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Chaldea

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The Dragon Attack

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
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Chaldea's moon, Zara, appears reddish-purple when full.

GENERAL INFORMATION
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  • Planet Name: Chaldea
  • Demonym: Chaldean
  • Region: Inner Rim
  • System Name: Phytoras system
  • System Features:
    • Phytoras, the sun for which the system is named.
    • Chaldea and its moon, Zara.
  • Location: In the empty hex between Jakku and Selvaris (see image).
  • Major Imports:
    • Droids/Heavy Machinery
    • Medical Supplies
    • Chemicals
    • Unrefined Ores
    • Luxury Items
  • Major Exports:
  • Unexploited Resources: There is a deposit of Tydirium located in the region of Bamarre. The locals have resisted mining in the area due to fear of destroying the habitat of the extremely rare Bamarri. Likewise, the mysterious substance known as Chaldean marble may have some use, but the natives refuse to touch it for the same reasons they leave the tydirium alone.
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Mer Embassy HQ, Pirivena.

GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
  • Gravity: Standard
  • Rotational Period: 26 hours
  • Orbital Period: 690 days
  • Climate: Mostly Temperate, but there is variation depending on relation to the poles.
  • Primary Terrain: Hills, Plains, Mountains, Forests, Oceans, Lakes; closer to the equator it is more tropical, with rainforests and some desert regions where there is little natural water available. Nearer to the poles it is colder, featuring tundra and glaciers.
  • Atmosphere: Type I
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Ruins of the former planetary capital of Nezamiyeh.

LOCATION INFORMATION
  • Capital City: Nezamiyeh (formerly)
  • Planetary Features: Chaldea's settlements were primarily land-based. The skyscrapers and tall stately buildings of its major cities never reached the towering heights of Coruscant. The skyline of Nezamiyeh is now a smoldering ruin. The rest of the world is dotted with the charred remnants of settlements and outposts, the ghosts of a once-thriving frontier civilization.
  • Major Locations:
  • Force Nexus (Optional): No. There used to be a Force Nexus in Nezamiyeh, but its power waned and it was finally removed by the Mystics.
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Chaldean deer in a field outside the ruins of a city.

POPULATION
  • Native Species:
  • Immigrated Species: Just about any common galactic species that breathes a Type I atmosphere could be found here.
  • Population: Scattered survivors scrounge out a living amid the ashes.
  • Demographics: Indigenous cultural groups are listed below.
  • Primary Languages: Galactic Basic and Binary; Chaldeans are said to speak Basic with a distinct Inner Rim accent.
  • Culture: Despite the grim conditions of life on Chaldea, pockets of civilization do exist, and the culture which germinates within them holds many of the same values of the past. Religion remains a vital component of everyday life, and members of the clergy play important roles in their communities. Preservation of the old world has become an ongoing mission of many scholars; their efforts are supported by the Potentium. While the locals are not inherently hostile toward outsiders, they are more suspicious of Force Users. Anyone who claims to be a Sith or Dark Side User is considered an enemy. Chaldeans are also very wary of Jedi and may attempt to run them out of town. Jedi who attempt to recruit from among the Chaldeans are met with hostility and even violence.
GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
  • Government: Feudalism; local communities are governed by their own leaders with their own laws. There is no planetary government, though the Chaldean Potentium still functions in an extremely limited (relative to their former power and influence) capacity.
  • Affiliation: Chaldean Potentium
  • Wealth: Low
  • Stability: Low
  • Freedom & Oppression: The divisions among Chaldeans haven't healed so much as they have simply become irrelevant, with people realizing that they pose more of a hindrance to the survival of settlements and communities than a boon. Xenophobia is still relatively common, and hostility toward Force Users is still going strong.
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
  • Military: The Chaldean military was greatly decimated by the dragon attacks. The planetary fleet "disappeared" at around the same time, their fate unknown. Outposts and forts are scattered and have been forced to become self-sufficient to ensure their continued operation. The warriors of the Potentium, including the Order of the Mystics and the Paladins, have become errant knights wandering the countryside.
  • Technology: Galactic Standard
HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Chaldea’s only native sentient species is the Bamarri. Born under extremely specific conditions, no more than two living specimens have ever coexisted at the same time, forming not a society so much as a lonesome vigil over the planet’s ecosystems. They share a strange (and often strained) symbiosis with the Chaldean dragons, semi-sentient creatures whose role is to engage in the periodic destruction of those same ecosystems.

