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Approved NPC The Phantom | Politorate Operative

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: Unknown
  • Force Sensitivity: Non-Force User
  • Gender : Female
  • Species: Human
  • Appearance: Unknown | Little is known about what the Phantom actually looks like
SOCIAL INFORMATION
COMBAT INFORMATION
Strengths:
  • Silent but Deadly | The Phantom is an expert assassin and master at stealth. She is capable of infiltrating areas filled with enemies and striking huge blows against them before slipping away unharmed and undetected.
  • Ace Pilot | The Phantom is an Ace Pilot with extraordinary piloting skills. She is capable of taking down entire squadrons of enemy fighters and is highly unpredictable in Dogfights.
  • Mysterious Identity | Nothing is known about the real identity of the Phantom allowing her to essentially operate as a Ghost. She can reveal herself and assume various aliases and she speaks a variety of languages allowing her to fool any intelligence agency.
Weaknesses:
  • Mysterious Identity | While the Phantom possess a large set of skills that allows her to operate at ease throughout the Galaxy , what makes her truly dangerous is her unknown identity. If at any time her true identity is exposed to her enemies it could compromise her missions and hinder her ability to operate throughout the Galaxy at large.
  • Limited Training | While being a capable assassin and saboteur and having remarkable skills , the Phantom unfortunately has limited training in Hand-to-Hand Combat and in fighting against Force-Sensitive and "Enhanced" Individuals. Should she either find herself in a Hand-to-Hand Combat or confront Force-Sensitives or "Enhanced" Individuals , her chances for success would be significantly lower then usual
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Formerly known as [REDACTED] , the Phantom was once an Elite Operative working under Marlon Sularen during the days of the Imperial Directorate. She acted as Sularen’s Personal Bodyguard and Enforcer carrying out missions to advance his agenda. After the Kuati Crisis and a subsequent Ambush in the Socorro Belt , [REDACTED] was Captured by the High Republic when she stood behind to slow down the advance of the High Republic to allow Sularen to escape.

Eventually she escaped custody but at the time Marlon Sularen had presumed her dead and had been betrayed by Credius Nargath and the Zweihander Union, joining the New Imperial Armada in the process. To put her skills in use [REDACTED] worked for various Crime Syndicates throughout the Core Worlds and Deep Core becoming one of the Alliance Marshals most wanted individuals.

After a few months evading Alliance Law Enforcement , [REDACTED] found herself on Byss as an Enforcer for a Minor Crime Syndicate just around the time Sularen returned from Wild Space to the Deep Core cementing himself as Lord-Imperator of Byss and initiating a brutal crackdown on all Crime and Political Dissent on Byss.

The Criminal Organization she worked for was crushed by Sularen’s Regime in a matter of weeks and [REDACTED] found herself on the run from pursuing forces under Marlon Sularen. [REDACTED] was eventually captured by the Beshqek Security Forces and brought to Marlon Sularen who offered a choice : serve him as his Personal Enforcer or die.

[REDACTED] chose the former joining Sularen’s Shadow Triumvirate as the Mysterious Phantom with official news reports claiming that she died when confronting BSF Operatives to erase all traces of her former identity and provide her with a new one. The Identity of a mysterious invisible foe ready to strike at the hearts of Sularen’s enemies. Now one of Sularen’s Most trusted operatives , the Phantom prepares to head on her first mission ready to serve the Triumvir of Power.


 
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Once again, missing permissions please fix. Make sure before submitting submissions you have everything collected - it seems to be a common issue with your submissions.

Marlon Sularen Marlon Sularen
 
Marlon Sularen Marlon Sularen

Please reword her strengths. The language states an outcome "No one will know she's there" "she will always do something unexpected and you will lose" She's still an NPC, so word the strengths to avoid stating the outcomes that can be used to god mod through an encounter.

Also, the weaknesses are based on emotion and don't fully balance the strengths that you have given her. "Arrogance" can be both a strength and a weakness for example. Does she have a physical flaw that hinders her performance that she wants to hide? Something like that could balance her strengths.
 
With how heavy her strengths are since they are skill based, her weaknesses need to reflect something that balances this out. Both of the weaknesses are heavily conditional on RP and allow her to inevitably become invincible. There's nothing that would allow enemy forces to uncover her identity and her second weakness is conditional on the person writing her to be willing to show that over-confidence and actually falter with her mission.

Please provide an actual weakness to balance out the strengths that you have given her, or lower their effects. Again this is the second time I've requested these edits, please make the required edits.

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