser/lidar marker and pair that marker with telemetry from his HUD and the weapon's fire-control processor. Compatible smart slugs or smart saboted specialty rounds receive that tracking profile before launch. Once fired, the round's hardened micro-seeker follows the coded marker while a small ring of micro-repulsor steering nodes makes limited terminal corrections during flight.

This allows the O'dteyase Saranuhlr to compensate for fast movement, evasive footwork, and minor aim deviations, especially in open firing lanes. It does not allow the ammunition to behave like a missile. The round cannot make hard turns, reverse course, navigate around cover, or continue tracking after the target-marker is broken. Smoke, darkness, sensor interference, jamming, reflective clutter, cover, sudden movement out of line of sight, or damaged guidance hardware can all disrupt the system. Ordinary slugs and non-compatible specialty rounds receive no homing benefit at all.

The Golden Dragon HUD handshake further integrates the weapon with Sahan's beskar'gam. When linked, the gun can report ammunition count, loaded round type, chamber status, coil stress, barrel temperature, tracking status, and maintenance warnings directly to his helmet systems. If the link is disrupted, the weapon remains usable through local controls, but Sahan loses the extra diagnostic and tactical feedback.

As with many of Sahan's personal creations, the O'dteyase Saranuhlr incorporates anti-Force materials. Voidsteel and Vong bonemeal treatment make the gun difficult to seize, twist, or discharge through direct telekinesis. This protection applies to the weapon itself, not to fired ammunition, and it does not prevent indirect Force powers from affecting Sahan, his cover, his footing, or the battlefield around him.

The final result is a refined Mandalorian hand cannon: quiet, accurate, hard-hitting, smart-linked, weather-hardened, and unmistakably built for Sahan Dragr. It is not simple, cheap, or easy to maintain, and it can burn through rare ammunition quickly. In the hands of the Golden Dragon, however, it remains exactly what it was always meant to be: a brutal, precise sidearm for ending problems before they get close.

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Out Of Character Info


Intent: To resubmit and modernize Sahan Dragr's personal Verpine hand cannon
Permissions: Listed

Technical Information


Affiliation: Sahan Dragr
Model: Modified HG-54 Vora-Class Verpine Hand Cannon
Modular: No
Effective Range: Long Range
Rate of Fire: Semi-Automatic
Material: Listed
Ammunition Type: Slugs
Ammunition Capacity: Average
Damage Output: Extreme
Recoil: Average
Ranged Class: Pistol
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Admiral Burtch

Newly Reinstated Admiral
Sahan Dragr Sahan Dragr

Beautiful gun! Love the image!

A few things to get this to approval state. To steal a line from a friend of mine, we got a lot to unpack here.

#1
This permit is broken, so you’ll need to use a different hosting service for the image. Discord is bad for that, I’m afraid.

#2
None of these links are acceptable. The factory does not accept character sheets, roleplay threads, prefactory, or archived submissions as viable materials for submissions. You’ll have to link viable factory submissions, Wookiepedia articles, IRL technology articles, or (if it is not too technical) give it a brief feature description for each feature within the firearm submission itself.
#3

These links aren’t even remotely accurate to what you have named them. You’ll have to fix this.
#4

Throughout the submission, it becomes clear that “Compatible Target Tracking Slugthrower Ammunition” with course correction capabilities is a key component to the functionality of this submission, but it remains ambiguous as to how it works. Can you provide a viable link to an ordnance technology, or within the submission, provide a detailed feature description of the ammunition along with a technical description of how it achieves course correction? Maneuvering thrusters, repulsors, tractor beams, or whatever is fine, but given the criticality of this feature to the functionality of the weapon, I’d like to see it fleshed out a bit more.

#5
These wookiepedia pages do not exist. You’ll need to provide a link to a technology submission, viable Wookiepedia article, IRL technology article, or if it’s not too technical, provide a brief feature description within the firearm submission itself.
Please tag me when this is ready to proceed.
For reference
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O'dteyase Saranuhlr, Sahan Dragr's Golden Dragon-refit Verpine hand cannon.​

