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Codex Denied Pakoon: The Technis

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Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
SETTING INFORMATION
  • Landmark Name: The Technis
  • Classification: Continent
  • Location: Pakoon: Matsu's Holocron Casing
  • Affiliation: Matsu Ike Matsu Ike
  • Size: Large: Mechanically and technologically developed with enclosed spaces, ports and facilities.
  • Population: Moderate:
  • Demographics: Populated with various species from around the galaxy who have a technical mindset, the Technis itself is highly advanced and houses advanced Artificial Intelligence that aids in development and education of the people within. From human, humanoids, zeltrons, Hapans, Atrisians, wookiees, twi'leks, rodians, mon cala.
  • Accessibility: Traveling on the back of Pakoon, the Technis itself isn't locked down... it can defend itself but much like all jedi temples it is open to visitors who come to the station. Welcoming as station travels around the galaxy and invites anyone looking to be trained or have a chance for a different life.
  • Description: Of the three continents within the station, Technis reflects the technological aspects of the jedi master. With heavy emphasis on manufacturing and advaancing their mechanical aspects. A balanced approach to the more mystical and familiar areas of the station. The Technis housing tens of thousands of jedi engineers, tech division, artisans and science personnel. Those trained by and being part of what is being created on Pakoon itself.
POINTS OF INTEREST
The Forge: The tech divisions ultimate forge... designed and housing dozens of forges, hundreds of supply rooms and what is considered the great lightsaber forge. FOr making the most advanced sabers from the silver jedi and the order itself on a technical level. With power for the forges coming from the kyber heart of a star to add lightside energy into the works that are made.

Display Room: Massive and designed to show off works of the grandmaster as well as many others from across the galaxy. With panels and even more in the form of robes that have been collected. Sabers and even some ships that they have been able to see.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The technis continent, created on the back of Pakoon and beautiful in it mechanical design. Molded and set up with everything that they have been able to build up. With ports and areas where ships are able to dock from space or the other continents. The jedi of the technical division and engineers working on everything that they have been able to do. Building a grand forge for creating works and wonders. They have the heavily sided technological aspects of the jedi order that Matsu has brought. In what is thought to be her favored side. IT is only one aspect that is there but Pakoon requires seeing much of it and so to show the sciences vs the space magic that has been worked on. THey continued to work on more of the technis itself and as a multi level facilities of a continent the rooms allow it to house the most people on the back of Pakoon.
 
Matsu Ike Matsu Ike

While I enjoy the creativity here this isn't a submission that I can approve with respect to the spirit of Star Wars. I was fine with the idea of a turtle that could jump through hyperspace quite like a Purrgil but this is intended to be something else entirely. The sheer SIZE of this "landmark" takes any likeness away from the mysticism of a space whale and instead leads to the Great A'Tuin from Discworld. There are no splitting hairs on that.

It's too close to a roaming moon (size) for starters, secondly, it completely bypasses the factory rules by using a "species" as a vehicle to get the job done without any restrictions. It's not a space station because it moves so freely and the maximum size for a ship is 10K. There are multiple issues that I do not believe can be rectified by any amount of adjustment, however, you may try to re-write it and re-submit accordingly.

I do not want to see the same submission duplicated, however.

At this time, regrettably, this submission is denied.
 
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