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Technology Submission Modifications

Nyxie

【夢狐】
Submission: [Planet] Mnencheiasus
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/14426-mnencheiasus/
Reason: A long-overdue update that needed to be done 2013 ago...
Modification/s:

Notable Locations
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Exodus Prime is the capital of both Mnencheiasus and the Mnenchei Monarchy. Located in the largest of three moons of Sikune, Exodus Prime is the pinnacle of Mnenchei perseverance and society. The city itself is rather large, so great in size in fact, it is just barely able to reach a curvature due to the small circumference of the moon. It, like most of Sikune, has an artificially engineered atmosphere that is retained to the surface of the small moon via small gravity wells. At the heart of it all is the Castle-Monastery of the Ankai, the home of the Queen, the Royal Clan and the Royal Guard and political assistants. It is a grand structure large in scope, renaissance in form but modern in integrity, built by only the finest Mnenchei artisans and smiths. The treasury vaults are located under the castle-monastery and smaller, more numerous vaults exist in secure locations throughout the city to house vast quantities of Kalestat, the highly valued crystal of Mnencheiasus. The city itself is incredibly defensible, manned under the rule of Ankai Alachei Mnemenos by approximately 100,000 trained militant police officials who have access to light walkers, tanks and high-grade firearms. Many starports and dry docks also line the outer walls of the city, once used to house part of the Royal Navy now more often than not vacant, seeing only a few dozen privately-owned or Republic passerby military vessels on all of Sikune at any given time. An embassy with included Senate office was established adjacent to the the castle-monastery and outside of its gates in light of the recent annex under the Galactic Republic umbrella, though without the need for a Senate staff with an acting Ankai in place, it sees no use.


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[ R I ' E S S _ M O N A S T E R Y ]
The Monastery of Ri'ess is a moderately modernized but old-fashioned structure predating the Mnenchei Dominion and even the current Dynasty. As old as the shaman sect themselves, the original had always stood as a homestead for those in service to the goddess and secretly to the Enclave. After the cataclysm that wrought Mnencheiasus and emerged vast quantities of Kalestat Crystal, it was all but destroyed. Not too far from the original (uninhabitable and treasureless) monastery now stands the new one, nestled deep within a high mountain valley where magma is known to surface and flow into one of the many lava seas now blotting the surface of the once-elegant world. The monastery has many amenities, including comfortable housing for up to a hundred (though largely unused), training and meditation centers, a hidden hangar virtually never used and a private mine with an underground hot spring lake. Only the Justiciary, the Ankai and the Enclave know its existence or whereabouts; even then, it is largely kept in the dark and not known to exist to the rest of the galaxy, even the Republic. Items considered relics of the Royal Clan or of divine significance via Ri'ess are kept here safely in chambers made to be even lava resistant.
 
Submission Name: Starships
Link to Submission:
Reason for Modification: Disbanding of Fel Imperium, Davin's move to Lords of the Fringe and shift of corporate asset ownership
Modification:

For All
  • Manufacturer set to Iron Crown Industries and Ascendant Industries
  • Affiliation set to Lords of the Fringe
Solar Spear
  • Production from Minor to Mass Produced

And that's it! I can either do the edits myself once one of you staffers unlocks it, or you can just do it yourself. Thanks in advance.
 

Atlas Kane

Guest
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Submission Name: Rysil II [Planets]
Reason for Modification: The picture under 'Major Cities' broke, at least for me it did, so I wanted to provide a mirror link to fix it.
Modification: Remove the old picture and replace it with this one in the 'Major Cities' category.
 

Nyxie

【夢狐】
Can someone tell me how these submissions magically have "The Republic" tags BACK on them again???

lmao xD

Please remove them. All of them. As with last time, they have never, ever owned my things.

