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Approved Lore GADF 1st Carrier Strike Group

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Basta'gasho'nuruodo

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To provide a new, canonized CSG for the Galactic Alliance's use in combat against various threats as well as patrol the Brotherhood-GA border regions.
  • Image Credit: N/A
  • Permissions: Republic Engineering Corporation permissions | Federal Cooperative permissions
  • Links: All necessary links are included within the text.
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Fleet Name: 1st Carrier Strike Group "Csilla's Avengers"
  • Classification: Carrier Strike Group
  • Affiliation: Galactic Alliance Defense Force Navy
  • Fleet Symbol: N/A and/or WIP.
  • Description: A fleet of warships centered around the ANV 'Ultimatum,' a massive Alliance-class star defender operating as a fleet carrier, with a focus on heavy missile and strike/support craft usage.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Headquarters: This CSG is headquartered at Foerost.
  • Ports of Call: The 1st CSG often patrols around the systems of Jakku, Jedha, Galantos, Thrantin, and Zardossa Stix at or near the galactic northwestern border of the Galactic Alliance.
  • Goals: To safeguard the galactic northwestern border against incursions from the Brotherhood and to give Chiss refugees in Alliance space a rallying point for justice - or revenge.
  • Reputation: The fleet is no secret at all, and many shall likely know of it as the embodiment of a single statement: "the Chiss shall not go gently into that dark night." Though, some may, perhaps, express worry (or joy) at the commanding Admiral's open, blatant calls for violent reprisals against those that destroyed Csilla, often times bordering on open support for warcrimes. There is, of course, those rumors that are neither confirmed or denied; sailors, pilots, and marines of this fleet take no prisoners in combat against those of the Dark Side.
COMPOSITION INFORMATION
MEMBERS
Rear Admiral Basta'gasho'nuruodo,' captain of the 'Ultimatum.' Male Chiss officer of the GADF Navy, first officer of the 1st CSG and 'commodore' of the Core Squadron.
Captain Kriz'osith'ezi "Zosith," captain of the 'Indefatigable.' A male Chiss officer of the GADF Navy.
Captain Ruski'seth'locath "Kiseth," captain of the 'Bulwark.' A female Chiss officer of the GADF Navy.

Commodore Chovza Rhal, captain of the 'Surprise.' A female Cathar officer of the GADF Navy and commodore of the Strike Squadron.
Captain Wirr Amped, captain of the 'Interprid.' A male Nautolan officer of the GADF Navy.

Commodore Okasa Makom, captain of the 'Harpy.' A male Togruta officer of the GADF Navy and commodore of the Escort Squadron.
Commander Vroc'azuku'huozi "Cazuku," captain of the 'Lotus.' A male Chiss officer of the GADF Navy.
Commander Vost'ivem'ranea "Tivem," captain of the 'Hunter.' A female Chiss officer of the GADF Navy.
Commander Vrados "Five-Horns," captain of the 'Spring Valley.' A male Zabrak officer of the GADF Navy.
Commander Shakka'Amersu, captain of the 'Visionary.' A female Rutian Twi'lek officer of the GADF Navy.

Commodore Rubald Hocurz, captain of the 'Alert.' A male human officer of the GADF Navy and commodore of the Patrol Squadron.
Commander Janmi Boutol, captain of the 'Stone.' A female human officer of the GADF Navy.
Commander Trarde'asen'sourta "Deasen," captain of the 'Confidence.' A male Chiss officer of the GADF Navy.
Commander Murd'esaow'sourta "Desaow," captain of the 'Rapier.' A male Chiss officer of the GADF Navy.

Commodore Acaro Mhuvos, captain of the 'Dauntless.' A male Mirialan officer of the GADF Navy and commodore of the Support Squadron.
Commander Robetal Conwins, captain of the 'Bountiful Harvest.' A male human officer of the GADF Navy.

Brigadier Wlez'ahosh'ogi "Zahosho," commanding officer of the CSG's attached marine brigade.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Millenia of conflict has been settled in the 'grand battle.' Dozens, perhaps hundreds, of line ships forming lines (as they're named for) and slugging it out, oft ignoring the explicit focus of strike craft and missile bombardment outside of smaller skirmishes that ultimately orbit the main slug fest. Each and every time, even the winners in a Decisive Victory have often faced horrendous casualties simply due to the circumstances of this sort of thing.

Rear Admiral Tagashon does not wish to do such a thing with his forces, not without playing every other angle first. Thus, he headed the commissioning of a new concept in galactic warfare: the carrier strike group. A fleet focused almost entirely on remaining firmly outside of the enemy's turbolaser bombardments to instead pummel them from afar with missiles, strike craft, and space mines. Beyond this, of course, was the political and social statements coming with the men and women that make up this fleet; he made it a point to bring in as many Chiss as he could physically get his hands on, to give his species that military embodiment of vengeance.

And thus, when they were unveiled to the public eye, they were almost immediately dubbed across the Holonet as "Csilla's Avengers" following a long, heartful and passionate speech given by Tagashon, declaring that they would act as the bulwark and vengeful fist of all that was lost at the Brotherhood of the Maw's hands.
 
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Basta'gasho'nuruodo

Hi there!

For the most part, this fleet is very well done. The only issues I see are in regards to Permissions that are required to utilize some of these ships. I see that a couple of them have "Galactic Alliance" in the tag but if it doesn't state that the Galactic Alliance can use it in the submission itself we need some form of proof. This can be in the form of a screencap from discord, a PM, or a link to a Market Place Purchase.

I'll explain below which ones need permissions:

x1 Alliance-class; ANV 'Ultimatum' - This ship is "Closed Market" and has no listed affiliation to yourself or the Galatic Alliance.
x2 Concord-classes; ANV 'Indefatigable' and 'Bulwark'- This is fine as it has an affiliation to the Galactic Alliance.
x2 Iblis-classes; ANV 'Surprise' and 'Interprid' - This is fine as it has an affiliation to the Galactic Alliance.
x5 Sacheen II-classes; ANV 'Harpy,' 'Lotus,' 'Hunter,' 'Spring Valley,' and 'Visionary' - This is "Closed Market" and has no listed affiliation to yourself or the Galatic Alliance.
x4 Nagata-classes; ANV 'Alert,' 'Stone,' 'Confidence,' and 'Rapier' - This is "Closed Market" and has no listed affiliation to yourself or the Galatic Alliance.
x1 Samaritan-class; ANV 'Dauntless' - This is fine as it has an affiliation to the Galactic Alliance.
x1 Hajen II-class; ANV 'Bountiful Harvest' -This is "Closed Market" and has no listed affiliation to yourself or the Galatic Alliance.

The items in red will require permission to use. It very well may exist, however, because it isn't listed on the submissions you've linked we need to have that proof to ensure that the OP's intended for them to be used by others.

They can be linked in the permissions section up top.

Thank you and please let me know if you have any questions!
 
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