For the average galactic citizen indifferent to such esoteric alien concepts, Chaldea's history truly begins with the arrival of the first colonists around a thousand years ago. Many of them were pilgrims, particularly of the Potentium and the Open Hand, seeking religious freedom away from the wary eyes of the Jedi Order. Religion would thus become the defining feature of the civilization they built upon Chaldea. It was Potentiates who established the Chaldean University, which would become the heart of the planet's capital city, Nezamiyeh; the planet's governing body would derive its name from them. But it was the Open Hand who would ultimately seize political power, laying the groundwork for a future theocracy.

Despite the rise of the Galactic Empire two centuries after the colony's founding, Chaldea remained outside imperial influence and was largely unaffected by the tyrannical rule of Emperor Palpatine. After the Empire's fall, however, the New Republic began efforts to extend their power and influence into the Unknown Regions. The effects of this on Chaldea varied; the planet benefited greatly from more trade opportunities and mass immigration, but it also exacerbated tensions between the Potentium and those belonging to other religions. In addition, opening their world to the rest of the galaxy also meant that they were not insulated from the ravages of the Gulag Plague.

During the Reconstruction Era, they offered shelter and work to drifters, reformed criminals, and displaced refugees. This was done out of necessity as the population had been severely depleted by the Plague. However, friction between outsiders and Potentiates resulted in increasingly violent clashes. Eventually the conflict exploded into an all-out war for control over the planet’s government. The Chaldean Civil War, as it came to be known, lasted four years and resulted in the deaths of one in three Chaldeans. The Chaldean Potentium fought against an alliance of political activists, a “terrorist” group known as the Children of the Force, and (allegedly) secret agents of the Sith. The Potentium ultimately emerged victorious, and as a result all Force Users were banned from the planet.

After the civil war, Chaldea went into rapid decline. Reconstruction was slow going, and natives left in droves, seeking better lives and greater opportunities elsewhere. The seemingly endless wars between various factions elsewhere in space brought refugees to the anonymity and relative safety of the region, only for the Chaldean government to abuse and disenfranchise them. The Potentium was found to have engaged in sentient rights abuses, and actions were taken by the Galactic Alliance to prevent further harm against the populace. The Potentium responded to the intervention by preparing for war.

Then, the dragons awoke.

Unwittingly aided by a Bamarri named Kai, the dragons laid waste to both the Potentium and the GA’s forces before moving on to civilian targets. The resulting conflagration was the largest in recorded history, and was tantamount to an apocalypse. Millions of Chaldeans were killed within a matter of hours, including Toloth Threepwood, who represented Chaldea in the Alliance Senate, as well as Kai himself. The Potentium collapsed and the Alliance turned its efforts to evacuating the survivors.

Today, Chaldea is a ghost planet—but it is not devoid of life. Small pockets of civilization remain, and the underwater Finfolk community was largely unaffected by the dragon attack. Essonian refugees have found a new home on Chaldea; their martial culture is well-suited to dealing with the dragon activity.
 
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:: HERO of KORRIBAN ::
Jacen Nimdok Jacen Nimdok

I apologize for taking a couple extra days to get back to you. Thank you so much for your patience!

I am still training so this will need an additional review before it receives a final approval.

As usual, great work on tackling the planet submission. There are some things I think we do either need to address or expand on, so let’s jump into it, shall we?

