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Technology Submission Modifications

Seydon of Arda

Raquor'daan
Seydon of Arda
Submission Name: Winterfang
Link to Submission: LINK
Reason for Modification: Clarification of minor detail, and clarification of intent.
Modification:
Classification: Change from Hand-and-a-Half Sword to Two-Handed Sword.
Intent: Change to 'To create a Sithspawn and alchemical monster slaying sword.'
 

Valik

Professor of Alchemy
Valik
[member="Allison Willamina"]
[member="Seydon of Arda"]
[member="Darth Vornskr"]

Edits made.

[member="Gilamar Skirata"]

Your submission was not edited due to the sub in question not being made by you.
 

Ayden Cater

Grumpy Goat
Ayden Cater
Character Bio
Submission Name: Urban Recon Walker
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: To update older subs with newer tech for a more internally consistent OP.
Modification:
Currently
Production: Mass Produced
Armaments:
Configuration One
  • One Repeating Blaster Cannon
  • One TAG launcher
Configuration Two
  • One Dual Laser Cannon
  • Two Six-Tube Rocket Launcher (Unguided)


Modification
Production: Minor Production

Armaments:
​
Prime Configuration:
  • Two A-Type Pods: Two Blaster Cannons
  • One B-Type Pod: One Heavy Laser Cannon & One Grenade Launcher
Configuration A:
  • Two A-Type Pods: One Ion Cannon & One Laser Cannon
  • One B-Type Pod: Two Heavy Laser Cannons
​Configuration B:
  • Two A-Type Pods: Long-Range Sensor Suite
  • One B-Type Pod: One Repeating Laser Cannon
Configuration C:
  • Two A-Type Pods: One Rocket Launcher
  • One B-Type Pod: TAG Launcher
 

Adenn Gra'tua

Well-Known Member
Adenn Gra'tua
Character Bio
Submission Name: Adenn Gra'tua's Type-34 Shock Trooper Armor
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/31478-adenn-gratuas-type-34-shock-trooper-armor/
Reason for Modification: Originally some features were not put in that were meant to be implemented, and to edit some of the wording.
Modification:

Description: A new design for Adenn Gra'tua's armor, made fully out of Beskar and Durasteel (minus the BDU's and visor), making it very protective, sporting a double thick chest guard for even more protection. Another feature is the detachable Kama and shoulder covering cape, made with a cloth cover and durasteel chains for added protection in those areas. Two major weaknesses exist for the armor though, the elbows and inner thighs, the elbows were somewhat inevitable, but the thigh armor was a design choice. Another plus -other than that the armor is made of beskar- is the collar, which was put in to prevent decapitations, or shots to the throat.

Classification: Anti-ballistic & anti-blaster.
Weight: 35 Kg.
Quality: 7.
Other Feature(s):
Flashlight: There is a built-in flashlight on the helmet with two different modes, continuous and strobe.

Jet pack: Adenn has attached a jet pack to the armor so he always has easy access to it (shown in the first picture).

Magnetized boots, gloves, back & thigh plates: allowing the wearer to stay put whenever in zero-g or while on most metals, and keeping weapons in hand, then magnetized back and thigh plates for weapons not in use.

Advanced HUD: Most of the helmets HUD components consist of Adenn's old Mandalorian HUD, with a few new features, like a night vision and thermal mode, while the thermal has a small range, it proves it's worth when in smoky environments.

Air tight: while only having a very small air reserve (lasting only one minute to a minute and thirty seconds, depending on the breathing rate), the armor still has the ability for short aquatic or no oxygen exploration.

Wrist mounted flamethrower: like Adenn's original armor, a built in wrist mounted flamethrower was put on the new set, the suit only contains a small amount of the substances needed to produce the flame -only lasting about 10-15 second in total- it is still deadly, acting the same that napalm does, sticking to everything in its path, making it very deadly.

Twin vibroblades: another thing taken from Adenn's original armor set, the vibroblades, only now serrated and longer, as if they were knives themselves, letting him keep a small amount more of distance when in close combat.
 