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Golden Dragon Refit: The O'dteyase Saranuhlr has been refinished and rebuilt to match Sahan Dragr's modern Golden Dragon equipment suite, using metallic gold, red-orange, and dark gunmetal external styling with improved internal diagnostics and maintenance access.
  • Verpine Shatter Gun Core: Built from a modified HG-54 Vora-Class Verpine Hand Cannon, the weapon uses magnetic acceleration to launch compact slugs at extreme velocity with minimal sound compared to conventional slugthrowers.
  • Adaptive Magnetic Accelerator: The actuating module, accu-accelerator hardware, and refined magnetic coils help tune launch force for compatible ammunition types, improving consistency across standard slugs and more exotic specialty rounds.
  • Adaptive Magazine Feed System: The weapon uses smart magazines, an adjustable feed throat, and an internally indexing magazine follower to accommodate compatible slug and slug-like ammunition of varying size. Compact Verpine-style slugs allow the highest capacity, while larger exotic payloads reduce the number of rounds that can be carried in a magazine.
  • Smart-Tracking System: A miniature laser-tracking system can tag targets with an electronic homing signature, allowing compatible smart ammunition to adjust mid-flight while linked to Sahan's HUD or allied systems.
  • Golden Dragon HUD Handshake: The weapon can authenticate with Sahan's beskar'gam, feeding ammunition count, loaded round type, barrel temperature, coil stress, tracking status, and fault warnings directly to his HUD.
  • RWA-M1 Integrated Weapons Scope: A compact integrated weapon scope links into Sahan's helmet or visor systems rather than relying on a conventional external optic alone.
  • Ultrachrome/Haysian Smelt Circuitry: Premium wiring and micro-circuitry support rapid power transfer, cleaner coil regulation, stable diagnostic response, and reliable HUD communication.
  • Sealed Service Core: Force-Tech Environmental Sealing Gel and reinforced service channels protect the weapon's electronics, accelerator coils, diagnostic hardware, magazine feed components, and smart-tracking systems from dust, mud, sand, rain, snow, and battlefield debris.
  • Ion/EMP Hardening: Combat de-ionizer hardware, insulation, sealing, and hardened circuitry improve the weapon's resistance to ionization, EMP bursts, and battlefield electrical interference.
  • Thermal Stabilization: The G'ahycaya CPU Cooler and heat management channels help prevent the weapon from overheating during rapid fire or heavy use of high-energy magnetic acceleration.
  • Anti-Force Construction: Voidsteel, Vong bonemeal case-hardening, and reinforced material layering make the weapon difficult to directly seize, discharge, or manipulate through telekinesis.
  • Sahan-Locked: A biometric lock and armor-authentication handshake restrict advanced firing profiles, smart-link features, diagnostics, and safety overrides to Sahan Dragr or authorized maintenance access.

STRENGTHS
  • Hand Cannon Bite: As a Verpine shatter handgun firing compact slugs at extreme velocity, the O'dteyase Saranuhlr hits far harder than most ordinary sidearms.
  • Long-Reaching Sidearm: Its Verpine shatter gun design, smart optics, and magnetic acceleration give it excellent range for a handgun-sized weapon.
  • High Rate of Fire: The refit preserves the older weapon's fast cycling and high fire rate, allowing rapid follow-up shots when Sahan needs to overwhelm a target or exploit an opening.
  • Wide Ammunition Compatibility: The weapon can use standard slugs and a broad range of specialized slug-like ammunition, making it highly adaptable against armor, droids, shields, Force-users, vehicles, and environmental targets.
  • Adaptive Capacity: Smart magazines and an adjustable feed system let the weapon carry up to fifty compact slugs while still accepting larger specialty payloads at reduced capacity.
  • Smart-Linked Precision: With enough clear line of sight to tag a target, compatible tracking ammunition can adjust mid-flight and share target data through Sahan's HUD or allied systems.
  • Armor Integration: When paired with Sahan's beskar'gam, the weapon provides ammunition counts, chamber status, round-type identification, heat levels, tracking status, and maintenance warnings directly to his HUD.
  • Weather-Hardened: Sealed electronics, Force-Tech Environmental Sealing Gel, and internal hardening address the usual Verpine shatter gun weakness against rain, mud, sand, dust, and battlefield contamination.
  • Ion/EMP Resistant: The weapon is significantly more resistant to ion and EMP disruption than an ordinary smart weapon or unmodified Verpine shatter gun.
  • Anti-Force Handling: Anti-Force materials make the gun difficult for enemy Force-users to directly steal, twist, or discharge through telekinesis.

