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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Unit Name: Tactical Response Force Alpha One "Red Right Hand"
  • Affiliation: Dark Empire | Marlon Sularen Marlon Sularen
  • Classification: Special Operations Unit
  • Description: Tactical Response Force Alpha-1 also known as the "Red Right Hand", is a recently formed elite task force of the Hand of Judgement, that answers directly to the High Regent of the Final Dawn, Marlon Sularen and is primarily utilized in high-priority operations in areas of the Galaxy that are largely inaccessible by the Final Dawn's more Conventional Forces. The Red Right Hand is consisted of some of the Final Dawn's best and most loyal operatives and serves as the High Regent's personal special operations unit.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Headquarters: Obsidian Enforcer [Modified Corvus-class Commando Destroyer]
  • Goals:
    • The Primary Objectives of the Red Right Hand are to enforce the will of the High Regent of the Final Dawn and advance the agenda of the Final Dawn via the execution of clandestine operations against extremely powerful and dangerous high-priority threats that oppose both the High Regent and the Final Dawn.
    • In addition they can also partake in Invasions and Skirmishes, supporting larger forces by carrying out rapid shock and awe strikes against key objectives and carrying out various missions behind enemy lines in order to ensure that the outcome of the battle always remains in the Final Dawn's favor.
  • Reputation: N/A | As a newly formed Elite Unit, the Red Right Hand has yet to prove itself on the battlefield although many High-Ranking Officers within the Final Dawn still maintain confidence of it's potential effectiveness on the battlefield.
COMBAT INFORMATION
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STRENGTHS
  • Fanatic Loyalty | The members of the Red Right Hand are all completely loyal to the Final Dawn, motivated primarily by conscious adherence to the tenets of the Final Dawn
  • Unique Training Methods | The Training Methods utilized by the Hand of Judgement instilled a strong sense of unit cohesion within its troops alongside a willingness to fight on despite heavy casualties and determination to accomplish their objectives through any means necessary.
  • Prototype Unit | The Red Right Hand is a Prototype Unit of the Hand of Judgement, designed as a template for future elite units. As such it's members a great sense of responsibility and a greater determination to prove themselves on the battlefield in order to bring forth the desired results of their superiors in order to further advance the agenda of the Final Dawn.
WEAKNESSES
  • Fierce Zealots | Through the special methods of training instilled upon them, members of the Red Right Hand are not afraid of dying for their nation and the ideals it represents. They'd rather die in a fight, then surrender themselves to the enemy, thus leading leading to higher casualty rates as a result of their Zealous nature.
  • Hard to Replace | Because of the unique training methods utilized by the Hand of Judgement, replacing a single member of the Red Right Hand will take months as a large portion of new recruits will failed to graduate from Hand of Judgement Training Programs with a considerable amount of these recruits dying as a result
  • Prolonged Conventional Warfare | The Red Right Hand is largely designed for Covert Special Operations and Rapid Shock-and-Awe strikes against more Conventional Forces and as such they are not designed for attrition warfare and should they face such a situation were they are bogged down by larger and better equipped forces, they will suffer more casualties.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
In the wake of the collapse of the Brotherhood of the Maw, the Final Dawn immediately found itself without a major sponsor rendering it vulnerable to the machinations of hostile factions that would seek it's destruction and the dismantlement of it's powerbase within the Unknown Regions and the Mid and Outer Rims. As such, in order to combat these potential incursions and keep these belligerent groups of interest in check, the High Regent of the Final Dawn, Marlon Sularen began making plans to reorganize the structure of the Final Dawn in order to ensure that it could withstand the coming storm that loomed over the horizon.

One of these measures included a total revamp of the Hand of Judgement, the Paramilitary Arm of the Politorate, the Final Dawn's Intelligence Agency. As part of this drastic reorganization, the High Regent moved forth to split the Units of the Hand of Judgement into specialized elite task force for usage in Asymmetrical and Unconventional Warfare against those seeking to undermine his power. Thus, in order to test the potential effectiveness of this strategy, a prototype task force would be form known as Tactical Response Force Alpha-One with the nickname of the "Red Right Hand" comprised largely of veteran soldiers of the Hand of Judgement placed under the command of Captain Joseph Torson, which would answer directly to the High Regent.

03/28/2023
  • Completely Revamped OOC Information
  • Completely Revamped General Information
  • Completely Revamped Combat Information
  • Added Members & Social Information
  • Completely Revamped Strengths & Weaknesses
  • Completely Revamped Historical Information
01/26/2024
  • Added new Headquarters
  • Added and Removed Equipment in Combat Information
  • Further Modified Combat Information
  • Changed the Member Information
  • Slightly Changed Historical Information
 
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:: HERO of KORRIBAN ::
Moderator
Marlon Sularen Marlon Sularen

It seems we have a link to something in the archives. The adjudicators mercenary link will need to be replaced with the active submission, and if one does not exist it will need to be removed.

Once that’s done we can get this approved.
 
Marlon Sularen Marlon Sularen

The changes look good, but there are a few things I want to highlight to you.

Fleet Symbol

Where is this image from? What's the image credit?

Fleet Composition

You mention the Turbulent-Class Destroyer twice in your fleet composition:


However, the factory submission lists this particular ship, the Turbulent-Class Pockey Destroyer as unique.

Once you've looked through and made your changes please let me know.
 
Breaker of Chains
Codex Judge
Marlon Sularen Marlon Sularen

My apologies for the long wait on your submission friend! So everything looks good but there was one little hiccup that we need addressed before I can stamp approval on here for you. The Archeon Armor has been archived and as such can no longer be used in submissions, so just remove that and you'll be good to go!
 

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