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Approved Starship The Bryn'adul | Thruka Ravager

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a new warship for the Bryn'adul
  • Image Source: N/A
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Frigate
  • Length: 427 Meters
  • Width: 119 Meters
  • Height: 201 Meters
  • Armament: High
  • Defenses: Very High
  • Hangar Space: Base-0
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters: 0 Squadrons
    • Support Craft: 0 Squadrons
  • Single Craft Hangar: No
  • Maneuverability Rating: Average
  • Speed Rating: Average
  • Hyperdrive: 2.0
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Command and Control
    • Command Bridge
    • Armory
    • Shipmasters Quarters
    • Internal Security
  • Support Systems
    • Living Quarters
    • Mess Hall
    • Barracks
    • Escape Pods
    • Power Core
    • Repair Depot
    • Storage Compartments
    • Quilyxn Breeding Bay
    • Mutagenic Stations
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Heavy Duty: The Thruka Ravager is a heavily armored warship, with meter upon meter of layered Verikast metal across its entire surface. The vessel is able to tank extreme amounts of damage even after its shielding is lost, allowing to survive long after many similarly sized vessels would have been eliminated.
  • Ram: The Thruka Ravager is equipped with an immensely heavily armored prow, which itself has several Draemidus Prime outcroppings located along its surface. In battle, the vessel is able to ram enemy vessels head on without any adverse risk to itself, while the Draemidus Prime on the front allows it to deal crippling damage at close range.
WEAKNESSES
  • Shielding: While equipped with Quilxyn colonies, the Thruka Ravager has very little surface coverage for the creatures. Rather than the layered and clustered design many Vaydralen warships have, the Thrum'dral craft focuses most of them near the prow of the vessel, focusing on its heavy armor to protect the rest of the vessel.
  • Lancer: Despite its heavy armament, the shape and disposition of the vessel prevent its weapons from firing, for the most part, directly forward. This limits the ship to primarily broadside engagements, and without fighter support the ships effective tactical range is severely limited.
DESCRIPTION
The Thruka Ravager is the first Thrum'dral warship to be designed and built since the race joined the Bryn'adul. The species, being largely tribal still in their development, nevertheless wished to create their own warships to allow them to journey the stars for war like the rest of the Bryn'adul. To this end, they contacted the Ungulloi and Vaydralen, their nearest geographical neighbors, and through a combined effort the Thruka Ravager was developed. The vessel takes its primary tactical focus from the Thrum'dral favored method of war, straight forward charges with heavy armor and tough weaponry.

In appearance, the Thruka Ravager appears as almost an axe. The front of the vessel is a broad vertical wedge shape, heavily fortified and covered in Draemidus Prime to serve as the ram. The main body of the vessel behind the ram is cylindrical, dotted with weapons along its entire length. A single dome shaped structure is located on the 'under' side of the ship which serves as the command bridge. The rear of the vessel flairs out into three curved shard, each one arcing back and then forward towards the ram of the vessel.


 
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HPI AI; Terraris Command
Factory Judge
Thova 'Mdanam Thova 'Mdanam

Again a very nice ship! I found some problems here, usually the same problems like in your other sub.
  • Please link the Quilxyn Shielding, this is not a usual equipment.
  • And I have concerns about the Draemidus Defence AA Turret, you mention 15 turrets, what means 300 turrets, if you check the original submission. And this number is too much, not only for the rating, but also for the entire ship. I highly recommend to rethinking this numbers.
That's all, please let me know if you edited these.
 
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