In all of the Affiliations, please also remove the Republic from affiliation. Please put CIS instead. But don't Tag the subs CIS!!!!! >_<

And please STOP TAGGING ALL MY NON-REPUBLIC subs as Republic. I notice you guys have been doing that lately. I'm not even -in- the Republic anymore, so I'm not sure why this gets done. Thanks! <3


/sacktaps TGR with a steel toed combat boot

Edit: As I've answered to Fabula, I'm mad at the Republic and just excited in general when I wrote this, not yelling at you guys. o.o
 
@[member="Deira"]

It was done because when your faction merged with the Republic, all the old faction's ships automatically became a part of the Republic. That's how merges work.

As far as untagging them from the Republic, that's going to have to be reviewed first. And if it's found to be valid, then they -will- be tagged CIS if they're being made for the CIS. Again, that's how things work.
 

Nyxie

【夢狐】
I had this discussion with the admins before, the manufacturer never belonged to the Republic and never had an officially written contract for the Republic itself. Therefore I must bring it up as Plagiarism if it cannot be changed. They had rights to use it, and they were given the Dominion's existing military and rights to replenish that tech, but that does not mean that they magically owned the tech. I don't see Corek Customs stuff tagged. I don't see Subach's stuff tagged, nor the private armor company we used tagged. Furthermore, things that weren't made for the Republic or Dominion at all have been tagged Republic. This has happened to a few random subs of mine as a writer in general. Certainly those had absolutely no reason to be tagged the Republic at all?

I am -CURRENTLY- producing exclusively for the CIS and setting up shop down there as per @[member="Isley Verd"]'s consent and personal request. That exclusivity is subject to change later on. Tag them as CIS for now if you must.
@[member="Tefka"]

Again, Faction =/= Company. Sorry for the inconvenience.

Edit: I don't even.... :(
 

Popo

I'm Sexy and I Know It
Submission Name: Tenloss Corporation
Link to Submission: Right here
Reason for Modification: This is two-fold. I would like to edit the description to include the canon subsidiaries into the original submission as all Tenloss is canonically is a mix of companies under the organization group/crime head of Tenloss. I would also like to edit Tenloss to Tier IV.
Modification:

Tenloss has expanded to the following worlds: Raxus Prime, Nal Hutta, Kessel

Changing this line from:

"The most notable of which being the Modirin Mining Concern, Bengel Shipbuilders, Kendamari Casinos, and Relekin Confidential." in the submission's description to:

"These include Modirin Mining Concern, Bahalian Shipyards, Bengel Shipbuilders, Friij News Services, Galindas Exports, Kendamari Casinos, Lucin Syndicate, Lucross Collections, Malakin Enterprises, Natori Association, Ororo Transportation, and Relekin Confidential."

This in no way reflects an increase in Tier, but is only to give the canonical businesses that make up the entirety of the Tenloss Coporation/Syndicate.

The change in Tier is supported by the following links:



  • Sign a contract with three more player-run organizations, one of which must be a major faction. = Talks and Trade (Tenloss sells ships and other goods to the Vong), Back From the Dead (Popo negotiates with Black Sun, expanding Tenloss and the Cartel to Nal Hutta), Cash for Guns (Popo signs a contract to purchase proton cannons in return for supplying the CIS with the tanks the cannons are for)


  • Complete four miscellaneous threads. = Ain't No Auction Like a Spice Auction (Popo bids on various items using Tenloss funding while negotiating an agreement to spread Tenloss to Kessel), Back in the Saddle (Tenloss expands to Nar Shaddaa through Republic negotiations), Something of Worth (Popo discusses expansion plans with Anaya Fen for Tenloss on Kessel), Four Ton Job (Popo hires a specialist for a project to forward his own, and his company's, fame and prestige)

  • Successfully complete a project of sizable proportions. = Fear and Loathing (Popo deals with Mandalorians on his space station running amok, but uses the opportunity to barter for Mandalorian protection of the Wheel while retaining his personal ownership of the space station)


EDIT: My bad, I kept thinking I had Tenloss on Nar Kreeta, but that was just Popo there for an auction. Whoops.
 

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