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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
GENERAL INFORMATION
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
  • Gravity: Below Standard
  • Climate: Snow swept tundra with domed cities designed by the Chiss and constructed by the Commonwealth. Weather control stations and terraforming efforts control the weather and allow them to adjust as needed.
  • Primary Terrain: Mountains, tundras covered in snow and ice
  • Atmosphere: Type I
LOCATION INFORMATION
  • Capital City: New Csilla
  • Planetary Features: Snowy landscapes terraformed and Controlled via Advanced Terraforming such as Builders Seeds, Sasori Modular Production Facilities, Junjita and Kalantas towers
  • Major Locations:
    • Mandripoor: The Geothermal Citadel
      • Function: Serves as the main seat of government and the primary organizational hub for the planet's surviving population and incoming refugees. Its core mission is to coordinate efforts to locate and reunite scattered people.
      • Architecture & Defenses: A massive city built directly into the sheer face of a mountain, leveraging the natural rock for structural integrity and defense. It is protected by an array of heavy-duty defensive cannons and a sophisticated energy shielding system designed to withstand prolonged siege.
    • New Csilla: The Capital
      • Function: Designated as the formal capital city of the planet. It intentionally maintains a strategic separation from the primary seat of government (Mandripoor) and the complex politics of the ruling houses, serving as a political counterweight.
      • Population: Represents the largest and most densely populated metropolitan center on the entire planet. This high concentration of people necessitates an advanced infrastructure and extensive security measures.
    • Roanapoor: Smallest city that has been built on the world with environmental controlling stations around to protect from the harsh snowfalls. A large complex for training Ozyly-esehembo to act as navigators.
POPULATION
  • Native Species: N/A
  • Immigrated Species:
    • Humans (Atrisians)
    • Chiss
  • Population: Moderate
  • Demographics: Largely settled by Chiss refugees per Akio's treaty of cooperation with the houses. THe world functions to give them a home for their people after the destruction of their world.
  • Primary Languages: Basic, Atrisian Script, Cheunh
  • Culture: The Chiss population on the new world largely maintains its traditional cultural structure, centered around the rigid social organization known as the Houses.
    • Cultural Preservation & Adaptation: Following the catastrophic destruction of their homeworld and the disarray of their ruling Houses, settling on this planet was viewed as a vital opportunity for cultural survival and rebuilding. They see their alliance with the Commonwealth, under the respectful oversight of Emperor Akio, as the best path forward to re-establish their complex hierarchy and prestige. The Houses continue to operate with varying degrees of influence and power, acting as the primary political and economic drivers within the Chiss communities.
  • Military and Governmental Concessions: The Chiss integration into the new world's society involved a significant military and governmental exchange, strengthening both entities:
    • Governing Concession: The Chiss government agreed to a major concession: their governing body must serve with and under the authority of the Commonwealth. This ensured the political stability of the new world while allowing the Chiss internal autonomy regarding their Houses.
    • Naval Integration: The Chiss military forces were formally integrated into the Commonwealth's Navy. This involved:
      • Shared Assets: Adopting and incorporating a significant number of their advanced naval elements (ships and technology) onto Commonwealth rosters.
      • Training and Exchange: Bolstering the combined fleet with elite Chiss training protocols, focusing on their renowned strategic precision and navigation skills. This exchange was actively promoted as a means to expand cultural understanding and ensure operational synergy between the two groups.
  • The Divided Fleet Strategy: The remaining and revitalized Chiss military force is strategically divided into two specialized branches, maximizing their contribution to the Commonwealth:
    1. The Defensive Fleet: This primary arm is tasked with aiding in the defense of the Atrisian system, protecting the core world, and maintaining orbital security for key installations like Mandripoor. Their focus is on tactical defense and patrol.
    2. The Exploration Fleet: This specialized group works in direct collaboration with the Commonwealth's primary exploration and mapping groups. They leverage Chiss expertise in hyperspace navigation and scouting
GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
  • Government: Aristocratic Oligarchy
  • Affiliation: Atrisian Commonwealth (Planetary Government)
  • Wealth: High: With high end technologies as the main export and trade, the chiss engineers are in high demand in many of the shipyards to improve upon the designs.
  • Stability: High: While initially chaotic the strict discipline of the chiss and atrisians have formulated and stabilized many of the problems on the world. With houses that survived bringing their family and from there they managed to band together to bring the world up to the standards needed for habitation and colonization.
  • Freedom & Oppression: Highly structured by the Chiss, after what happened on their world the remnants were fleeing to a number of other worlds and those who werre welcomed to Atrisia were ordered and in need of a purpose. Stoking their wanting to protect what they have left and families they are strict moving towards the ultimate purpose of a strong military force to protect the Atrisian system. No room for crime within the survivors on the world itself.
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
  • Military: The planet itself doesn't have its own military instead operating under the protection of the Atrisian Defense force and serving as one of the primary sources for ore and resources used in the construction of ships. Its cloning facilities are protected even more providing crew to the mines and ships.
    • Atrisian Defense Forces The royal navy is the primary military forces defending the stations and planet with it being the most internal and insulated with its own contingent of living areas and the terraformed moons that house science and military personnel.
    • Ascendancy military: Remanants of the chiss military and expeditionary forces who came to the Commonwealth using the treaty and aid promised by both Shoma and Emperor Kahoshi at the time. THey bolster the Defensive forces of the Commonwealth and provide advanced engineers.
  • Technology: Galactic Standard
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The newly terraformed world as perhaps one of the last that the Atrisian Commonwealth went after... it being the last planet in the system and presenting the furthest distance they would need to solve a few more problems on the world itself. One was heat... at least until the destruction of Csilla, the attack on the Chiss was soemthing unexpected but they were old allies thanks to Akio the old emperor and such they were offered much in the way of Refugee status on the planets wihtin the Commonwealth. When the remnants met with the emperor he offered them the world which was largely frozen and the supplies as they were a rugged and tough force who knew how to carve out a life. The ninth planet in the system became their own with ties to the Commonwealth and as a beacon for the Chiss people it would serve them to rebuild what they could at least until the survivors were able to really make a new world in the Ascendancy.