Cedric Dorn

Guest
C
Submission Name: Valkyrie MK I
Link to Submission: Boom
Reason for Modification: It was stated in the write up for the armor that after 1 year the armor would become mainstream and be sold on the open market. I think an IC year has now passed and it'll give more females fancy jetpack armor to use if they like.
Modification: Change the prefix to Personal(It was never Republic, Personal just didn't exist at the time) and Change production to Mass-Produced.
 

Hannibal Oryen

Slick Fondorian
Hannibal Oryen
Character Bio
Submission Name: Z1 Assistant Droid
Link to Submission: [X]
Reason for Modification: Given the role of the Z1, it would be prudent to upgrade its droid brain now that Cestus has released a newer one.
Modification: Change "[x1] J1 Droid Brain" to "[x1] J2 Droid Brain." Also change that instance of "J1" in the second paragraph to "J2."
 

Long Gone

Narrator
L
Submission Name: Pendant of the Singing Mountain
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/33212-pendant-of-the-singing-mountain/
Reason for Modification: Update and clarify missing details.
Modification:

Development Thread: Please move Codex of Tython up to this line.
Manufacturer: Various. Rekali Ancestory.

Description:

Add-in the folllowing please -
Security Measures:
The Pyronium casing was created as a shell around the piece of the Codex of Tython due to the alloy’s unique properties, since it created a distortion it was able to disguise the typical readings from the Codex of Tython from conventional methods. Since the Pendant itself had such a heavy Force connection to it's owners over the years, the small glimmer that the Codex piece might give away within the Force would be easily concealed in the metal casing. This unique property allowed a key to a holocron or the piece of the Codex of Tython to which Aaralyn Rekali discovered and subsequently hid to be concealed within the hollowed out Pyronium. The trick to opening the actual metal casing was not by brute force but by using the Force and manipulating the necklace itself and moving the unique pieces of the pendant in a clockwise direction until they aligned at a 45 degree angle. This included the unique ring casing at the top with the larger opening that contained the Star Sapphire. (See picture, which would depict it being opened)

Once this task was completed, the individual would hear a click, thus allowing the bottom to be opened by a simple thumb push or a gentle tap and the final piece of the Codex of Tython would fall freely from its confines or if it were a key to a Holocron. Holocron keys would be made into similar slivers as the final piece of the Codex if manipulated correctly.
 

Camellia Swift

Camellia
Camellia Swift
Submission Name: Hammerhead Frigate
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Modification: Recent personal dislike and doubt of effectiveness of Defense Guns. Specifically wishing to remove the anti-missile and flak cannons to increase Quad Lasers to x 8 from x 3 and the Point Defense to x 4 from x 3
Modification:
Armaments:
  • [SIZE=12pt]Heavy Dual Turbolaser Turrets x 3[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Heavy Dual Ion Cannon Turret x 1[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Turbolaser Batteries x 2[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Ion Cannons x 6[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Proton Torpedo Launchers x 4[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Concussion Missile Launchers x 6[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Quad Laser Cannons x 8[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=12pt]Point-Defense Cannons x 4[/SIZE]
 
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Vulpesen

The Arch Wilder
Vulpesen
Character Bio
Submission name: Shadow Fox Armor
Link: aqui
Reason: I was talking with some people adn found out that my supposedly "light" armor was about 40 pounds over their medium-heavy armor

Change: Drop the weight from 22 to 7 kg. (I realize its a large mistake, but I'm surprised that no one(including me) saw that mistake.
 
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Arage Bao

The Admiralty
Arage Bao
Codex Judge
Character Bio
[member="Commander Orin"] [member="Jeff Solaris"] [member="Cyrus Tregessar"] [member="Hannibal Oryen"] [member="Lieutenant Kir"] [member="Adenn Gra'tua"] : submissions have been modified, my apologies for the wait.

I took a look at some of the recent phrik armor, and there is a lot of variety in terms of armor class and the weight that comes with it. 7 kilo seems pretty light for the class you are going for, let's go halfway and settle it on 12 kilo? [member="Darth Tsolan"]
 
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