Starship Submission Modifications

[Zef Halo]

Updated.

[member="The Slave"]

I have edited everything other than adding these:

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/81231-mc1003-tetra-class-targetingtracking-system/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/81868-mc-1002-oracle-class-sensor-suite/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/76631-ferrocarbon-condensed-matter-composite-fcmc-starship-frame-system/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/119147-infrastructure-management-system/

As I will need proof of permission to use due to their affiliation.

Also you will have to specify what minor edits to format and location of information you have done. I can't just copy paste the whole new submission. That said, please do not copy paste the whole submission but just the specific parts you want changed. The bullet point list you put did help immensely though.

 

[Darth Empyrean]

http://starwarsrp.ne...s-sensor-suite/http://starwarsrp.ne...p-frame-system/

These are through Jaeger Solutions having a contract with Mon Calamari Shipyards, and having permission to use them. They own a portion of the company, as stated here (OG Poster liked post to accept, no actual response on forum). I also have various discord screenshots if you'd like, just to verify. This is once again verified with the use of the Delphus.4 shielding, another closed market product from the company in question.

As far as this;

http://starwarsrp.ne...racking-system/

That's open market.

http://starwarsrp.ne...agement-system/

This one is also from various contracts between Jaeger Solutions and Aegis Systems, one that can be easily verified by [member="Arken Lussk"] if he so wishes. Both own shares in the other, and have full rights to eachothers products. It was a system originally built to manage a fortress world the two companies were building, on Oricon.

Also you will have to specify what minor edits to format and location of information you have done. I can't just copy paste the whole new submission. That said, please do not copy paste the whole submission but just the specific parts you want changed. The bullet point list you put did help immensely though.

As far as this goes; My apologies. I assumed a whole new post would work better, and I would go back through and double check the differences but can't seem to find what I was attempting to fix prior. I remember when I went back to the submission, multiple bulleted points had either unformatted, or glitched; but now I can't seem to find any traces of them. Regardless, it must not have been that important.

 

[Arken Lussk]

[member="The Slave"], [member="Therran Graush"]

The IMS is applicable for use by both Jaeger Solutions and Aegis Systems personnel.

 

[Zef Halo]

[member="The Slave"]

Should be good now, my dude.

 

[Marina DeVoe]

Oh God..yes, it's me again. Sorry, just need a little tweaking on my ship.
You know blondes...once you feed one, you can't get rid of them. Hmmm...or is that mynocks?..??

Heh!...Anywho...

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Submission Name: Mariner IV

Link to Submission: Mariner IV

Summary of Modification:
.............................................#1 item. Due to writers complaining I take too long on jumps, I wish to speed up my hyper-drive from 0.9 to 0.5 As you can see, the Mariner IV is unarmed and has no weapons. It is not a military ship, as my charrie is a pacifist. But would like to be able to run a little faster than most baddies...it is my only defense.

....................................... #2 item. I'd like to include a low defense system that is non-lethal by way of an electrical discharge to the hull. Naturally it's weakness is that it can't be used during flight as it also reboots entire ship system. It is used when parked to deter forced manned entry.

Reason for Modification:
...........................................#1 item. I am an extensive writer and don't skip writing out time spent during jumps. I would also like to be able to run a little faster than most baddies, if I can...it is my only defense.

.......................................#2 item. It's like a stun gun for those touching the hull. Also, same result for people inside ship touching the inside walls. The 2nd weakness of that is that it will also reboot the ship's system, so it cannot be used during flight.

Modification: Below in white is the addition and changes to my ship. Disregard anything in green, as it is used for reference, as to where the changes should be placed.


Note: The reserve fuel cells in Standard equip, I added for better clarification, as it had been approved in 'Strengths' but I didn't list it in bullet form in Standard.






TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS:

• Classification: Small Corvette transport/freighter.
• Length: 50 meters
• Width: 27 meters
• Height: 12 meters
• Weapons: None
• Armament: Low
• Defenses: Very Low
• Hangar: 3 speeder-bikes in hangar
• Maneuverability Rating: High
• Speed Rating: High
• Hyperdrive Class: 0.5

STANDARD FEATURES :

• 6 x 2 person escape pods
• 1 fully equip Med Bay
• 2 airlocks on opposite sides
• 1 astro mech droid RU TK1213
• Long range interstellar communications
• Reserve fuel cells for extended range

Advance Systems:

• High capacitance electrical discharge to hull exterior

Strengths:

• High maneuverability
• Good agility
• extended range by addition of reserve fuel cells
• Exterior hull high electrical discharge
• Optimal hyper-drive system

Weaknesses:

• No offensive weapons
• No defensive weapons
• Average light armor
• Exterior hull electrical discharge is non-lethal and can only be used when ship not flying, as it will reboot on board system too.
• Exterior hull electrical discharge also affects people inside that are touching walls, but not floors (non-slip rubberized floors).

Description:
A previously owned Loronar E-9 Explorer craft in pristine condition was acquired by House DeVoe to have it undergo modifications to meet the requirements of a small sole piloted freighter/transporter. It was bought exclusively for Marina DeVoe; second daughter to Duke Kyle DeVoe.
Ship was commissioned to be stripped of offensive and defensive weapons as per Marina DeVoe's request.
The Mariner IV is primarily used to explore and see the galaxy by Marina DeVoe while she earns credits to do so by working as a small shipper and transporting passengers to their destinations as pilot for hire. The Mariner IV is equipped with 2 airlocks, a medical bay and support equip that can perform limited rescue and medical assistance/transportation.

 

[Darth Carnifex]

Submission Name: Xo'Xaan II-class Star Destroyer
Link to Submission: Click
Summary of Modification: Change some stats
Reason for Modification: Shifting of ship design priorities
Modification:

• Armament: Moderate
  ​Turbolaser Batteries
• Double Heavy Turbolaser Cannons
• Heavy Ion Cannons
• Tractor Beam Projectors

[*]Defenses: Average​

• ​Armor
  ​Deflector Shields
• Reinforced Hull

[*]Defensive Weaponry

• Point-defense Cannons
• Anti-missile Octets

[*]Electronic Defenses

• Cap Drain
• De-Ionizer
• Socketguard

[*]Anti-Missile Defenses

• Warhead Countermeasures

[*]Hangar: Low

• ​2 Starfighter Squadrons

[*]Maneuverability Rating: Average
[*]Speed Rating: Average
[*]Hyperdrive Class: Average

 

[Onrai]

Resubmitting modification request as it was apparently unnoticed after a month.

Submission Name: Attrition-class Light Star Destroyer
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/30551-attrition-class-light-star-destroyer/
Summary of Modification: Affiliation change, picture change, manufacturer change
Reason for Modification: New company, Fringe is dead, picture needs to be replaced with working one
Modification:
Change picture to http://rpggamer.org/uploaded_images/Viceroy-Class-Star-Destroye.jpg
Change affiliation to Sith Empire
Change manufacturer to Defiance Consolidated Multipurpose Manufacturing

Submission Name: Detritus-class Heavy Bomber
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/4519-detritus-class-heavy-bomber/
Summary of Modification: Picture change, manufacturer change
Reason for Modification: New company, picture needs to be replaced with working one
Modification:
Change picture to http://media.moddb.com/images/mods/1/11/10359/Ursa.jpg
Change manufacturer to Defiance Consolidated Multipurpose Manufacturing

Submission Name: Cyracuse-class Drone Carrier
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/31148-cyracuse-class-drone-carrier/
Summary of Modification: Picture change
Reason for Modification: Found better picture
Modification:
Change picture to http://i53.tinypic.com/35klamo.jpg

 

[Onrai]

Submission Name: Angel-class Interceptor
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/4315-angel-class-interceptor/
Summary of Modification: Picture change, manufacturer change
Reason for Modification: New company, picture needs to be replaced with working one
Modification:
Change picture to http://wiki.hard-light.net/images/8/83/Angel.png
Change manufacturer to Defiance Consolidated Multipurpose Manufacturing

Submission Name: Peragus-class Corvette
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/4466-peragus-class-corvette/
Summary of Modification: Picture change, manufacturer change
Reason for Modification: New company, picture needs to be replaced with working one
Modification:
Change picture to http://wiki.hard-light.net/images/8/8e/Custos-x.jpg
Change manufacturer to Defiance Consolidated Multipurpose Manufacturing