WEAKNESSES
  • Variable Capacity: The weapon can carry up to fifty compact slugs in a magazine, but that number drops when using larger, heavier, or more complex specialty payloads. Exotic ammunition may also require careful loading and magazine calibration before use.
  • Feed Complexity: The adaptive feed system is more complex than a simple fixed-caliber magazine. Dirt, damage, poor maintenance, or badly made ammunition can cause feed errors, misalignment, or forced fallback to simpler ammunition profiles.
  • Specialty Ammo Problem: Standard slugs are the easiest ammunition to source. The more exotic rounds are expensive, uncommon, and often difficult to replace in the field.
  • Tracking Takes Time: Smart tracking requires a clear, unobscured line of sight and several seconds of target acquisition. Snap-shots, smoke, cover, darkness, jamming, or broken sightlines can prevent a successful tag.
  • Smart Ammo Required: The tracking system only benefits compatible ammunition. Ordinary slugs may still be fired accurately, but they do not magically become homing rounds.
  • Not a Blaster Hose: Despite its high rate of fire, the O'dteyase Saranuhlr is still a precision hand cannon, not a squad automatic weapon. Prolonged suppressive fire will overheat, drain, or empty it quickly.
  • Average Recoil: Condensed-matter composite and magnetic tuning help, but the weapon still kicks more than a light pistol or standard blaster sidearm, especially with heavy specialty slugs.
  • Cumbersome Sidearm: It is compact enough to carry as a handgun, but it remains a large and powerful hand cannon. Tight grapples, cramped quarters, or weak wrists make it harder to use properly.
  • Maintenance Hungry: Magnetic accelerator coils, adaptive feed components, smart-tracking emitters, sealed diagnostics, HUD links, and exotic material layering require careful maintenance. Neglect can degrade accuracy, tracking, feeding, or firing consistency.
  • Ion/EMP Resistant, Not Immune: Heavy ion or EMP exposure can still disrupt smart-link functions, tracking, diagnostics, or the weapon's firing systems if the protections are overwhelmed or breached.
  • Anti-Force, Not Force-Proof: The anti-Force materials protect the weapon itself against direct manipulation. They do not protect the ammunition after it leaves the barrel, nor do they stop indirect Force attacks aimed at Sahan, the environment, or his firing lane.
  • Owner-Locked Complications: If the biometric or armor-authentication systems fail, the weapon can fall back to basic local functions, but Sahan loses advanced firing profiles, HUD support, diagnostics, and some safety overrides until repaired.

DESCRIPTION

The O'dteyase Saranuhlr began life as Sahan Dragr's heavily modified O'dteyase, itself a customized HG-54 Vora-Class Verpine Hand Cannon rebuilt to better suit a Mandalorian bounty hunter, warrior, and eventually Forgemaster. The original weapon was already a dangerous sidearm: quiet, accurate, hard-hitting, and unusually adaptable thanks to its compatibility with a wide range of slug and slug-like ammunition.

The Golden Dragon refit brings the weapon in line with Sahan's modern armor, forgecraft, and Iron Covenant-era equipment standards. Its frame has been reinforced with high-carbon beskar steel, ve'vut beskar, zûtsina, condensed-matter composite, liquid-aenite, voidsteel, and Vong bonemeal treatment. The external finish now matches Sahan's newer gold, red-orange, and dark gunmetal aesthetic, making it visually consistent with his Golden Dragon beskar'gam and refit melee weapons.

Functionally, the weapon remains a Verpine shatter hand cannon. It uses magnetic acceleration to launch compact slugs at extreme velocity, delivering far more kinetic force than most conventional pistols. Its high rate of fire lets Sahan rapidly follow up shots, while its long effective range gives him more reach than many handgun users expect. Standard slugs work well enough, but the weapon truly shines when loaded with specialized ammunition such as cryo slugs, blackout rounds, anti-droid rounds, Force Breaker rounds, pyro slugs, Tracyntium rounds, or other compatible payloads.

The refit's most important improvements are not raw damage upgrades. Instead, Sahan focused on control, integration, and battlefield reliability. Ultrachrome/Haysian Smelt wiring improves power transfer and internal response. The updated accelerator assembly helps tune launch force for compatible ammunition types, while the adaptive magazine feed system allows the weapon to use compact Verpine-style slugs or larger specialty payloads. Compact slugs allow the highest magazine capacity, while bulkier exotic rounds reduce the number of shots carried and may require careful magazine calibration. The sealed service core protects the coils, electronics, diagnostics, magazine feed system, and smart-tracking components from the contamination problems that often plague delicate Verpine shatter weapons.

The weapon's smart-tracking system remains one of its most useful tools. With a clear line of sight and enough time to acquire a target, the hand cannon can mark an enemy with an electronic homing signature. Compatible ammunition can then adjust mid-flight, and the tag may be tied into Sahan's HUD or shared with allies. This is powerful, but not instantaneous. Smoke, cover, evasive movement, jamming, darkness, or broken line of sight can deny the lock, and ordinary ammunition receives no homing benefit.

