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Approved Starship ENS "Deimos"

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Lena Dracov

Blood Witch of Dathomir
Lena Dracov

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+ No Fly Zone + Designed around starfighter and missile screening, the ship is exceedingly well armed to create a denial zone for either.
+ Hull + The original iteration of the vessel was largely inadequate compared to the redesign, with stronger alloys, better shielding, and micropoles, the hull and shielding is far superior and can withstand a great deal of punishment.
+ Additional Armaments + This modified ship carries additional armaments to increase it's attack capabilities
+ Queen AI + Not nearly as advanced as the Unique Variants, though still, the Queens aboard each are capable of linking together while within range of one another and are capable of learning from more experienced AI as such.

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- Power - Due to the additional armaments the power bank hasn't been modified, meaning the armamanets or defences could shut off if enough damage is taken
- Chaff - A double blind system, the chaff guns can disrupt radar and sensor locks of both enemies and allies in a given area.
- Queen AI - The AI have the potential to go rogue or offline in heavy Ion/EMP attacks. In rogue status, the core will need to be shut down manually, and both cases have potential loss to a large number of systems without proper crew in place to cover the formerly automated systems.

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Minimum Crew Required: 8
Optimal Crew Complement: 57
Passenger Capacity: None
Consumables: 7 months
Cargo Capacity: 290 Metric Tons
A modified version of the original Corvette with all the benefits of the original design and more. The hull and defensive weapons have been upgraded, and the ship itself has a jet black paint job. The logo of the Hellhound squad on the side. Mainly a defensive ship, the amount of docking ports has been increased to fit an additional fighter escort.

The name is subject to change
 
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AMCO

I'm Sorry Dave
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Lena Dracov Lena Dracov

Looks good, for the most part, but there are some issues to resolve.
  • Your permissions are solid overall, but you really do need Niki Priddy's permission too, given that you are modifying a vessel submitter by that user, using that user as a manufacturer, and using a number of Closed-Market submissions. Please provide proof in the Permissions field.
  • The 'Queen AI' strength/weakness is no longer accurate since you switched to MEIPOC.
  • I would recommend noting the cloaking device under strengths - it's pretty notable.
  • 'Medium' is not a valid rating, perhaps you are looking for Average?
As an aside, this is your last chance to change the name of the submission ('The name is subject to change.') unless you do a submod.
 
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Lena Dracov

Blood Witch of Dathomir
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For the first Niki said I didn't need permission due to it being an Eternal Empire ship. Second, Im still using Queen, must've forgotten to change it back.

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AMCO

I'm Sorry Dave
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Lena Dracov Lena Dracov

Alright, that works. General permissions like that are fine, but they still need to be linked to some sort of proof in the submission itself - otherwise, it is hard for Judges to know whether you actually have permission or not.

Approved.
 
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