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Approved Planet Traedaris

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Traedaris
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
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  • Intent: To act as a staging ground for a new species.
  • Image Credit: X
  • Canon: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: [Embedded]
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Planet Name: Traedaris
  • Demonym: N/A
  • Region: Tingel Arm
  • System Name: Traelvarren
  • System Features: The Sun; Trad and a singular Moon - Padpad.
  • Location: [X]
  • Major Imports: N/A
  • Major Exports: N/A
  • Unexploited Resources: Methane, fossil fuels, aurodium, frasium, songsteel
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
  • Gravity: Standard
  • Climate: Cold, with high concentrations of methane in the air - making it poisonous for most species. Additionally, the sky is often home to various electro-magnetic storms, hidden by the methane in the sky. Making it a treacherous planet to attempt to traverse.
  • Primary Terrain: The planet is a mixture of long stretches of sea, with rocky mountainous hillsides and shores underneath which lies a vast stretch of volcanic activity, backed by continental glaciers that freeze over various islands to create a singular massive pack ice continent.
  • Atmosphere: Type III
LOCATION INFORMATION
  • Capital City: Targarat
  • Planetary Features: Fishing ports, crashed warships in the tundra's, deserted stone and wooden cities on the pack-ice islands.
  • Major Locations:
- Ungarat: This is more of a collection of cities, rather than a capital. As a pre-industrial world, the native Ungulloi have many cities of varying ages and advancements in technology, making their capital a mess of interconnected but divided civilisations of Ungulloi almost like tribes.
- Targarat: Targarat is a Bryn'adûl Super Construct, built adjacent to the old Capital city. When the Bryn'adûl found the pre-industrial species they deigned to recruit them into their Empire, a new era rising for the Bryn as the new species began their integration through the assistance in the creation of the massive city. Targarat is vast, containing many 're-education' centres for the Ungulloi. And it ispowered by the volcanic activity below.
POPULATION
  • Native Species: Ungulloi
  • Immigrated Species: Draelvasier
  • Population: Heavy
  • Demographics: The population is roughly 90:10 ratio in favour of the Ungulloi.
  • Primary Languages: Draelvasier
  • Culture: The culture of the Ungulloi was once that of a rabidly out of control blood feud that never ended. Their species is now being integrated or, assimilated into the Bryn'adûl way of life. The Ungulloi leadership, bending the knee to the towering Draelvasier. The proto-industrial species, otherwise untouched by the Galaxy were amazed by the raw technological and biological prowess of the Draelvasier. Through gifts of structure, order and evolution the Ungulloi also accepted militarisation and radicalisation. An inherently submissive but cunning species, adopting to the way of the Bryn'adûl. As the old capital city was replaced, the species migrated to Targarat's foundations, having a hand in its construction.
GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
  • Government: Militant, Meritocratic and occult.
  • Affiliation: The Bryn'adûl
  • Wealth: None | Wealth is not a concept shared by those under the rule of the Bryn.
  • Stability: High
  • Freedom & Oppression: The Ungulloi quickly came to understand that the Draelvasier and the Bryn'adûl were not only their friends, but their superiors and commanders also. Whilst most Ungulloi freshly hatched trulybelieve in their ways, there are those that remember the days before the black and crimson ships of the Bryn hung in the sky. Any free expression beyond what is curated by the Bryn'adûl is harshly forbidden. However, as a new species entering the Bryn'adûl they have been granted a seat on the Ish'makra. This allows the Ungulloi a voice, holding onto their traditions that can co-exist with the way of the Drael.
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
  • Military: Whilst not a military world, the Bryn'adûl's fleets remain in orbit to ensure that the Ungulloi know who is in charge. Additionally, the planet's civilisation is now protected by the traditional benefits of the Super-Construct on the planet. However, it is early days yet as to how the Ungulloi will fit into the Bryn'adûl militarily.
  • Technology: Bryn'adûl Standard | The world uses the Drael technology, comparable to Galactic Standard. Alongside this, there are still elements of the Ungulloi's proto-industrial technologies, utilising steam and coal inventions such as systems comparable to trains.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION:
Traedaris, home to the proto-industrial species known as the Ungulloi. Within the last four hundred years the Ungulloi have developed into land-walking creatures, quickly evolving as a species into isolated civilisations. Living on such a harsh world, has forced the Ungulloi to rapidly evolve into a proto-industrial society, using the planets isolated volcanic activity to stay warm in the merciless winters. Tradedaris' native populace has remained hidden for these many years because of the dense maze of
methane in the sky and electro-magnetic storms, hiding the planet and its wondrous landscape from the eyes of most of the Galaxy alongside the fact the Ungulloi's technology simply doesn't emit any passive radio-waves.

Only in recent years under the surveillance of the Bryn'adûl has the local populace evolved enough to be noticeable from orbit. When the Bryn'adûl arrived, their scouting parties performed surveillance activities in secret under the new directive of the Chieftain himself. Upon arrival, Tathra Khaeus and his larger group had annoyed a native creature that preyed on the Ungulloi; it made the small natives aware of the stalking, massive red beings when the Chieftain was forced to cut down the beast.

Thus began the introduction of the two species. In the Ungulloi, the Draelvasier saw the mirror of themselves, whilst drastically different biologically, they were a species persevering against the odds.
 
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Tathra Khaeus Tathra Khaeus

Haha okay two pings back to back. This is just about good to go I think. The only real issue I have is with unexploited resources. In the Historical Information section you link methane... which is easily an example of unexploited resources. N/A as you have it labeled literally would assume the planet has ZERO resources that could be exploited by anyone.

I am going to need you to flesh out that section before this can be passed up for a secondary review.
 
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