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Codex Denied Shadow Company | Politorate

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create an Elite Paramilitary Unit for the Politorate
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  • Role: Paramilitary Unit of the Politorate
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GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Unit Name: Shadow Company
  • Affiliation:
  • Classification:
    • Elite Paramilitary Unit [Mechanized Infantry]
  • Description: The Shadow Company is a Paramilitary Unit comprised of Ex-Galactic Alliance Commandos , Shock Troopers and Pathfinders once part of the 34th Trooper Company , which was dismantled and it's members imprisoned during the GA-FO War for the numerous atrocities they committed during the Conflict. Upon the formation of the Third Galactic Alliance , the 34th were quick to align themselves with Marlon Sularen due to their shared hatred for the Galactic Alliance with the 34th soon reforming into the Shadow Company eventually falling under the jurisdiction of the Politorate after it's formation in 861 ABY. Now the Shadow Company exists to execute the will of Sularen and to eliminate those who stand in his way.
COMBAT INFORMATION:
Strengths:
  • Will of Retribution | Fueled by a desire for Revenge against the Galactic Alliance , the Shadow Company is Ruthless and Mercyless ensuring that their goals are achieved at any costs no matter how much people die in the process employing Brutal Shock-and-Awe Tactics to overwhelm their enemies and annihilate their will to fight.
  • Extreme Loyalty | Given their Hatred towards the Alliance , the Shadow Company is extremely loyal to Marlon Sularen and his Organization due to their strong Antagonistic Stance towards the Alliance and desire to destroy the Galactic Alliance as a whole. As a result the Shadow Company are willing to do anything to further the cause of Sularen regardless of the risk posed by the operation.
Weaknesses:
  • Hard to Replace | Being Comprised of Hardened Veteran Elite Soldiers , replacing Lost Soldiers is no easy task for the Shadow Company as new recruits require months of extreme training to reach the level of efficiency veteran members of the Shadow Company already have with the process of replacing soldiers taking up to 18 Months to complete with brutal training methods even having the potential of killing recruits in some cases. If the Shadow Company isn't careful enough , they'll lose more Men at a rate faster then the amount of people they can recruit while maintaining maximum efficiency
  • Unconventional Warfare | Despite being an Elite Mechanized Infantry Unit , the Shadow Company is more suited for Unconventional Warfare given their Size , Availability and Experience. Should the Shadow Company find themselves engaging in Conventional Engagements they could find themselves in a massive disadvantage which could prove disastrous for the Shadow Company and potentially Fatal for the Unit as a whole depending on who they face in open battles.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
In the aftermath of the Byss Crisis , Marlon Sularen was faced with increasing opposition in the Senate. With little allies within the Galactic Alliance , the Lord-Imperator needed to find a way to reduce the influence of his enemies within the Alliance or eliminate them altogether. His solution : the Shadow Company , an Elite Paramilitary Force embedded within the Politorate and the perfect tool for such a strategy. With the Shadow Company he'd be able to wage a covert unconventional war against his enemies within the Alliance most notably Corellia and Duros and further pursue his agenda without the risk of further alienating the Alliance.

The Shadow Company as stated earlier is an Elite Paramilitary Unit of the Politorate , a Clandestine Intelligence Agency secretly working for Marlon Sularen. The Shadow Company was once known as the 34th Trooper Company , an Elite Unit of Commandos , Shock Troopers and Pathfinders that once served the Second Galactic Alliance in the 850s ABY. The 34th fought bravely during the GA-FO War although throughout the brutal conflict they soon devolved into a brutal force harded by the hardships of war. Eventually they committed some horrific warcrimes against the FO during the Latter Stages of the GA-FO and were imprisoned by the Galactic Alliance for their Actions.

Eventually they went into obscurity after the Collapse of the Second Galactic Alliance becoming Mercenaries in the Outer Rim until the restoration of the Third Galactic Alliance. The 34th soon came into contact with Marlon Sularen , an exiled Corellian who shared the 34th's Anti-GA Stance. The 34th soon pledged themselves to Sularen due to their desire of revenge against the Galactic Alliance. Upon joining Sularen they were quickly reformed into the Shadow Company and reassigned to the Politorate , Sularen's Clandestine Intelligence Agency in order to covertly wage unconventional warfare against the Galactic Alliance.

Now the Shadow Company is a Ruthless , Brutal Paramilitary Unit that exists only to serve the Will of Sularen. They are one of Sularen's Finest Units currently fielded other such units including the Constitutional Guard on Byss and the Raptor Squad , another Elite Unit within the Politorate. Due to their extreme loyalty the Shadow Company will do anything to further Sularen's Agenda even if it requires partaking in suicidal missions with little chances of success. This Blind Loyalty to Sularen and their Brutality and Ruthlessness on the Battlefield has made the Shadow Company into one of Sularen's most important Units at his disposal.


 
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I warned you previously about toning down your div templates and this is the very same one I warned you about. These are incredibly hard to read. Please replace it and be sure to do so with something that isn't even harder on the eyes. It will remain in Pre-Codex until this is fixed.

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Little Armored Support | Given their lack of Armored Support , the Shadow Company , despite their ruthlessness and brutality are not suited for combat against Armored Units or any form of Conventional Warfare and will most likely get annihilated when engaging superior enemies in direct combat.

This makes no sense when they have a support vehicle that has high defenses and a butt load of shielding. Please fix this.

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Weaknesses:
  • Hard to Replace | Comprised of Hardened Veteran Elite Soldiers , replacing Lost Soldiers is no easy task for the Shadow Company as new recruits require months of extreme training that could even kill new recruits to reach the level of efficiency veteran members of the Shadow Company already have with the process of replacing soldiers taking up to 16 Months to complete.
  • No Risk no Reward | Because of their willingness to do anything for the sake of advancing Sularen's Agenda and Revenge against the Galactic Alliance regardless of risk , the Shadow Company has been known to regularly conduct high-risk operations which might compromise the integrity of the Shadow Company given how hard it is to replace lost soldiers.

The first weakness is not a proper weakness, its nothing that would affect RP and usage. The latter just repeats the first weakness so it has the same issue. Please fix.
 
Hard to Replace | Being Comprised of Hardened Veteran Elite Soldiers , replacing Lost Soldiers is no easy task for the Shadow Company as new recruits require months of extreme training to reach the level of efficiency veteran members of the Shadow Company already have with the process of replacing soldiers taking up to 18 Months to complete with brutal training methods even having the potential of killing recruits in some cases. If the Shadow Company isn't careful enough , they'll lose more Men at a rate faster then the amount of people they can recruit while maintaining maximum efficiency

Remove this as a weakness since it really isn't one. If anything its just fluff that can be found in the description of the unit. Replace it with an actual weakness the edit to the second one is passable, thank you for making the change.

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