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Approved Planet Atrisia IX (Ma-Kun)

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Planet Name: Ma-Kun
  • Demonym: Atrisian
  • Region: Core World
  • System Name: Atrisi system
  • System Features: The Atrisian System is a 9 planet solar system organized around a single star (Atrisi). Inner planets are terrestrial in composition, with the outer planets being gas giants and ice giants. Atrisia IV is the fourth planet from the sun in the system. With 2 moons that are being terraformed as part of the Jishi era's restructuring of the entire system. With many of the initiatives the planet and its moons have an Anshin class sphere that is used for living population and organization as well as defensive measures. The mega structure can develop and serve as a tertiary shipyard or manufacturing hub. A secondary atmospheric shell.
  • Location: Chaos Map
  • Major Imports: Refugees
  • Major Exports: Technology: Military grade starship components (weapons, hull armorr, sensors ect), Extreme weather survival (therma clothing, geothermal taps, emission free heaters)
  • Unexploited Resources:
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
  • Gravity: Below Standard
  • Climate: SNow swept tundra with domed cities designed by the Chiss and constructed by the Commonwealth. Weather control stations and terraforming efforts control the weather and allow them to adjust as needed.
  • Primary Terrain: Mountains, tundras covered in snow and ice
  • Atmosphere: Type I
LOCATION INFORMATION
  • Capital City: New Csilla
  • Planetary Features: Snowy landscapes terraformed and controlled by weather stations
  • Major Locations:
    • Mandripoor: THe main seat of government remaining on the planet and serving to organize the people and refugees who survived and are seeking their people. Large and built into the side of a mountain with defensive cannons and shielding to protect itself as well as geothermal power for back up systems.
    • New Csilla: Capital of the planet, for security it is meant to be divided from the primary seat of government and the ruling houses. With the largest population center on the planet.
    • Roanapoor: Smallest city that has been built on the world with environmental controlling stations around to protect from the harsh snowfalls. A large complex for training Ozyly-esehembo to act as navigators.
POPULATION
  • Native Species: N/A
  • Immigrated Species:
    • Humans (Atrisians)
    • Chiss
  • Population: Moderate
  • Demographics: Largely settled by Chiss refugees per Akio's treaty of cooperation with the houses. THe world functions to give them a home for their people after the destruction of their world.
  • Primary Languages: Basic, Atrisian Script, Cheunh
  • Culture: Largely following their normal culture, the Chiss were given a chance to settle on the world by the emperor and aid in bolstering their military and engineering forces. After the destruction of their world and the different houses it was seen as a means to try and rebuild with allies who had under Akio respected them enough to have a place for them. Following the structure of houses that hold different levels of power... the government on the world only made the major concession that they serve with and under the Commonwealth adopting onto their ships a number of their navy elements and bolstering it with Chiss training to expand cultural understanding. Their remaining military force are divided itno two primary, the defensive fleet which aids in defense of the Atrisian system and the exploration fleet which works with the Commonwealths exploration groups to expand outwards and scout or map areas with better detail for colonization efforts.
GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
  • Government: Aristocratic oligarchy
  • Affiliation: Atrisian Commonwealth (Planetary Government)
  • Wealth: High: With high end technologies as the main export and trade, the chiss engineers are in high demand in many of the shipyards to improve upon the designs.
  • Stability: High: While initially chaotic the strict discipline of the chiss and atrisians have formulated and stabilized many of the problems on the world. With houses that survived bringing their family and from there they managed to band together to bring the world up to the standards needed for habitation and colonization.
  • Freedom & Oppression: Highly structured by the Chiss, after what happened on their world the remnants were fleeing to a number of other worlds and those who werre welcomed to Atrisia were ordered and in need of a purpose. Stoking their wanting to protect what they have left and families they are strict moving towards the ultimate purpose of a strong military force to protect the Atrisian system. No room for crime within the survivors on the world itself.
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
  • Military: The planet itself doesn't have its own military instead operating under the protection of the Atrisian Defense force and serving as one of the primary sources for ore and resources used in the construction of ships. Its cloning facilities are protected even more providing crew to the mines and ships.
    • Atrisian Defense Forces The royal navy is the primary military forces defending the stations and planet with it being the most internal and insulated with its own contingent of living areas and the terraformed moons that house science and military personnel.
    • Ascendancy military: Remanants of the chiss military and expeditionary forces who came to the Commonwealth using the treaty and aid promised by both Shoma and Emperor Kahoshi at the time. THey bolster the Defensive forces of the Commonwealth and provide advanced engineers.
  • Technology: Galactic Standard
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The newly terraformed world as perhaps one of the last that the Atrisian Commonwealth went after... it being the last planet in the system and presenting the furthest distance they would need to solve a few more problems on the world itself. One was heat... at least until the destruction of Csilla, the attack on the Chiss was soemthing unexpected but they were old allies thanks to Akio the old emperor and such they were offered much in the way of Refugee status on the planets wihtin the Commonwealth. When the remnants met with the emperor he offered them the world which was largely frozen and the supplies as they were a rugged and tough force who knew how to carve out a life. The ninth planet in the system became their own with ties to the Commonwealth and as a beacon for the Chiss people it would serve them to rebuild what they could at least until the survivors were able to really make a new world in the Ascendancy.

Junko having been one fo the few who met and worked with the Chiss under Akio and having one of their exploration fleet admirals still on Atrisia served as a lieson to work with them. Setting up the advanced Anshin shipyards that would serve to better improve upon their designs and allow them to repair as well as feed Chiss who came to the world seeking aid. THe security force being a part of the Atrisian united forces that would serve to safeguard the system through hyperspace security networks, stations and overwhelming technological force of their own ships. The chiss finding a purpose reinforcing and adding much to the military discipline of the Atrisian Navy that would smash anything that comes into their system itself rather then going out to seek problems. The next stage was the development of the world as they had new homes to build, new people to welcome and a chance to establish and pussh forward in a chance to rebuild Csilla.
 
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Under Review Junko Ike Junko Ike

Cool idea to have a planet for Chiss refugees. It's nice to see Chaos canon evolving in this way.

Here are a few things I'd like to talk about before I approve this submission.


  • Major Exports: "Technology" doesn't tell me much about what is made and exported here. What kind of technology?

  • Capital City: You list the capital city of the planet as Csilla, the Chiss homeworld. Is there a city named Csilla on the planet? Not New Csilla or anything, just Csilla? If this is a city, it should be listed and described under Major Locations as well. Later on, you say that Mandripoor is the "main seat of government". Doesn't that make Mandripoor the capital? Please clarify this.

  • Major Locations: This is a very short list. It would make your world more interesting if there were more than two places, and more than two sentences of description, for writers who may visit. Are there any other settlements than just these two cities? Any military bases? Mountain ranges? Frozen oceans? This is an entire planet. That's a lot of space for just two locations.

Please feel free to reach out with any questions you may have.
 
The Mongrel The Mongrel edited

and fixed hopefully the capital... I didn't realize it untiul you pointed it out that I hadn't changed it. Technologies expanded and location wise as hopefully more chiss refugees use it there will be further expansions and things fleshed out lore wise. Beyond the several codex subs I have slowly being worked on.
 

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