Submission Name: Adamantine-class Frigate
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/4638-adamantine-class-artillery-frigate/
Summary of Modification: Picture change, manufacturer change
Reason for Modification: New company, picture needs to be replaced with working one
Modification:
Change picture to http://wiki.hard-light.net/images/7/79/GTCAtlantis.png
Change manufacturer to Defiance Consolidated Multipurpose Manufacturing

 

[Onrai]

Submission Name: Coryphin-class Super-Heavy Bomber
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/46690-coryphin-class-super-heavy-bomber/
Summary of Modification: Picture change, manufacturer change, affiliation change
Reason for Modification: New company, picture needs to be replaced with working one, Protectorate is now dead
Modification:
Change picture to http://wiki.hard-light.net/images/5/5f/GTBStheno.png
Change affiliation to Open-Market
Change manufacturer to Defiance Consolidated Multipurpose Manufacturing

Submission Name: Archer-class Gunship
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/29488-archer-class-gunship/
Summary of Modification: Picture change, manufacturer change, affiliation change
Reason for Modification: New company, picture needs to be replaced with working one, New Order/Horde are dead
Modification:
Change picture to http://wiki.hard-light.net/images/a/ad/FTFxThor.png
Change affiliation to Open-Market
Change manufacturer to Defiance Consolidated Multipurpose Manufacturing

 

[Fiolette Fortan]

Submission Name: Ithaqua-type, Elite Fighter
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/109576-ithaqua-type-elite-fighter/
Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliation
Reason for Modification: So I can use my own ship/technology.
Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (xhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/99158-primo-victorian-shipwright/) as an affiliate

Submission Name: Windsor-class, Medical Station
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/107496-windsor-class-medical-station/
Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliation, and Manufacturer
Reason for Modification: So I can use my own ship/technology.
Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (xhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/99158-primo-victorian-shipwright/) as an affiliate and manufacturer.

Submission Name: Watchtower-class, Orbital Station
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/107496-windsor-class-medical-station/
Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliation, and Manufacturer
Reason for Modification: So I can use my own ship/technology.
Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (xhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/99158-primo-victorian-shipwright/) as an affiliate and manufacturer.

 

[Fiolette Fortan]

Submission Name: Manjarrez-class, Repair Station
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/107446-manjarrez-class-repair-station/
Summary of Modification: Adding Manufacturer
Reason for Modification: Adding to my company’s list of manufactured products
Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (xhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/99158-primo-victorian-shipwright/) as a manufacturer.

Submission Name: Warspite II-class, Battlecruiser
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/108948-warspite-ii-class-battlecruiser/
Summary of Modification: Adding Manufacturer
Reason for Modification: Adding to my company’s list of manufactured products
Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (xhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/99158-primo-victorian-shipwright/) as a manufacturer.

Submission Name: Hellstrom-class, Fleet Carrier
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/110342-hellstrom-class-fleet-carrier/
Summary of Modification: Adding Manufacturer, Bump/Adjust Hangar Ratings.
Reason for Modification: Adding to my company’s list of manufactured products, and to adjust/bump the hangar rating to Very High at 15 Squadrons in accordance to the new Hangar Ratings.
Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (xhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/99158-primo-victorian-shipwright/) as a manufacturer.

 

[Fiolette Fortan]

Submission Name: Kleve-class, Science Station
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/109490-kleve-class-science-station/
Summary of Modification: Adding Manufacturer, Change Affiliation from PVS to Primo Victorian.
Reason for Modification: Adding to my company’s list of manufactured products, and making it more clear as to who or what PVS is.
Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (xhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/99158-primo-victorian-shipwright/) as a manufacturer.

 

[Ordo]

Submission Name: baar’ur-class-medical-frigate
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/32248-baar’ur-class-medical-frigate/
Summary of Modification: Change of Affiliation
Reason for Modification: Company no longer Mandalorian owned.
Modification: Change affiliation to open market

 

[Fiolette Fortan]

Submission Name: Inflictor II, Escort Cruiser
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/111659-inflictor-ii-class-heavy-cruiser/
Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliations
Reason for Modification: So I can use my own ship.
Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (xhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/99158-primo-victorian-shipwright/) as an affiliate

Submission Name: Stormcloud II, Assault Cruiser
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/109546-stormcloud-ii-class-assault-cruiser/
Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliations
Reason for Modification: So I can use my own ship.
Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (xhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/99158-primo-victorian-shipwright/) as an affiliate