No. 1. MAJOR IMPORTS

Under this section you mention a few things that could use some clarification:

  • Industrial Materials: What kind of materials do you mean here? Do you mean ores, metals, wires, etc?
  • Luxury Items: Could provide examples of what you mean here as well.

No. 2. MAJOR EXPORTS

This section mentions people as a major export. In what way are they a major export? Do you mean slaves? If you could define specifically what you mean in this section that would be awesome!

No. 3. UNEXPLOITED RESOURCES

Again here… what kind of lumber and plant products… rubber, sap, bark, maple syrup? etc… what kind of products are unexploited?

Everything else seems to check out for me. If you could work on this for me and tag me when you are done we should be able to bump this up for the secondary!
 
:: HERO of KORRIBAN ::
Jacen Nimdok Jacen Nimdok

Thank you sir. On Major imports could you list out some of the ores you might be importing for me.

Also let's talk about the people here... mainly the Emigrants. I could understand why you would want to put this here as an export because people are leaving the planet for whatever reason. However, I am not sure it fits as an export.

An export is something which is a good, service, or commodity that is sold abroad. So if the people are leaving and the government is not selling them I am not sure listing them here is going to work.

Perhaps stability would be a place to make a note that this is happening and why it is happening. Unless I am misunderstanding something and people are being sold?
 
Judah Lesan Judah Lesan I have removed the Emigrants from exports.

On the other hand, I'm questioning why I'm being asked for specific ores in imports. I could understand if you were requesting specific exports, but I would think it would be assumed that most ores not found on the planet already must be imported?

Finally, I would like to ask for an extension on this sub. I planned on making other companion subs to go along with it and flesh things out in the future, but am now realizing that it needs more work overall.
 
:: HERO of KORRIBAN ::
Jacen Nimdok Jacen Nimdok

That’s an easy question to answer. The template specifically asked for ores to be specified.

Major Imports: [What the planet frequently buys from other planets. Common materials and ores should just be listed (Ex. Durasteel ore), while anything special or rare should be linked.]

As far as the extension, would you like me to move this to the pre-codex while you work on it?
 
:: HERO of KORRIBAN ::
Jacen Nimdok Jacen Nimdok

Everything looks good. You seem to have covered the edits I was looking for the first time around so thank you!

There is one quick thing. It seems you have added an image to the submission which was not there before, without adding the appropriate image credit for it. If you could add that for me I think we will be able to bump this up for a secondary!
 
Jacen Nimdok Jacen Nimdok | Judah Lesan Judah Lesan

This is a really good clean submission guys, good work on it so far. I just had 2 questions I wanted to clarify before passing this up to approval.

1) System Features

You mention the "Bysshians, a species of sentient gas "bubbles"." however I've been unable to locate a Wookieepedia entry for them. Is there a codex species submission for the species?

2) Native Species

In this section you mention the "moonfleeters" are these a canon species or does a chaos submission exist for them?
 
Pre-Codex Template
Name of Submission: Chaldea
Link to Submission: Here
Reason For Move to Pre-Codex: To add links to other subs that have been made since its approval, and probably do a general overhaul and update the lore. Maybe add/remove some images as well.

Moved to pre-codex per OP request.

Please remember to include a list of changes made when you tag a member of codex staff to move the submission back to live judgement.
 
Judah Lesan Judah Lesan Srina Talon Srina Talon John Locke John Locke

Chaldea changes are as follows:
  • Added a Lore sub under Links.
  • Added three art images with captions and linked credit under Image Source.
  • Added various sub links to Cities.
  • Added the Sky Harbor location under Nezamiyeh.
  • Added two new species subs under Native Species.
  • Edits/elaboration to Culture section.
  • Government type changed to Theocracy.
  • Freedom & Oppression elaborated upon.
  • Completely rewrote the Historical Information section.
There may be other minor edits that I made but forgot about; virtually the entire sub was tweaked, updated, or refined.
 

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