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Approved NPC Raptor Squad | Politorate

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Unit Name: Raptor Squad
  • Affiliation:
  • Classification: Squad of Prototype Supersoldiers
  • Description: Raptor Squad is an Elite Spec Ops Team of Supersoldiers developed at the Top-Secret SularenCo Labs on Erex Minora utilizing technology acquired by Nakaioma through the C.A.B. Before being “Upgraded” these Super Soldiers were once one of the Shadow Triumvirate’s most Elite Soldiers and now serve as an unstoppable force rivaled only by a few others. Now Raptor Squad finds itself uder the Command of the Mysterious Phantom , who acts as their leader during SpecOps Missions
COMBAT INFORMATION:
Strengths:
  • Hardened Commandos | Before receiving their Technological Advancements , the members of Raptor Squad were once part of Death Company , a sleeper cell of the Shadow Triumvirate composed of Hardened Soldiers , Commandos and Pathfinders of the Second Galactic Alliance. Thus Raptor Squad has the advantage of having years of combat experience making them a dangerous threat on the Battlefield
  • Silent Killers | In addition to having years of combat experience , the members of Raptor Squad are masters of stealth capable of attacking unsuspecting enemy forces where they least expect it.
  • Unstoppable | Because of the various Technological Advancements given to each member of Raptor Squad , the Raptor Squad is a near-unstoppable force capable of facing Special Forces from other Organizations head-on with a high chance of success and Force-Sensitives given their Limited Ability to resist certain force abilities like the Mind Trick and Force-Cloak (Depends on Precision and Perfect timing)
Weaknesses:
  • Limited Capacity | Despite their status as a Near-Unstoppable Force , the Raptor Squad aren't completely invincible while they might prove to be a match for Hostile Spec Ops Teams and even Force-Sensitives , the Members of the Raptor Squad have limited immunity against the Force being capable of resisting some Force Abilities such as the Mind Trick and see through Force-Cloak (Although that would require precision and perfect timing) although they are still affected by other force abilities like Mechu-Deru.
  • EMP Vulnerability | Because of their many cybernetic enhancements , the members of Raptor Squad are somewhat vulnerable to EMP and Ion Weaponry which can disable most of their Cybernetic Enhancements and thus place the Raptor Squad at a disadvantage when facing enemy SpecOps Teams.



HISTORICAL INFORMATION
When Marlon Sularen entered at odds with the Galactic Alliance following the Xa Fel , the Lord-Imperator of Byss made immediate preparations to defend his rightful throne on Byss along with the assets of his Corporations. As such Sularen revived the Politorate , a Secretive Private Intelligence Agency formed with the objective of advancing his goals.

When Nakaimoa opened their holofront , Marlon Sularen was quick to establish a contract with the Megacorporation in order to gain access to special technology which could potentially allow Marlon Sularen to create an early batch of Supersoldiers to carry out his will. However aiming to create a perfect supersoldier capable of rivaling Force-Sensitives , Sularen created a Prototype first.

Thus 12 Individuals from one of the Shadow Triumvirate’s Sleeper Cells dubbed the Death Company were selected and sent to Erex Minora was alot of surgeries were performed on them to give them Technological Advancements in which were to strengthen their bones and render them vulnerable to ight-saber attacks. The Project itself was made with the sole purpose of countering the Jedi and Sith in order to ensure Sularen’s Success.

These 12 Individuals would go on to become the Raptor Squad , a dangerous and lethal Special Ops team utilized by the Politorate as a means to further advance the goals of Marlon Sularen. With their Fanatic Loyalty to Sularen and hatred towards the Galactic Alliance , the Raptor Squad have both become valuable allies to Sularen Directly and the Shadow Triumvirate


 
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Weaknesses:
  • Fanatic Loyalty | The Members of the Raptor Squad are known for their Fanatic Loyalty to Marlon Sularen and Dorian Sevenar which makes them both a dangerous enemy to face but also acts is detrimental to the Raptor Squad itself. As per their Fanaticism , the Raptor Squad will do anything for Sularen even when the chance of survival is low valuing the Scheming Lord-Imperator over their own lives.

Again, this is NOT a weakness its a strength that is masked as a weakness. This is my second time requesting an edit on the weaknesses. If this isn't done I'll have to deny the submission.

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Raptor Squad have limited immunity against the Force being capable of resisting some Force Abilities such as the Mind Trick and the Force Push but still being vulnerable to other Abilities

While everything is looking a lot better, I had a small question about their resistances. I can understand mind trick, having the training and such allows an elite group to find their way through a fog of the Force. Yet looking through the tech they have I don't see anything that nullifies the force to prevent a force push. I could have missed it or it could be a piece of tech you forgot to add. Please add the tech or adjust the immunities to the Force.​

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the Force being capable of resisting some Force Abilities such as the Mind Trick and Force Cloak but still being vulnerable to other Abilities

Same question: How are they able to see through force cloak? Do they have special gear? Is there special training? Like I said previously with the Force Push & Mind Trick - I can see how and why they are able to avoid mind trick but they would have to "sense" someone using force cloak or forever be in infrared which isn't helpful or healthy.

Please fix this.

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Passing this through, but please remember anything that would be considered a strength should be placed in the strength categories. Its been an ongoing issue with most of your submissions. Don't use a weakness to justify a strength in one of the weakness paragraphs.

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