The Golden Dragon HUD handshake further integrates the weapon with Sahan's beskar'gam. When linked, the gun can report ammunition count, loaded round type, chamber status, coil stress, barrel temperature, tracking status, and maintenance warnings directly to his helmet systems. If the link is disrupted, the weapon remains usable through local controls, but Sahan loses the extra diagnostic and tactical feedback.

As with many of Sahan's personal creations, the O'dteyase Saranuhlr incorporates anti-Force materials. Voidsteel and Vong bonemeal treatment make the gun difficult to seize, twist, or discharge through direct telekinesis. This protection applies to the weapon itself, not to fired ammunition, and it does not prevent indirect Force powers from affecting Sahan, his cover, his footing, or the battlefield around him.

The final result is a refined Mandalorian hand cannon: quiet, accurate, hard-hitting, smart-linked, weather-hardened, and unmistakably built for Sahan Dragr. It is not simple, cheap, or easy to maintain, and it can burn through rare ammunition quickly. In the hands of the Golden Dragon, however, it remains exactly what it was always meant to be: a brutal, precise sidearm for ending problems before they get close.

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Admiral Burtch Admiral Burtch My bad. I fixed the links. I had that come up before where an old link somehow changed to something else, which was weird. Or I messed up the number, which is probably more likely. And I forgot the permission for that one was an old discord image that broke. Should have double checked. And I updated the other stuff with better descriptions. Hope that helps. I was working on several submissions at once and running on lack of sleep, so it's honestly a miracle only this one had issues lol. I do apologize for the inconvenience though.
 

Admiral Burtch

Newly Reinstated Admiral
Sahan Dragr Sahan Dragr

Alrighty, so we have to remember that inventing new Force abilities is not allowed in the Factory. Can you provide any canon examples of the Yuuzhan Vong force immunity ability being transferred to a mechanical device through a case hardening process?

Suggestion: If not, Force resistances can be achieved through other means, like void stones, alchemy, etc. If you ask AI, I’m sure it can compile a list of viable options for you to choose from.
 
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Sahan Dragr Sahan Dragr

Alrighty, so we have to remember that inventing new Force abilities is not allowed in the Factory. Can you provide any canon examples of the Yuuzhan Vong force immunity ability being transferred to a mechanical device through a case hardening process?

Suggestion: If not, Force resistances can be achieved through other means, like void stones, alchemy, etc. If you ask AI, I’m sure it can compile a list of viable options for you to choose from.
I'm not inventing anything new. They are Force Dead. That works regardless of whether they are alive or dead. So using part of them as a material keeps that property.
 
Sahan Dragr Sahan Dragr

Alrighty, so we have to remember that inventing new Force abilities is not allowed in the Factory. Can you provide any canon examples of the Yuuzhan Vong force immunity ability being transferred to a mechanical device through a case hardening process?

Suggestion: If not, Force resistances can be achieved through other means, like void stones, alchemy, etc. If you ask AI, I’m sure it can compile a list of viable options for you to choose from.
Also, voidsteel is listed in the material as well, which is made from voidstone.
 

Admiral Burtch

Newly Reinstated Admiral
I'm not inventing anything new. They are Force Dead. That works regardless of whether they are alive or dead. So using part of them as a material keeps that property.
Sahan Dragr Sahan Dragr

That’s fine as long as you can provide examples in established Star Wars Canon (or legends) of the Yuuzhan Vong Force Dead abilities being transferred to a mechanical device in this specific way. If not, then you’ll have to remove the feature and rely entirely on the voidsteel.
 
Sahan Dragr Sahan Dragr

That’s fine as long as you can provide examples in established Star Wars Canon (or legends) of the Yuuzhan Vong Force Dead abilities being transferred to a mechanical device in this specific way. If not, then you’ll have to remove the feature and rely entirely on the voidsteel.
I'm sorry, I'm going to have to ask for a second opinion on that. I've been using it with no issues. It is completely sound and logical, just being a clever use of something that already exists. It's like using the hide of a Force Dead beast as a Force Resistant leather.
 
Sahan Dragr Sahan Dragr

The factory does not work on precedent, so what has been accepted before will not necessarily be accepted on this submission.

In the case of the Vong carbon, it is not an idea that will be let though for a variety of reasons. The Vong aren't inherently nulls in the force, they were cut of from it, but hat was ultimately restored. They are not extra dimensional, the carbon in their bodies is no different from any other carbon.

I would instead suggest plating the weapon in Voidstone, but I have to warn you, all materials with that capability do not cut off a connection from the force just reduce, so someone can still respond to the gun with the force if they choose to.

Please make the requisite changes to the submission and tag me.
 

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