Junko having been one fo the few who met and worked with the Chiss under Akio and having one of their exploration fleet admirals still on Atrisia served as a liaison to work with them. Setting up the advanced Anshin shipyards that would serve to better improve upon their designs and allow them to repair as well as feed Chiss who came to the world seeking aid. THe security force being a part of the Atrisian united forces that would serve to safeguard the system through hyperspace security networks, stations and overwhelming technological force of their own ships. The chiss finding a purpose reinforcing and adding much to the military discipline of the Atrisian Navy that would smash anything that comes into their system itself rather then going out to seek problems. The next stage was the development of the world as they had new homes to build, new people to welcome and a chance to establish and push forward in a chance to rebuild Csilla.

The years have seen large scale improvements. With chiss engineers, commonwealth technologies, financial backing from their houses to rebuild. New Csilla and maany areas of the planet have seen development. The fleets have been reworked and rebuilt. Developing into the protective force and first line encountered within the system itself. Junko and Shoma's efforts to bring the chiss around haas seen more as they continue to prove steadfast allies under the direction of Mitthm"ar"anuruodo Khan who was elected their represenitive on the inter system parliment. More refugees have come and been able to find a place as the Commonwealth moved into post scarcity taking in trrillions of refugees to its many worlds while terraforming many more planets and moons.
 
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Under Review Junko Ike Junko Ike

Cool idea to have a planet for Chiss refugees. It's nice to see Chaos canon evolving in this way.

Here are a few things I'd like to talk about before I approve this submission.


  • Major Exports: "Technology" doesn't tell me much about what is made and exported here. What kind of technology?

  • Capital City: You list the capital city of the planet as Csilla, the Chiss homeworld. Is there a city named Csilla on the planet? Not New Csilla or anything, just Csilla? If this is a city, it should be listed and described under Major Locations as well. Later on, you say that Mandripoor is the "main seat of government". Doesn't that make Mandripoor the capital? Please clarify this.

  • Major Locations: This is a very short list. It would make your world more interesting if there were more than two places, and more than two sentences of description, for writers who may visit. Are there any other settlements than just these two cities? Any military bases? Mountain ranges? Frozen oceans? This is an entire planet. That's a lot of space for just two locations.

Please feel free to reach out with any questions you may have.
 
The Mongrel The Mongrel edited

and fixed hopefully the capital... I didn't realize it untiul you pointed it out that I hadn't changed it. Technologies expanded and location wise as hopefully more chiss refugees use it there will be further expansions and things fleshed out lore wise. Beyond the several codex subs I have slowly being worked on.
 

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