Submission Name: Sondheimer II, Interdictor Cruiser
Link to Submission: Herehttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/116052-sondheimer-ii-class-interdiction-crusier/
Summary of Modification: Adding Affiliations
Reason for Modification: So I can use my own ship.
Modification: Please add, Primo Victorian Shipwright (xhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/99158-primo-victorian-shipwright/) as an affiliate

 

[Kuat Drive Yards]

Submission Name: Imperial II β-class Frigate, PT Nova-class Courier, D5 β-Mantis Patrol Ship, A β-6 Interceptor, Incarcerator β-class Corvette, Lightstealth β-18 Reconnaissance Ship
Link to Submission: Imperial II β-class Frigate, PT Nova-class Courier, D5 β-Mantis Patrol Ship, A β-6 Interceptor, Incarcerator β-class Corvette, Lightstealth β-18 Reconnaissance Ship
Summary of Modification: Adding Advanced System
Reason for Modification: Overdue Advanced System Addition
Modification: Add "KSD-851" to all listed ships under Advanced Systems.

 

[Zef Halo]

Reviewing.

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[member="Fiolette Yvarro"] | [member="Vanessa Vantai"]

You may only submit one request per category at a time. This request may contain up to five items to be modified. Choose 5.

Vanessa, I will do the ones I missed last month + 5 more you got. You've put 6 up, drop one.

 

[Onrai]

[member="Zef Halo"] just did.

 

[Fiolette Fortan]

Submission Names: Inflictor II, Escort Cruiser | Stormcloud II, Assault Cruiser | Sondheimer II, Interdictor Cruiser | Ithaqua-type, Elite Fighter
Link to Submissions: Inflictor IIhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/111659-inflictor-ii-class-heavy-cruiser/, Stormcloud II, Sondheimer II, Ithaqua
Summary of Modifications: Adding to Affiliation.
Reason for Modification: So I can utilize my own ships.
Modification: Please add Primo Victorian Shipwright (xhttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/99158-primo-victorian-shipwright/) as an affiliate.

[member="Zef Halo"]

 

[Zef Halo]

[member="Fiolette Yvarro"]

5 submissions to be modified per request.

You may only submit one request per category at a time. This request may contain up to five items to be modified.

 

[Zef Halo]

Submission Name: Angel-class Interceptor
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/4315-angel-class-interceptor/
Summary of Modification: Picture change, manufacturer change
Reason for Modification: New company, picture needs to be replaced with working one
Modification:
Change picture to http://wiki.hard-light.net/images/8/83/Angel.png
Change manufacturer to Defiance Consolidated Multipurpose Manufacturing

Submission Name: Peragus-class Corvette
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/4466-peragus-class-corvette/
Summary of Modification: Picture change, manufacturer change
Reason for Modification: New company, picture needs to be replaced with working one
Modification:
Change picture to http://wiki.hard-light.net/images/8/8e/Custos-x.jpg
Change manufacturer to Defiance Consolidated Multipurpose Manufacturing

Submission Name: Adamantine-class Frigate
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/4638-adamantine-class-artillery-frigate/
Summary of Modification: Picture change, manufacturer change
Reason for Modification: New company, picture needs to be replaced with working one
Modification:
Change picture to http://wiki.hard-light.net/images/7/79/GTCAtlantis.png
Change manufacturer to Defiance Consolidated Multipurpose Manufacturing

Submission Name: Coryphin-class Super-Heavy Bomber
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/46690-coryphin-class-super-heavy-bomber/
Summary of Modification: Picture change, manufacturer change, affiliation change
Reason for Modification: New company, picture needs to be replaced with working one, Protectorate is now dead
Modification:
Change picture to http://wiki.hard-light.net/images/5/5f/GTBStheno.png
Change affiliation to Open-Market
Change manufacturer to Defiance Consolidated Multipurpose Manufacturing

Submission Name: Archer-class Gunship
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/29488-archer-class-gunship/
Summary of Modification: Picture change, manufacturer change, affiliation change
Reason for Modification: New company, picture needs to be replaced with working one, New Order/Horde are dead
Modification:
Change picture to http://wiki.hard-light.net/images/a/ad/FTFxThor.png
Change affiliation to Open-Market
Change manufacturer to Defiance Consolidated Multipurpose Manufacturing

None of the images work [member="Vanessa Vantai"], got others?